Ticklishboy30

Janice After vandalizing Mikey's house, the blonde socialite started thinking about her next plan of attack. She periodically glanced at her restrained and gagged passenger turned captive, Will, in the rearview mirror. Janice snickered as her fingers constantly swiped up and down the young man's trapped bare feet, tied to the middle console. Will's muffled laughter and squeals filled the car's interior as his pale olive-like toes flexed and wiggled, trying to avoid the ticklish attack. The

A new chapter is being worked on as I type. Hopefully, it'll be posted sometime tomorrow or the next day.

Just wait till the ending.

Neither could I. LOL

Kyle Although Kyle loved running the bingo game for the seniors, his heart and attention weren't all on the game. He continuously checked his watch and got more nervous as time passed. The feeling that Jake was in trouble started the minute Kyle pulled into the parking lot and grew as the evening wore on. The brunet sighed. Halfway through the game and still no word from his fiancee. Finally, the night ended, and Kyle apologized for running out so quickly. He got to his car and almost broke

Jake & Kyle "What?" Twenty-two-year-old Kyle Barrow asked as he leaned forward in his chair. The five-foot-ten brunet sat across from his long-time best friend and boyfriend, twenty-one-year-old Jake Rafton, in the backyard of the modest one-story house they shared. "You heard me. I got a voicemail earlier from an unknown caller. He said to come to the old Tickle Manor tonight. The man said he had reliable information on the city corruption case I'm investigating." Jake respon

Jake is a private detective he and his boyfriend, Kyle have a very ticklish experience with LM.

Thanks Chris, believe it or not, I wasn't the author in the story. I based Carter on a very good friend of mine from DA, who after I asked him let me use his physical appearance as the model for my character. I wrote this for two reasons. One, I've always wondered what would happen if that actually happened, and two, I was trying to see if I could still write something that would be accepted on tklfrat. Over the years my stories got more plot and character based, and the tickling was prominent, but not the main focus, so my stories got less and less readers. So this was my compromise, a quick, satisfying, character and plot based ticklish story. LOL Believe me, it took everything in me not to set it up as at least a two chapter story. LOL

"Damn, another date down the drain. Thanks to the damned fuckin' book that Donnelly character wrote." A very frustrated Liam Sterling slammed his apartment door. "Whoah, watch the pictures, bro." Davis Bourne said as he stuck his head out of his bedroom door to see what shook the walls. Not that anything disastrous had to happen, the apartment the two friends shared had walls paper-thin. When he looked at his best friend, Liam couldn't stop himself from doubling over with laughter. The

Have you ever wondered what can happen when a character in a book turns out to be well...you? Just ask Liam to tell you his story.

They are fun, and I love how Taylor easily fell into the role of older brother/parent/boyfriend and is totally playful about it. His calling Sam, Sammy was just too cute when I saw it in my head. So was the look Sam gave him. LOL And, Sam saying he was attacked out of nowhere, and that he was innocently telling them about Taylor being in charge and he was going to lie down, was epic. I thought the way Devon and Cillian handled the boyfriend topic was a nice showing of their growing maturity, and it's a nice offset to their youthful playfulness. Just when you think these teens act younger than their physical age, they throw you a curve ball and show they're mentally and emotionally a bit older than their physical age, so it's a really nice balance. I think it comes from being raised by young and youthful minded Dads. They get the love and physical affection they need to completely be themselves, while watching their parent make sacrifices to keep and raise them. And, yes, the comment about the dad's shouldn't kiss but the kids can is probably gonna be a running bit throughout the story. LOL It's just too cute to die. LOL

Devon, Cillian, Sam, & Taylor The teens ran up the stairs to Devon's room. Devon opened the door and motioned for the redhead to enter. As he passed by, the playful brunet lightly tickled the back of his new friend's neck. Devon giggled as Cillian squeaked and jumped. The slightly taller teen did his best to look innocent when he saw the mock menacing expression on the other teen's face. However, neither one could keep from giggling very long. "I love your room, Devie," Cillian exc

Thanks V, The four guys are really fun. I love the youthful energy Taylor exudes. It's a great combination with Sam being a young parent.

And, it felt right, since the Dad's already met a few times and did background checks on one another. I loved Devon and Snoopy together. LOL

Aww, thanks, Jeffery. The second chapter is done, I just have to put it onto Libre, and can post it tomorrow morning. The guys are too adorable and fun. I do have some things in mind to add some spice, as always. LOL

Sam & Devon "C'mon Devon, time to get up, kiddo." Twenty-nine-year-old Sam Miller opened the curtains and windows to let the morning's bright sunlight flood and the fresh ocean breeze fill his fourteen-year-old son Devon's bedroom. The six-foot-tall man shook his head and softly chuckled as he watched his kid pull the covers over his head, attempting to block the invading light. The man's chuckles got more pronounced when he heard the unintelligible grunts and moans muffled the comforte

Twenty-nine-year-old Sam Miller owns a duplex on the beach and lives there with his fourteen-year-old son, Devon (Devie). He rents out the other half to thirty-five-year-old Taylor Winters and his fourteen-year-old son, Cillian (Cillie). The dads share an attraction to one another, and their kids have an attraction for each other. The two sets of couples decide to explore becoming a family while Taylor, and Sam date, and Cillian, and Devon date.

I love me some hangers on of cliffs, Aaron, you soooo totally rock with this chapter.

Holy Fuckin' Proposals!!!! I LOVED this chapter. I'm hoping Vin will say yes. I can't wait to see the wedding. They are the perfect couple, not trying to change one another, and loving their differences.

Thank you, VBlew. I really appreciate your comment. It's been a lot more fun working on the revision also. With the first one, I put myself on a totally unsustainable schedule, not because of anyone, except myself. So, the chapters were totally everywhere. I'm taking my time now, and really thinking about where I want to go. I've done the same thing with the Thriller revision as well. Also, writing the chapters on Grammarly has been the biggest change and help to my writing. Another difference, is I've done the research for the revision. Greg's truck for instance, The 2012 Tacoma was on multiple lists in the top three pickups, the age requirements for the reserve deputies, and firemen, and the difference between the Glocks, I researched that as well, so my facts are accurate, not just supposition on my part. I took emotions out of some of the critiques, I never took them personally, but when I first read them, I wasn't in the right frame of mind to fully understand the sentiment behind them. Most of the critiques were about how quickly the people accepted each other. I think, having Greg and Lev, in a three-month relationship, addressed that issue. At least to me, the timeframe of the family's accepting each other and the beginning bonds are more realistic, because of the boys talking about each other to their own family. Like Brandon's excitement and eagerness over the need to meet Levie, then taking an instant liking to him, has actually happened to me. It's just some people you meet you just take an instant liking to. Add to that the experience of the robbery, was the cement between Lev and Bran. Linda and Jaycen's bonding and talking about the shared past was a great icebreaker for them.

Yeah, I was surprised how much I packed in and still thought it was a bit on the short side. But, also felt where it ended was perfect. LOL

Levie's is a bit more than the stress. He's also been faced with a major dose of mortality. Not just his own, but his Bropops also. To him, they're like supermen. Plus, he's realizing how he could lose them, just like his parents. Yeah, he and Jaycen are a lot alike, when it comes to their family and loved ones.

Maddox He couldn't stop smiling and boyishly giggling as he drove his truck down the dark and deserted two-lane country road. Maddox had the perfect night well, almost perfect it only missed the element of seeing the muscle-bound redheaded ape's reaction to his message. The dirty truck and driver finally reached the long dirt road drive where they resided. As he drove along the narrow and curvy former stagecoach road, Barksley's thoughts returned to wishing he'd seen the reaction to the pho

We can hope. Hahaha I know what he's planning next. LOL And I'm running and hiding from anyone who can tickle me into talking. LOL

Yeah, I couldn't have anything too serious happen to my Jayce.