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  1. Ticklishboy30
    IKR, Just like in LOF, I felt Janice needed to be more evil and diabolical. Then I thought about the accomplice I'd originally given her and realized I had never given him a name, personality, or description. So, William was born. And, Janice became way eviler and controlling. I loved how Lance handled his situation with Will, he showed his controlled anger and strength. And, I felt his retaliation was perfect for his assailant.
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    TL TL was driving around, getting lost in his thoughts. He didn't have a specific destination in mind at the moment. "I... I killed someone." The realization that he caused another living being, other than an annoying insect, to breathe his last breath was unbelievable to the man's mind. Then his thoughts switched to how erotic and amazingly tantalizing it was feeling the man's body thrash and writhe beneath him. The unchallenged God-like power that surged through his veins and wakening his
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    Yep, now it's just how long till they catch him. And, how much damage will he do in the meantime.? I loved Lyle's greeting when the phone rang. LOL
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    Greg & Jaycen After calling Mama Ev, Lyle, Jaycen, Greg, Tom, and Linda left the hospital and parted ways. Tom and Linda got in the Navigator and drove home. Jaycen and Greg climbed in the jeep, and Greg headed back to the townhouse, with Jaycen in the passenger seat. Physically, he felt fine, but Jaycen was still a bit shaken up from earlier. The redhead watched the scenery pass by. He had a feeling of loss, breeding inside of him. His heart felt like it had split in two. Tonight would
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    I appreciate it BoyLove. As I started writing this, T.L. inspired me to write his original backstory, well part of it anyway. And, he wanted me to use the initials. Which were given to him as a teen. I loved the interaction between Sean and Lance, their relationship needed to be expanded and displayed as well. I originally had the idea for Mikey to encounter a promotion crazed cop, when I was writing the first version. However, that never came about, so this go-round, the cop morphed into an idiotic security guard. I loved how Mikey kept his cool and remained respectful even when he was being accosted. Although his little antics like the whistling was amazing. LOL
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    Thanks, Chris. Umm, you do realize for this to be a thriller, it's got to have a murder or two, right? LOL
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    T.L. It was getting colder the later it got. The frosty exhaled breath was the only proof of the man's existence as T.L. stood flush against the building's edge, dressed in all black, concealed by the darkness. The darkened figure kept his eyes on the tan KIA Sportage his target drove. It was a good thing he was a patient man because what the hooded man did wasn't an easy or quick process. Sometimes it took T.L. weeks, even months observing his intended victims. He'd watch them as they went
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    Yeah, and the way it's been happening, feels a lot more natural and not as awkward like before. (BTW, has anyone ever really looked at the spelling of awkward? The spelling actually matches the definition. LOL)
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    Greg's Townhouse Linda gave the dispatcher Levie's room number then told them about the photo. The officer told her, one of the medical center's security guards would check on the young men. "Son, who can we call to help with Jaycen?" Tom asked as he handed his phone to his wife. "Who would do something like that?" Linda pushed the phone back to Greg. She couldn't look at her poor son in that condition anymore. Greg thought a minute, then snapped his fingers. "I know who to c
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    Thanks Chris I do appreciate it. In revising the chapter, I fell in love with the boys all over again.
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    Mikey Adam & Jai Mikey Dante Carter closed and locked the door of his silver nineteen-eighty corvette convertible and walked across the parking lot of Barefoot Books & Lounge. Luck was very much on his side the day he got that car. He attended a foreclosure auction, and after losing two bids, the young man struck gold on the third and won the corvette. The classic sports car was almost new. It only had one owner and was kept in a garage. Mikey loved the feel of the soft, black leath
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    Meet Mikey, he's a twenty-two-year-old librarian and part-owner of Barefoot Books & Lounge. For the last two years and is finally ready to start dating again. Stir in a cluster of loving family members, a brother's crazy soon-to-be ex-girlfriend, and a tickle-crazed stalker/killer. Cover, and simmer till it comes to a boil, and by the time it's finished cooking, hopefully, you've got a recipe for an enjoyable story.
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    Ikr, I told ya I wanted to make him so detestable, maniacal, devious, and demonic. He's got no conscience. I couldn't believe the scene in my head of him going after Brandon. You notice, he didn't go for Lev. He's evil, not stupid. LOL I'm worried for Jayce though. The amount of stress he was already under, and seeing the pic of Bran. I don't think this is gonna be that quick of a fix for him. Troy's gonna be pissed as hell when he finds everything out.
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    Levie & Brandon Jaycen and Greg left after giving Levie and Brandon a kiss and hug. For a few minutes, the brothers sat in comfortable silence. They were processing the evening's events in their own ways. Levie's mind was coming to terms with his experiences. "I got shot today. I never expected something like that to happen. I mean, I know shootings happen. You see it on the news almost every day. I still can't believe I got shot." Brandon looked at his red-haired brother and softl
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    Thanks, Raven, I love hearing from you also. Funny thing, I was listening to the three songs day before yesterday, as I was writing the chapter. And, of course, you can have poker buddies in the afterlife. You gotta do something to pass the time other than eating chocolate chip cookies. LOL
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    One of my favorite parts of their exchange, was Stacy talking about Mark fixing a ball game. LOL That had me cracking up like crazy. LOL
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    As always, thanks Chris I appreciate your comments and reactions. This was a fun and emotional chapter with Stacy showing up and the guys interaction. I loved Stacy threatening Levie. LOL She's fiesty, even in the afterlife. If you watched Charmed I've imagined Stacy to be like Penny, (Grams) She had a great sense of humor, and was a badass. LOL And Jaycen playfully telling Brandon he had to take the shirt Jaycen wanted was awesome. LOL
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    Levie Levie's unconscious body lay on the hospital bed. He'd come through the surgery with no complications. The doctors got him moved into a room, and they were waiting for him to wake up from the anesthesia. A soft, soothing voice gently drifted in the young man's ears. It was a pleasant feminine voice. One that Levie hadn't heard in ten years. He recognized the song "The Last Unicorn," his favorite growing up. Then it changed to "Return To Pooh Corner," Levie's second favorite child
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    Thank you, I'm really grateful. It was a little hard to write, but well worth it. I loved how the relationship between Triton, and Jaycen came out. He's an amazing horse. I was tempted to have a single tear running down Tri's cheek, but thought that might be just a bit too much. LOL And, yes I had to slip Maddox in, actually, some of his thoughts added a little bit of comic relief. like comparing Brandon to a hamster in a wheel. LOL The image was cute. Also, the interaction between Stuart and Troy on the staircase was awesome. I love Uncle Stu, he's a great character. And, damn, Greg and Brandon, they really amazed and tore at my heart seeing them together in the hospital.
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    It's not so much shock, as it is his recollection of what happened. He's only focusing on the mechanics of the events, he's not focusing on the importance of both his, and Levie's actions. Bran's such a loving and protective person, he doesn't yet see just how important, and invaluable he was to the situation. If he wasn't there, Levie might have bled out, or suffered more damage.
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    Greg's Townhouse Greg dropped his phone and fell to his knees. He couldn't cry, he couldn't move, Greg couldn't feel. Brandon's words him into shock. His breath came in labored huffs and, his body broke out in a cold sweat. Linda ran to get a wet washcloth, then she wrapped her arms around her son, wiped his forehead with the cloth, and cradled him in her arms. Just like she'd done since his childhood. Tom bent down, picked up his son's phone, and put it to his ear. Instantly, the
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    And, all the chapters are updated. I'm going to be working on chapter 5 hopefully, sometime today.
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    Hey guys, some of the chapters will be slightly changing, for the better. I've been running the first four chapters through Grammarly, and have been replacing the original post, with the grammatically correct ones. I'm currently working on chapter four now, and have one last change to check in the third chapter.
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    Wow! Thanks, I do appreciate it and am grateful for your comment. You've always made some awesome assessments. I'm not making any promises on how long Maddox will be around. After all, he's got an unveiling coming at some point. So, he's gonna be causing more trouble along the way. However, the family will all deal with things as they come along. Things may happen to them, but it only makes them stronger, and more bonded together.
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    Moving Day

    Ticklishboy30 commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Moving Day

    Not really, Most of the characters are being trickled in. And, there's a couple of extra surprises.
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