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It happened! Yes! Made me very happy to see Stefan come out to him and then them both know they love each other! Although it's all good now, the morning is near and it looks like hiding is no longer an option...
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Chapter 41 Back to School
Higster commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 41 Back to School
Zander using Mary Ellen to look "normal" kind of confuses me but oh well I guess it seems he's still in the closet (however I feel he may have just told Kaz + Terry due to what they did at lunch) -
Chapter 38: Christmas Eve
Higster commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 38: Christmas Eve
All to say to this Chapter is well done, this Chapter was fascinating to read and truly allowed for great development to take place. -
All seemed to be going moderately well and then it all goes wrong... Really makes you feel for him...
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I liked this Chapter a lot. Especially the ending. I thought it really indicated the impact his Dads isolation has had on him through his life.
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Terry is eventually going to do something and Stefan will probably not know what to do, I can feel it as she's getting more and more persistent with asking him to do things.
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Chapter 28: Settling In
Higster commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 28: Settling In
Stefan once again is doing very well at hiding in plain sight, I guess after being on the run for so long he's learnt how to mask himself so easily. Two things here - lunch boy will be a problem, as he's sure to slip up sometime soon when lunchboy is near him (as he sees him a lot) and Mrs Majorie will probably get more and more suspicious like how Ambrose was when he was with Eustace. -
Back to his nomadic ways. Sad it couldn't last long with Eustace, it seemed they were really getting on well + Toby and Stefan were just on the road back to restoring their friendship.
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Good to see Toby and Stefan doing well and speaking after what was an eventful night. Stefan still gets very nervous when he slips up slightly, a trait his father has implemented into him because of the awful way he treated him.
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So great to see him progressing, whereas not so long ago it looked like he was getting worse and worse.
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Finally, a stroke of luck for poor Stefan. Even though its not perfect he's getting money and has found a place to sleep and has no reason to be nomadic in his ways.
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God what a poor encounter he had to induce in this chapter... He really can't catch a break huh....
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So sad to hear he has to do the things he has to do, all because of the police convicting him of murdering his father...
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Drifting further and further from Carlsberg. Worried about him due to the lack of money and the place he's at. Needs money or food or both quickly.
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The dream that he describes at the end of the chapter really had me feeling sorry for him. In very bad conditions and he finds something which makes him happy, he has hope.
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Both bads and goods have came from his fathers death. He's no longer getting the "parenting" he was receiving whilst living with his father, however no he's wanted by the police for something he hasn't done and there's also rumours being spread about him, so even if he goes back to the police and hands himself in he'll practically be screwed because he'll just suffer the same abuse if he's convicted - in prison and if he's "lucky" enough to not be convicted he'll just receive lots of crap off of people at school and probably have a load of encounters similar to the ones he's had with Ackerman. He is one unfortunate bugger.
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Wow. So much injustice in this Chapter, it hurts.
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Stefan's family just all seem very messed up.
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This sure is a dark story. Interesting though and I'm happy a story like this is in first person.
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Great story that definitely deserves a read. Story really does well in expressing Corey's inner thoughts and feelings. The story really has you wanting to read more with twists that have you shocked and wanting to move onto the next chapter. The story itself allows you to easily understand the point of view of the character and allows you to connect with the different characters. The wide variety of personalities compliments the story throughout. Overall it was a great read and I would advise others to read this story too.
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Great story with a great ending.
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Such a cute ending to the chapter.
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Corey's dad honestly has gotten better, can't believe he stood up for Corey in front of all those people. What an awful petition...
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I don't see why they are so annoyed about him seeing Clinton , same with Clinton's parents. I can understand being angry about sneaking out but you really can't blame them when you're making it hard for them to see each other.
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Corey's dad seemed like a very changed man in that talk. Wow.
