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Veikko - "The Dark Angel"
AusGlitterati commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Veikko - "The Dark Angel"
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AWWWWWWW friend that was actually such a beautiful story ❤️ I know the comments were irreverant, but I wholeheartedly loved the entire lot. I'm so glad that there's a sequel! I look very forward to seeing more of these two. Even if there were no sequel, the ending was perfect. You're a talented writer indeed and I'm excited to read more of what you've published and then some!
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I got through this whole chapter without saying "awwwwww." (That's a vicious lie.) Adam's such a sweetheart and I'm hoping against all odds that both boys get another chance. ❤️
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Wow. That consultation with Hiri was free of charge and Adam still didn't get his money's worth. The stranger and the mystery man. It's kind of sweet, actually! But I'm ready for them to get more intimate now
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Kaleo's story is more engrossing to me (at this point) than Adam's - it's still early, though! Regarding your last few times - https://www.quotemaster.org/Scary+Movie#&gid=1&pid=16
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I really, really wanna to go to Poa! The relationship between the two is already so enchanting. I can't wait to see more. I'm a little worried the time they'll have will be all too brief! But getting here so late kind of spoils that. Great chapters! I did indeed go "awww"
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How did you know I was going all "awww" 😏
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I especially enjoyed the retelling of the suitcase incident through the eyes of both men! Neat introduction - short & sweet, but delightfully poignant. I'm excited to read more about them!
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Aww ❤️ he does have a lot going on. He's a good boy. Hahaha Zack is a total meme Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it
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Is angry a good thing? XD I suppose I'm down with it! As long as they make you feel something! Well, you know the saying - ogres have layers He has origins like everyone else! I'm keeping a lid on some of them for now. If it makes you feel better, he's hardly a supervillain. He's still just a teenager with a (nasty) personality disorder. He's probably not immune to being beaten to a pulp! Haha Yeah! And since Dom used them to intentionally overdose, Maverick is probably just one person who is going to be upset about that. Thank you! ❤️ Sincerely! ❤️
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😍I'm glad! This chapter took me a long time and I was terrified that it would be poorly received! Because as much as I adore Veikko (like all my characters) he's a real dick. I suppose the writing might be a bit on the wall for now. A couple of people mention in passing that Veikko's only viable method of defense is offense. He's tired of being a victim and he has to throw the first stone. Yeah Dom deserves better. Huge thanks for another delightful comment, friend ❤️
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Aww I'm sure both Dominic and Topher will be good for each other! I agree on the subject of his friends. He's right to feel let down. Veikko has a lot of growing to do. LOL choosing Topher over Chris? Personally I would never but there is method to his madness. It is a cute accent! Kinda common here, too.
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Good! I don't know what I'd think if you were skipping over the moon with joy. XD It's a bad situation no matter how you look at it, and Topher's father is brushing it under the carpet, which is the worst path you could take imo. You don't know Dom and Veikko yet! But... probably yes, definitely Thank you for reading ❤️ means a lot! And the comment too
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Yeah while words are thrown around to describe Matsuda's perpersonality disorder, Dom's one of the few who genuinely understands all it means. Something I also meant to put across in this and recent chapters (but I fear I didn't do it well enough) is why Maverick is baiting Dom, but that'll come up again in Maverick's next chapter. Good eye! If Dom lost most of his fears but is still concerned of Maverick's intentions with Veikko, that implies a lot about his views on both of them. "The way Veikko's whole body quivered and shook in his arms, the sounds he'd make and the expressions on his pretty face when they went the full distance..." Yeah Haha I was hoping this came across the right way. Good! It's a multifaceted fight they're having that goes deeper than "Veikko doesn't care." That is definitely intended to be the case. And if you picked up on that, I did a good job! It's a big part of why Tayn is so militant in managing Dom. ❤️ the best kind of relationship! Does Topher like Dom back or is he just a honey bunny? Difficult for Dom to discern. Maybe it's both? 😮 Thaaank you friend! ❤️ It was a lovely treat to wake up to! It's always a privilege to get such deep and elaborate comments. Enjoy your evening!
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Thursday, February 1st "Rei!" Veikko cried out, sitting up and panting. He was wet and panicked, and he flicked on his light. It was still dark. "Reima!" "Mmmm?" Reima rubbed his face and sat up in his bed. "Youkay?" Veikko choked on a sob, sitting back and hugging his knees to his chest under the confines of his blanket. He was shaking and starting to hyperventilate. "No, you're not okay," Reima slid out from under his blanket and padded over to his brother's bed. "Bad dream again?"
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There's no such thing as late! ❤️ I'm glad you're intrigued - I hope the story remains interesting for you Thank you very much for the review! Have a terrific day.
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Aww I'm sorry! Maybe not for your mental health - that six month hiatus and I would have been so painful you would have blocked me!
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This was really such a beautiful story, friend. ❤️ I thoroughly enjoyed it, and the ending was enchanting! I'm so happy for everyone - they all deserved the happy ending they got. I'm gonna bookmark it and probably return to it another day in the future! It was my privilege (A Brazilian hunk called Diego? I'm so into that!)
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What an ensemble you've collected over the course of twenty-three chapters! Aside from twitface, I'm so fond of all of them! Angela's the breakout for me, though. I really fell in love with her without expecting it! It'll be so hard to stop! :< Will you at least write a minimum of nine sequels?
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Hahaha the gays have certainly congregated, haven't they? There's so many of them! HAH Mason getting slapped in the face with a healthy bit of introspection was satisfying. Thank you for this chapter as well! There's a lot of POV switches and I enjoy that.
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Goodness me Trick does such a 180 when he gets his clothes off. Where does that even come from?? Oh dear 😳😳😏 Angela you did well! ❤️ I'm proud! Mason, I don't care what lessonz you learned, go away. The interview went so well and Cody's just an amazing boyf and ahhhhhhhhhhh why is this ending soon?
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HHAHAHA so did I, now I know it's not just me with that filthy mind I really hope Angela kicks Mason in the dangly bits. Anyone else fall in love with Cody more every chapter?
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You've done a terrific job with Mason, you know that? I looove a good villain! I often root for them! But when I see Mason's name I'm automatically furious! Go awayyy! He's like cancer's evil twin and I want him gone! 😠 This better end with him being tarred and feathered. Goddamn Trick, you've become a success between two chapters?? ❤️ Proud of yooou!
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Oh Anders hun I don't mean to criticise but when it comes to anything gay - homophobe or wannabe lover - you're as dead as the dodo. ❤️ Eep, poor little Trick still with the low self esteem. You deserve to be celebrated and loved, munchkin. @glennish @Bndmetl @Sam Wyer @BlindAmbition You guys need to calm down! I'm bordering dangerously close to rushing the next chapter to see the comment chain and not the rest of the story!! (And I bet you put on so much weight from all this sitting, eating and stalking )
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Can Mason for just five minutes not be an insufferable tool? There has to be a legal loophole that lets the boys savagely beat him to death, I'm sure. Good guy Anders for not putting up with his BS. Ain't nobody got time for homophobia or just general prattiness. The gay mentor thing between Cody and Tim continues to be adorable! And Zoe's prospects are looking bright - good guy Trick comes through again! If it were my story, Anders would go out of his way to use their past to drive a wedge between the boys and steal Trick for himself. I have to say, I am REALLY glad you're the one who authored this and not me. XD ❤️ It was another lovely chapter and I'm scared to finish!
