I really like the whole slow development that is shown in this Chapter and I really like the way the conflicting emotions is expressed through his thoughts and actions.
Entertaining to read, love his relationship with the director and how he's often brutally honest with some parts. That part at the end definitely changed the scene ( see what I did there, ok ill just leave lol).
Wow. Was certain this dispute would take longer than this, how is he going to deal with TJ now? We shall have to see. This just got even more interesting and I have an image in my mind as to what may happen in the future.
Good opening, straight into the action. His feelings for Vincent though, so sad because he knows he can't return them. This is the problem with messing around with people I guess because one can develop feelings for the other and the other may not be able to return the same feelings.
Fantastic story, very well written. The way the writer expresses characters feelings and relationships really allows the reader to connect with the characters. The shifts in the story are done very well and I would recommend this story to others. Ending was done beautifully, leaving you to want more.
That detective really is something else huh? You'd think a detective would be the one to keep his mouth quiet about situations such as this, but he's done this twice now!
This Chapter was great, it really showed Claire as a very caring person and I'm not sure how to describe Will really... I feel sorry for Jayden, being in a position in which he can't say anything because his cousins threatened him. Having a blind main character will be very interesting to read and I'm looking forward to seeing how this story progresses.
Good Opening to the story. I Liked the flashbacks to their past which explained how they're in the situation they're in now. Will seems I don't know, shady? That stuff he did in the bathroom had me preparing for the worst. Really makes you think about the future.
Brilliant Story, with a beautiful ending. The chapters will have your emotions tossed and turned around constantly, leaving you wanting to read more and more. Characters are very well done and all unique in their own way. The story overall is fascinating, written by a very gifted writer.
OK! Eric actually did it! I really didn't think he would have but he did! Twoey what are you doing? Eric really is a massive asshole, I really thought the speculation from Mike was nothing until this Chapter. Eric couldn't just listen to him?
Okay, Eric is messing Twoey up! What on Earth happened? He was so bright and smiley and wanted to be with his friends and now he's always with Eric and is even getting picked on! Eric is the opposite of boyfriend material huh. David discovering what he probably never wanted to hear made me sad... At least he has someone to comfort him, as many don't.