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  1. Mancunian

    Chapter 6

    I don't think it will cause any problems. 😀
  2. Mancunian

    Chapter 6

    I can assure readers that both neighbourhoods are different to each other and are nice neighbourhoods. (Yes we do spell neighbourhood differently, @raven1 is American spells it the American way. I am from the UK and spell it the UK way, both are correct.)
  3. Chapter 6 is posted and live with a bit of excitement and a couple of new characters, enjoy.
  4. Psst, the next chapter is up.
  5. Sitting on the back seat of the Focus, the brothers were engrossed in conversation. Charlie was excitedly telling Michael about the job he was due to start. Michael was happy for his brother, but in the back of his mind, he was also contemplating his chances of getting a job with his limited practical skills. As Stacy drove along Wilmslow Road, Jason asked, “Where does Gramps live?” “He lives in Withington not far from Spencer's garage. Charlie will pass close to his house going to and
  6. Slave driver.
  7. Mancunian

    Chapter 18 Peace

    Thank you kindly, good sir.
  8. Morning Terry, guess what I'll be doing in an hour or two.
  9. Well, we had a moment of calm, and then the storm between Drew and Spike started up again. There will never be an end to it.
  10. Don't beat yourself up over it. The plagiarist is the one at fault, not you. You were one of many hoodwinked by them.
  11. Mancunian

    Chapter 18 Peace

    Could Lucas have left it as a security measure? After all, an unwelcome stranger may not know of it or be told about and it could cause them injury, especially if they are going at speed and hit it.
  12. Read, commented on and appreciated my friend. Thank you for another great chapter.
  13. Mancunian

    Chapter 18 Peace

    Jubal is focusing on the positives he knows he can admit, that is what is giving him the energy and stamina to continue. He knows he has Lucas' friendship and Lucas has Jubal's love although he doesn't feel he can admit it. He is approaching the 'friendship' as a good man would approach a loving relationship, by asking himself, what can I bring to the table, and not, what can I get out of it? He may not realise it but he is laying the foundations for Lucas to make the first move, which is something that we all know Jubal will not do. Every single drop of blood, sweat and tears that Jubal spills on that land and in that house contains his love and ties him to it more, let's hope that Lucas sees that, before the skittishness of the wildings is triggered in Jubal and he flees. Jubal may want everything to be perfect for Lucas' return, including corraling the wildings, but Lucas will settle for the house being habitable. Hell, Lucas will settle for Jubal still being there. As for Reid and Billy, they have their own stories which I will be happy to read if they get written, and if they have a story together I'll be happy to read that one too. But for now, I'm happy reading about two good men who can have a good future if one of them pulls his finger out and says something. Sorry for rambling Gary, but there is so much to comment on. Thank you for another great chapter, one that hopefully brings Jubal and Lucas closer together.
  14. That's a beautiful city, they filmed some scenes for Oliver the musical there.
  15. The next chapter is ready to be posted tomorrow, I've got a good buffer so there will be no waiting. 😀
  16. That's way down south almost at the other end of the country. I haven't been there for years. It's a nice part of the country.
  17. Aloha Albert, the weather is cold, damp and dark skies, but I'm warm, dry and comfortable in doors. Writing, then checking, then rechecking, then writing some more and so it goes on.
  18. Then it begs the question, who or what has made them this crazy, you or your butlers with bums?
  19. Mancunian

    Chapter 3

    Thank you for sticking with us and commenting again, it really is appreciated. Unfortunately @raven1, my editor, said no to giving spoilers. .e ebn .ape. .y .outh do gever
  20. Mancunian

    Chapter 2

    I'm glad you are still with us and enjoying The Baxter Boys story. Charlie and Michael are very likeable lads and easy to get to know. They are good lads who have fallen on hard times, something which can easily happen to anyone. Thank you for commenting, I hope you continue to do so.
  21. Mancunian

    Chapter 1

    Hi Lee. I'm happy that you like the start of the story, as the author I'm hoping you will continue to read and enjoy it as many others do. I'm sure you will be able to keep up as this is the start of The Baxter Boys story. Each story in The Boot World is a stand-alone story, reading the other stories may help you to know some of the characters, but it isn't necessary. Thank you for reading and commenting, all comments are welcome.
  22. Good night my friend and sleep well.
  23. Mancunian

    Chapter 5

    Thank you for the wonderful summary of the story so far. I have to admit your re-christening and opinion of Dr Bowers had me laughing my head off, it's brilliant. I can't tell you what's in store for Charlie and Michael, my editor would probably whip me and cover me in duct tape. All I can say is this is a story about life, and life has its ups and downs. Thank you for your valued comments and for accepting my boys.
  24. Aloha my friend, hope your having a good day.
  25. Mancunian

    Chapter 5

    Yep, chapters will be posted Tuesday and Friday every week. I hope the readers will approve. 😀
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