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Ticklishboy30

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  1. They are out at school, they've just always had nicknames for each other.
  2. Mike and Robbie separated from their embrace and smiled. Robbie was about to take his stuff inside when Mike's hand on his wrist stopped him. The red-haired teen turned and gazed into his friend's eyes. He saw something he wasn't used to seeing, fear and apprehension. "Mikey, what's wrong?" Robbie softly asked. He set the things down on the porch and gave Mike his full attention. Mike deeply sighed as tears dripped down his cheeks. Robbie wrapped the emotional teen in his arms and ligh
  3. I'm really glad you loved it. I've had to make this story interesting. As I said to boylove, I felt the need to diversify the carnage, ya know, like a financial portfolio. LOL
  4. It takes a lot more to break those guys. LOL I'd hate to piss any of the guys off. LOL
  5. Mikey & Dakota No sooner had Dakota hung up than a boot slammed into his back, sending him facefirst into the dirt. "So, the big bad Redskin's not so tough without the brass behind him." Dakota shook his head and got to his feet. As soon as he turned to face his attacker, the man's fist plowed into the half Indian's cheek, sending him to the ground on his ass. The raven-haired cop rubbed his chin and glared at the portly man standing over him. "You're the guard. What the fuck
  6. Awesome clinical assessment of the situation, Chris.
  7. Don't worry, they'll be just fine. They've got awesome insurance, and a kickass security system and cameras that record and save to the hard drives. This was a surprisingly action packed chapter. I shock myself.
  8. Mikey & Dakota Dakota pulled up to the wrecked truck. He and Mikey gasped as tears fell when they saw the battered Ram. The couple jumped out and immediately surveyed the scene. Both men were careful not to disturb any possible evidence. "Where are the guys?" Mikey asked more to himself than to Dakota. The brunet wiped his eyes as he cautiously walked about the field. The grass was so tall that Mikey kept looking down and made sure he didn't step on either his brother or Will.
  9. Ticklishboy30

    Chapter 1

    Wow! I loved this story. It's sooo cute and adorable. Michael and Vincent are just amazingly sweet and love the playfulness that's usually missing in a story like this. Thanks for writing it.
  10. I think he can help Rhett. After all, if Levie doesn't press charges on the shooting, and they explain everything, I'm pretty sure he'll be okay. I loved Levie pointing out the flaws in Rhett's gun. LOL And, yes I had to get the shoot your eye out in there.
  11. Levie & Rhett The constant movement stirred the redhead. He slowly sat up and managed to keep from moaning or alerting the driver of the strange van to his awakening. Levie cautiously looked around and noticed the direction they were going. He knew they'd be passing the ranch if they continued in this direction. Looking down, he saw the man's gun and cell phone. The redhead pocketed them and made an escape plan. Many thoughts ran through Rhett's head. The most prominent being how t
  12. I'm so glad you loved Woodstock's showing up V. That was an idea that came to me right as I was typing out the scene. I wanted Cillian to have something material to show Devon why he wouldn't have made fun of him. At first I was gonna give him a unicorn with a rainbow colored horn, but I mentally smacked myself because Woodstock wasn't the first and most obvious thought for me. LOL "I loved Cillian saying he thought WS was just as ticklish as Snoopy. LOL The teens are sooo adorably child-like one minute and mature the next. And bringing out Sam's inner child and letting him have the freedom to explore his missed youth because he chose to be the Dad Devon deserved and needed is awesome. That's why I made Taylor a bit older than Sam, and have established him as the pseudo adult of the family. Not that Sam's not an adult, but he really deserves the chance to be the kid he gave up.
  13. Ticklishboy30

    Chapter 1

    This is an amazing start, I'm totally hooked. I love your descriptions, the emotional depth of your characters is on a level, many authors, myself included aspire to. I loved your quote from Shakespeare. The emotions you stirred up in me...Wow! I can't wait to see what's next.
  14. I started out with the idea of Lev being kidnapped, the family getting hysterical, and then Lev being found. However, the characters wanted to have the chance to let their emotions and true feelings for Lev and one another shine through. Also, the title wouldn't have fit if I'd had Lev found in this chapter. I wasn't sure if I could fill the chapter with enough interaction with just the family in the hospital, but it all came together. And, unlike the original, this felt much more believable and it's not everyone being thrown in together without having any knowledge whatsoever about one another. I LOVE this blended family. They're so amazing with one another. Don't worry Chris, I promised you no lasting harm would come to the main characters.
  15. The Hospital The light brown-haired man, dressed in nurse's scrubs, paced back and forth outside the hospital room door. In his mind, he knew this was a bad idea, but he told himself there was no other way. The brunet didn't mean any harm to the young man he shot the previous evening, but until he was far enough away to start a new life where they don't have an extradition treaty with the U.S., he had to make sure the witness didn't testify against him. He planned to leave the redhead somew
  16. Sorry for the delay, I've just rewritten what I'd started. So I'm working on LOF's 11th chapter now.
  17. I loved the playful teasing Sam and Taylor gave each other and the boys. Hehe It was awesome seeing Sam, acting and sounding just like Devon when Taylor tickled his feet just after saying he wasn't ticklish and sleeping. LOL And, one of my faves, Devon's saying they needed to eat their wheaties and drink their milk before tickling their dads again. LOL
  18. Devon, Cillian, Sam & Taylor "This is a nice size room," Cillian said as he followed Devon into the bedroom that would be his. "And, just like me, Cillie, you've got your own spacious bathroom." Devon used his best game show host voice while mimicking the models showing off the ensuite bathroom. The redhead shook his head and giggled at his new friend's antics. "You're silly." The teen grinned and squealed as Devon adorably growled and pounced, tackling Cillian to the flo
  19. Thanks BL I've read those stories too, and the ones with kids so afraid of being outed they're either scared of taking chances or they lash out at everyone else. While, I completely understand and sympathize with both mindsets, I don't think it's a positive portrayal of being gay. I tend to like strong gay men, who are comfortable in their own skin and don't give into bullying. Part of this comes from the fact that while I didn't think I was a rainbow flag waiving gay youth, I actually was. A friend of mine pointed out to me, yeah, you said the obligatory I like girls in high school. Even kissed a few, but you came out as bi at 16 and then fully came out at 18. He then told me, Andy, you didn't come out of the closet, you came out of the French doors. LOL And, I've never had sex with a woman, so that's why I tend to write stories with boys who are gay and not afraid. My parents didn't try to dissuade me from my sexuality, they just didn't talk about sex, period. LOL
  20. Thanks, I really appreciate it. They're such cute boys.
  21. Hmm, the real question is what can't they get up to. LOL They're gonna have a lot of laughs together. I love Mike and Robbie, the chemistry and their banter is amazing. It's gonna be fun watching these guys grow in their relationship and love for one another.
  22. "Hey, Robbie, wait up." Mike Stetson hollered as he started running toward his best friend, Robbie Hartford. The blonde teen's size nine and a half red and grey sneakers with orange soles pounded along the grassy field as he ran after his target. Robbie stopped walking and turned around. His neck-length hair slightly blew in the wind, making his locks look like a flickering flame. He drew an imaginary line in the grass with the toes of his size nine black skater shoes. As soon as he saw who
  23. Mike Stetson and Robbie Hartford are both fifteen. The two boys were born and raised living beside each other. Mike's Dads and Robbie's Dads met in college, and formed a lasting brotherhood. The two couples bought a hundred acres of land, built their main houses beside each other. All through their lives Mike and Robbie have been there for one another, and now that they're maturing, the teens are falling for one another, but are afraid to change or lose their friendship.
  24. I also need to say this. Thank you, Chris191070 for giving me the inspiration for this chapter. It was your insight into Master Paul, which I had no earthly idea was there, that led me down the path of Will's seeking redemption. Chris made a comment about Master Paul being a nice guy, and that Janice's punishment for Will, might not actually be a punishment at all. That's what opened the door for me to see Lance and Will working out the reason for the attack the previous night, and the vandalism at Mikey's. Also it gave Lance the opportunity to shine as a loving, caring, and strong individual. You rock, Chris.
  25. Yes, Janice's unaware of the trouble she's just caused herself. I loved Tony getting some levity in the situation by asking Mikey if there was any way he wouldn't get involved. He knew that would break the heavy mood, a little. And, the cliffhanger is perfect. So there, nah nah. *Maturely blowing a raspberry at you.* LOL
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