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  1. Higster

    Chapter 31

    Always good to hear Cj getting what he deserves. Sad to see Trouble part from Corey but I guess he is right about him and how he is with pets.
  2. Higster

    Chapter 29

    Holy s**t that ending had my jaw drop!
  3. Higster

    Chapter 28

    I'm nervous about reading more to see what happens when he outs himself to Cj. Clinton really will be shocked...
  4. Higster

    Chapter 27

    Cj is literally the worst, he's so rude and dosent deserve Clinton at all really. Clinton is scared of Cj and that's easily seen by his hesitation to stand up to him. Jenny was just giving Cj what he deserved, let's be honest.
  5. Higster

    Chapter 23

    Had a feeling Greg would be coming back, just at the time to make things interesting too! Really looking forward to how things are going to play out!
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    Chapter 22

    Had a feeling that wasn't the end of the motorbike. Corey seems so aloof at times its odd. He wants to get out of his dads way but then is often finding ways to seclude himself. He sure is a character and a half.
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    Chapter 19

    I imagine writing a character like him would be very fun to write about, thinking of more and more ideas about what he will do etc.
  8. Higster

    Chapter 20

    Clinton seems to really want it to work, which is great. Have a feeling it could work but will be more complicated than what Clinton is describing, especially with CJ coming back in the frame.
  9. Higster

    Chapter 19

    Had a feeling he'd stand up to his father eventually. Sadly it ended the way it did, with his father losing his temper. His Dad is not a good man.
  10. Higster

    Chapter 17

    His father is so mean. Really allows you to feel empathetic towards Corey and the way he's been brought up. His mother on the other hand is really thoughtful and understanding.
  11. Higster

    Chapter 16

    So happy to see them both back together and not totally freaked out at each other like they were in the morning.
  12. Higster

    Chapter 14

    So sad to hear about the store and what is going to happen in the future...
  13. Higster

    Chapter 10

    Of all the people to be spending time with Corey, You sure would not expect CJ's best friend... Maybe Clinton sees something in Corey that he couldn't see before. Like a sudden change in his mind about him.
  14. Higster

    Chapter 9

    So sad to see how Greg and Corey's friendship has eroded so quickly...
  15. Higster

    Chapter 7

    It happened! I imagined it would've taken more time due to Corey seemingly thinking nothing of the hints he was given and pushing it to the back of his mind.
  16. Higster

    Chapter 6

    Corey does seem to be adding fuel to the fire that is his and Jenny's friendship. In the end all could go wrong because Corey wasn't honest with her, but at the same time Jenny was seen with CJ so....
  17. Higster

    Chapter 3

    His parents are almost opposite in the way they view things.
  18. Higster

    Chapter 1

    Enjoyed this Chapter, really sets the scene well.
  19. Higster

    Epilogue

    Incredible story with a twist of an ending, thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
  20. Higster

    Chapter 10

    What an ending to this Chapter wow!
  21. Higster

    Chapter 7

    Well, that was a Chapter and a half, so many twists and turns!
  22. Higster

    Chapter 5

    Wow. David has really taken a turn, at first you feel sorry for him but now you feel like he's manipulating Oliver in some way.
  23. Higster

    Chapter 4

    Oliver and David's parents really aren't good people, they say they know what's best but they are just messing their kids up the more they treat them the way they do. The encounter between Jessica and the Martins sure did point out that their strange attitude towards both their kids and how they interact with others.
  24. Higster

    Chapter 3

    David and Oliver's parents sure are strange... Frank's interactions with David were great to read. The end of the Chapter really got me felling sad for both Oliver and David as they were being treated so badly when they had done so little...
  25. Higster

    Chapter 2

    Ah, all looks good and then Mrs Martin....
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