D.K. Daniels

Thanks lol; I found time to spew out a new story in between four novels Though I should check out Paper Walls to figure out what I wrote, or their lack of. I kid... Though thanks for introducing me to a new story, I should give it a read sometime

Great representation of time; after all its all we have. Nothing stays the same; everything ticks upward until were unsure when the final tick will take place. Years pass by at an alarming state; when you are old enough to understand that you wish to be young again, you feel nostalgily old. Though when you are young, all you want to be is old, so where is the in-between.

What a cute; adorkable kind of tale. I rather enjoyed the awkward interactions between both parties. The moment Logan glanced up from the book; after Robbie read the poetry it became abundantly clear that Robbie is is secret admirer. I guess I’d be on the same thinking pedestal as Robbie; Valentine’s Day is quite a weird holiday. We choose to tell the ones we love for one day of the year; what happened to the other 364 days lol. I tease; nothing wrong with the holiday, it’s just a funny money racket. It was totally adorable how his mood shifted after the realsisation kicked in. I hope the boys had a memorable first date, where butterflies would destroy the movie experience, and jitters would start to form. Keep up the awesomeness @Comicality, it’s what you do best.

True you grow an attachment to your characters. Though I can't help but throw everything bad in their direction. I guess the more obstacles you have in your way the more intriguing it gets. Obstacles in a way make your reader feel the torment your character is going through, if you end a sad chapter trying yourself then you've known you done something right lol.

Nice short @Comicality; I think most closeted gays understand this. 9 times of 10, we recognize the signs; though sometimes were completely blown away when someone says their gay and you're like "get da fu*k out of here." It has even failed me; my gaydar. I sat beside a guy a year younger than me in University for four months before I picked up on it. He was talking about Beyonce and then everything fell into place. I felt stupid for not picking up on it sooner lol; anyway, keep up the awesomeness.

Ah cool, I see. It just felt like you missed an opportunity to put her in danger, it would have been cool to give the readers a little tingle of what could happen, then she makes it through to the other side. Yes true if you are sleep deprived and hungry among other things, I guess devising a plan is the last of your problems.

It is never too late when writing a book, I've changed content loads of times. A writer who accepts that they are finished, are most likely not. But you could always add vines in for personal amusement, sometimes if I release a story, when I go back for editing or personal reasons I always add something I'd find amusing.

I guess so, but some people just want peace; people get sick of fighting. So I guess if Noah just wanted peace he would just want to make up and move on with his life. Thanks for reading

Great start for a compelling idea. Looking forward to more

Cool story Comicality; brings back a couple of memories of a few friends I knew who used to be photo crazy. Secretly of course you’d admire them; never talk to them, but go week in the knees when you actually saw them in person. Though yes keeping pictures is a new level of obsession. We’ve jumped over the bridge separating infatuation and went straight for the “I'm in the backseat of your car” kind of scenario lol. Keep up the work

Hey James good chapter, although I was little confused as to why she needed to go near the fairy house at all, distinctively in it. Was there a big wall or something running through the entire forest, acting as a divider. I must say I'm jealous of her agility show, I wish I could run and write at the same time.

Great chapter; it shows more curiosity among both boys. I remember when I was in school a couple of people asked me did I have ginger pubes considering my hair is ginger, to which I'd brazenly rebuke that none of your business. It is the simple things that make stories come alive and believe you nailed it all here... Nailed it. Everyone was worried about their first time and if you were either not worried, disappointed or embarrassed then you are surely lying. I thought I'd never get to the end of the series but now that I'm at the end it's saddening. I guess I'll wait around until you decide to finish the story, then again that might go quicker since I spend my week's writing, but editing is a nightmare. Above all, I loved the innocence and energy of confusion, combined with infatuation you brought into this story. Keep doing what you do so naturally; authentically.

Another great chapter Comicality, the days I used to be a blundering mess came to light in this chapter. The secretness of wanting that other person and all the distractions working against you. Then when you finally get that moment the entire world just ceases to exist. I like how you described the actual sexual experience it flowed quite innocently. I like that about this story its feel like you lost, but you captivated at the same time regardless. Anyway keep up all the awesome work, I know you have a lot of projects in the works. Truly I know how you must feel, but I don't have that many in the works. Writing is your medium, I remember reading somewhere that you wished to become an actor, I guess whatever you'll turn your attention to will captivate people. Storytelling is your medium, so stick with it. Regardless if it's writing, theatre or on the silver screen.

Little sisters and brothers, what would you do with them. You love them, yet still hate them, there an integrated part of life. Though selling them to a circus has opened up a new way of thinking for my little brothers. Great chapter comicality, I too would be maniacal after engaging in a makeout session with a boy who is so smooth talking. it obvious Deme has a way with words, though I somehow have a feeling that you have put a little bit of yourself into the whole idea of the cutie being a poet/writer. Those feelings for intense make-outs and extreme horniness hit hard when your new to this sort of activity. Ah to be young, even though I'm not all that old, I'd happily re-live my teenage years again, on video... Keep up the awesomeness :)

I definitely got the impression of stillness from that chapter alright. That was a great chapter Comicality, it was too cute. I loved the playful teasing beforehand between both boys, it made it feel authentic. I guess when we were all that age we secretly hoped for a boy like Deme to walk into our lives. The secretive lingo between the both brings back some fond memories when you'd sneak around your parents and friends just to be together. Let's hope their agreement "to be" establishes a bond that with future the boy's happiness. I began to fall in love with the story; I cant say I have felt the emotions of love from a story in a quite a while, so for that you have my thanks

I for one always have the desire to make people happy, I can relate to the part where you feel like you have to entertain people, then afterward your mentally exhausted. As much as I love people, I love to see them go. I loved how you captured the feeling of teenage jitters; my first date with another boy went something a little like that. We went to the cinema to see a movie and all along in the back of my head I was asking myself does he want to hold hands, should I just reach over and take his hand. Does he want to even hold hands and beneath all that I refused to eat popcorn with the hand I wanted to hold his with? Of course, the boner alert kicked off for no reason at all and I got this rush of giddiness within me; even though the boner patrol where out in large numbers to stop me from embarrassing myself. ah, the sweet moments. I'm still with the same boy though, it's been how many years now... I think it might appear that Deme is a hopeless romantic, the poetic type which fits his character. So how can you not help falling in love, never mind swoon? Keep up the awesome work comicality

Awha... I guess its something I have to consider, this story was just a whim. I never really thought much of it other than telling a short about two boys trying to find the courage to reconnect. I guess it is inevitable that I have to continue it at some time or another. I'll let you know when I get around to it I find the inspiration to finish it after my saga franchise is complete.Though I feel that the special appeal might wear off by expanding on the idea.

So sweet, tender and written with passion. Great chapter, I loved the little teasing antics between Shane and his sister. Though the nervousness conveyed between both boys almost feels like your there in the moment with them. Everyone can relate to those moments. The first time you ever admit you like another boy, and they were that close to you. The jitters, the anticipation and the hammering heart in your ribcage. I loved how you described Demes outlook on writing, as a writer also it just feels natural to be as honest as you possibly can. I was able to relate to how you wrote it, I think personally you were writing from the heart at that moment, for what writing means to you. Writing for a writer is therapeutic. By the time we leave this life we will have been hundreds of people, living through the characters we create. Keep up the awesome work comicality, I can't wait to read more.

Yeah, I'd had been in his sister's shoes too when I was his age. You gotta look the part when a cute boy was about. Then again I can relate to ditching school over a boy, funny really. He was feeling down and I liked him so I ditched to make him feel better, the things we do for love aye. Oh and yeah I'd run for the hills if my mother ever embarrassed me like that with underwear, that's like sacred material when it comes to crushes. I'm really enjoying this story Comicality, I just need to get around to finishing Billy Chase on Kindle, my is it a long series.

Oh darn, Hansel and Gretel will be a brewed concoction by the time she makes it to the next house in the middle of the woods. I can't wait to see what she has to say to Dianna

Well yes walking is awesome but Nessa is a fairy how awesome would it be to fly- oh yeah... well there's bound to be vines she can go Tarzan out of.

Sounds like the World of Warcraft peasants talking when the servant came forward and spoke "yes, my lord. Anything you wish, my lord." Only to be followed by - "what more work," or "I'll get right on it governor." Ah well, we'll just call this extra content, it could be an alternative ending lol.

Morumpi could have possibly trying to better himself, that's what I mean about best interests. Though then again there could be the odd notion that he would be trying to save Nessa from a horrible foreseeable invasion of the fairies. Yeah in some culture murder is murder, though it depends on what fairy you speak to, right. I mean they probably wouldn't have a problem going neck to neck with the antagonist. Sometimes cultures have to leave their customs behind in order to survive and that's only accomplished through fighting, though everyone much prefers the problem just floated away.

Awha, we've gotta make the name almost holy like so that she considers it noble like to choose. I love solitude, its possibly one the best things I know that I can truly delve into if I turn everything off socially. Then again I cant go a day without listening to music, music is a drug on my end. Though there have been times when I have been isolated and that's the impression I got.

It almost feels as if your reliving my teenage years. I was a shy lad, with red hair surprisingly and I can relate to problems of trying to make sure I didn't have any stragglers and don't get me started about summer. I loved being outdoors a great deal and by the end of summer, I was like a polka dot mannequin with an abundance of sandy freckles. Loving the story so far, can't wait to read the rest of it