Ticklishboy30
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Yeah, Phillips is definitely fitting in with Matthew and Peter. I also love how Rob treats Peter like his own kid with no distinction between him and Matthew, just like Beth treats Matthew.
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Phillips is really a great sport when he loses. He's an awesome character and will be a great fit add a new friend. I love the bond Matthew and Peter have formed.
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Andy is truly the picture perfect brother. He loves getting Peter riled up but is respectful of his limits. I love him.
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I love it when my characters take over and show me what they want to happen. It always turned out better than my idea.
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Beth is sooo freakin'amazing. I love the silver necklaces.
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The psycho was shot and killed. The deputy wasn't a major character.
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Rob is such a fun Dad.
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Beth's an amazing Mom, I love how she's already working to make sure Matthew's invited to be a part of "her" boys fun times. Almost like she knows he's the one for Peter.
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Matthew's awesome I love how he starts fitting in right off.
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This was an amazing chapter. I really love seeing Peter start coming out of his shell and letting himself enjoy the bond forming him, Andy & Marty
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Andy and Marty would have a blast with how ticklish I am. LOL I love these guys and how playful they are without any mean judgments. Peter's well on his way to having two amazing best friends and honorary older brothers.
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This is one of my all time favorite stories. I love how descriptive @Palantir made his characters and places. Peter and Matthew are an amazing power couple the way they fit in with the other guys while never losing the magic and playfulness that make them lovable and sensitive boys. Andy and Marty make great best friends and honorary big brothers. It's awesome to see them in protective mode.
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The Greatest Gift pt. 3
Ticklishboy30 commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in The Greatest Gift pt. 3
I really loved how this came out. Adam's nickname for Mikey was just too adorable and Dakota was right, it did fit him. Michie was sooo cute, i was giggling the entire time I worked on his interactions. -
Adam's eyes opened. He yawned, stretched his arms, lightly scratched the side of his head, wiggled his toes, and slowly sat up. When he looked to his right and noticed everyone else was still asleep, it surprised him because he wasn't usually the first to wake up in the morning. He smiled at his peacefully slumbering future husband and three brothers. Moving carefully, Adam got out from under the blanket, pulled on the pair of green and yellow heart-decorated boxers, slipped his bare feet into t
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The Greatest Gift pt. 2
Ticklishboy30 commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in The Greatest Gift pt. 2
Thanks, @VBlewthe guys directed where the chapter went. Everything that came out, needed to be addressed for them to be at peace with themselves. -
"Damn it," Adam and Mikey exclaimed in unison, causing a flood of laughs from their mates and little brother. "Mama knows we're gonna be going crazy not knowing what's up," Adam stated. "Yeah, mean Mama," Mikey said with a pout. Dakota, Lance, and Jai couldn't form any words. They just shook their heads and leaned against one another as their bodies quaked with boisterous laughter. "C'mon, my adorable overgrown kid of a husband-to-be," Jai said amidst his chuckles. "You, me, and K
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The Greatest Gift pt. 1
Ticklishboy30 commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in The Greatest Gift pt. 1
I loved seeing these guys again. It's been fun watching them grow and mature in the course of the story. Dakota is really embracing his new large family. -
As the afternoon progressed, Lance continued to stick to his older brothers like glue. None of them said anything discouraging as they accepted the loving and affectionate attention he gave them. At one point, Mikey looked at the clock, then smiled as he lightly stroked his younger brother's hair. He also leaned to the left to kiss his mate's soft lips. He playfully tickled Lance's exposed armpit and said, "Hey, baby bro." Lance giggled, squirmed, and let go of the older brunet's waist. "Ye
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I bear no responsibility for where your imagination takes you. Now, I'm running and hiding under the bed before you can catch and tickle me.
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Dean Warner Intrigues is an incredibly satisfying read. The dialog is mature and more intelligently worded than a lot of stories involving characters in their 20's, which I found to be very refreshing. From start to finish, @Daddydavekdelivers excitement, danger, mystery, romance and humor in his creative work.
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They really need a "whew" emoji for chapter reactions. LOL Awesome wrap up i can't believe I've read the whole thing so quickly. @Daddydavek you should truly feel proud of your first story because you nailed it. The range of emotions from the characters, the monogamous couples, the action and romance, it's just an incredible story. One I'll be reading again.
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Holy Shit, that was exciting. Umm, I need to borrow toenails now. Since the other chapter laid claim to my fingernails, i had to bite toenails for this chapter. Again, we've learned, and this time it's been drilled into our heads, don't fuck with Libby Trask. She freakin' owns 49 percent of the company? You go girl, asserting your power. BTW, I'm not A Dean Koontz fan. I go for the Mary Higgins Clark and Murder, She Wrote books.
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Hmm, why does it feel like something could go wrong with this plan. Although, it is a good one. I love it that Dean isn't a pushover and won't run.
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Gee, where'd I see that line before?
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You totally succeeded.
