Ticklishboy30

Brandon, and Levie are so cute together. I love their playful, and loving interactions. I'm really glad, it was Brandon with Levie this evening. I don't think Greg would've been as equipped to handle the situation. Brandon's emotions were running high, but he didn't completely freak, and he really got to show his true feelings of brotherhood, and protectiveness for Levie. Those two are gonna be inseparable as brothers. Greg surprised me, with his ability to stay calm, and being able to separate past, from present. His reaction, was very reserved, and expressed in a very mature fashion. And, Linda got to fully, explain, her side of things. I loved, how she didn't once, say she was only doing what she thought was right. She expressed her feelings, and the driving force behind them. I don't agree with her past stance, but I agree with her progression. I'm also glad, that she made sure to state, there was no wrongdoing or abuse. She could've made a false report, and totally screwed the family, but she was fair, just misguided. I'm also proud of Jaycen's being able to keep his emotions and feelings from disabling him, from being strong. It was awesome, getting the opinion of the ranch hand, as he watched Jaycen go through his rollercoaster of the event. He also showed great restraint, with Maddox. I originally had the idea, of him literally beating the fuck outta Maddox, but it wasn't a match for his personality. He's not vindictive. He shows just enough strength, and anger, but doesn't go overboard, and Troy wasn't dead. So it didn't warrant a complete hulk morph. This was a bit of a departure for me. Actually, Linda's history with the Stillman's is what I had in mind, for the original story, but I wanted more of a cute fuzzy feeling for LOF then. So, since I was redoing the story, I decided to go with my original idea. I didn't plan on having the two things happen, but, we all know, life happens. I'm not used to writing truly, despicable, deranged characters, so I was a bit nervous, when creating the scene with Maddox. I only hope I pulled it off, in making him as disgusting, and deplorable as I've envisioned. He's definitely, not done. And, there's still the mystery, of who he really is. LOL I've also made a slight change in the story. I was doing some research on reserve deputies, and discovered, they have to be at least 21, so then I was faced with either making Lev, 21, or removing his status as a reserve deputy. Removing the status won out, so now it's just Troy, and Jayce that are the reserve deputies. It was easier, than going through the chapters and changing Lev's age in all of them. I'd only mentioned the deputy thing in one, or two chapters. He's gonna become a reserve deputy, when he turns 21. However, the three of them are still reserve firemen, you only have to be 18 for that.

Linda & Tom Linda brought her hand up to cover a yawn as she stood at the counter with two cups and waited for the coffee to brew as her husband Tom plated their breakfast of scrambled eggs and bacon. "Babe, I think Brandon will be more comfortable if Greg's with him when we have our talk," Tom said as he brought the plates to the table. "I agree with you," Linda said as she fixed their coffee. The couple continued their discussion, one of the topics was their decision to

I really loved the way Brandon, and Levie's introduction turned out. In my opinion, it was much better, and didn't feel forced, like in the original. I did love creating the fun tickling scenes, but after revising the story, I'm realizing, just how much the original version was drowned in it, and lost focus. By dialing it back, and making it less graphically described, I've accomplished what I originally wanted. Which was to make a more mainstream story, with an element of my love for tickling. It's also been letting the true emotions shine through.

Fun fact: I got the idea about the town from two places, Hazzard County, and Charlottesville. I actually live about fifteen to twenty minutes away from C'ville, and have lived there, for awhile. Anyone who's ever been there, it's a beautiful small city. The locals have always said "it's the biggest small city you'll ever live in." C'ville's got most of the big attractions, and good theater productions, with a very small town feel, until the college kids come back. LOL I have actually walked from downtown to Barracks Rd, in about two to three hours, which was about a little under a quarter of the entire city. So, I combined that, with my memory of the town square in "Dukes Of Hazzard."

Literally, Maddox, and his name came to me when I sat down to write the chapter yesterday. I wasn't sure I could pull him off, since I'm not naturally a sadistic, or maniacal person. However, I'm actually proud of the way he came out. I wanted him to be more threatening, dangerous, and longer lasting than Milo, and Jordan. Which, I'm working on revising them, and their roles as antagonists. We'll see what happens. I'm hoping, I can keep it going, and keep y'alls interest, as well as mine. My ADHD is bad, even with medication, so it's hard for me to stay interested in things.

I told you guys, I was working on it. It was hard, deciding if I should throw in some action, or wait another chapter. LOL

Maddox Thirty-one-year-old Maddox Barksley sat in his truck outside the grocery store and got lost in his thoughts. He'd spent over a decade in prison, and a few months ago, was released. However, Maddox wasn't his real name. A few weeks after being released, the ex-con accessed a savings account he opened before his imprisonment. Maddox withdrew some funds to change his name, get plastic surgery, and colored contact lenses. Now that he was back in town, the only thing on his mind was getti

And Brandon, he's so cute. It's fun recreating these guys. I love the depth they're showing. It's also nice, seeing Bill being so fatherly, and interacting with Levie, in a way he didn't get to before. It's also worked out a lot better, having the intimate moment with Jayce, Troy, and Levie, as the dads tell him a little bit about them raising him, when they were ten. Now, let's see how the first night goes for everyone.

At The Ranch After Jaycen and Troy left his room, Levie started choosing clothes to bring for the week. The twenty-year-old got dressed while he packed. Levie pulled out a pair of slim-fit, grey jeans and put them on over his blue bikini briefs. Then he chose a dark green shirt that made his red hair look more fire-like, and after putting on his favorite pair of Scooby-Doo socks, he stepped into his tan, two and three-quarter-inch heeled cowboy boots. He'd almost finished packing when he de

I'm trying to work that out. I might use some of the same antagonists, with slightly altered or different situations for the boys, and family to face.

I'd also like to thank Chris191070, for being an amazing sounding board, and helping me make this a better chapter.

Greg & Brandon Greg Wilmont stepped out of the bathtub, pulled the bath sheet from the rack, dried off, and hung it over the shower curtain to dry; He slipped into a pair of grey boxer/briefs and faced the mirror. Greg picked up the hair gel, squeezed some in his palm, rubbed his hands together, and distributed it through his curly, neck-length, jet-black hair; he used his fingers to gently toss his damp locks around to achieve the controlled and messy hairstyle he wanted. Next, he retr

Levie (pronounced Levy) and his boyfriend Greg, have been dating for three months. Because of their busy lives, the couple decides to move in together, so they can strengthen their relationship. Luckily, the young men, have a loving, and supportive family to help them through life's changes, and storms. Together, Levie, and Greg discover no matter what comes against them, they've always got the "Love Of Family" to help them be strong. (This is a revision of my original effort.)

At The Ranch Greg made a full recovery, from his stabbing. It made the raven haired teen smile, every time he thought about how protective, and loving his red headed angel was. The first couple weeks back home, Levie spent his free time making sure Greg had everything he needed, and wanted. The nineteen year old never dreamed, he could get as many foot massages, or tongue baths as he did, and he couldn’t wait to return the favor. Even though he loved receiving them, Greg loved giving just a

Thanks Chris. It was fun writing this. I really loved Kennie asking for the Porsche. LOL

The Family As soon as he heard Kennie’s statement. Jordan’s face lit up, and he tackled his new playmate. “I’m not done with my list of demands.” Jordan straightened up, but continued sitting on his squirming boyfriend. Kennie was wriggling, and trying to work himself free, but discovered, he was completely trapped, face down under his jovial assailant. “What are your terms, my cute sneaky man?” Jordan’s fingertips lightly tickled, and drew circles on Kennie’s neck. “Jordy, c’mon, not m

It takes a lot of guts, heart, and dedication to not only sit down, and write a story, but to be willing to share it with a public audience. My thanks, and admiration goes out to all the writers who have created these wonderful stories, and characters we've come to know, and love. I'd also like to thank those who've read my own creations, and enjoyed them. Dolly Parton once made a comment about how her songs were like her children. She gave them life, and some have done well, while some wait for their chance to be heard. I feel the same way about my stories, and characters.

Mikey, Dakota, & Adam The sun’s early morning light streamed into Mikey’s hospital room The soft golden rays were separated, by the open blinds. However, the sun wasn’t what gave Dakota his pleasant wakening. He was brought to consciousness, by the soft boyish giggling of his extremely adorable soulmate. Opening his eyes, the half Cherokee was blessed with the sun playing on Mikey’s soft angelic features as he slightly squirmed, and giggled his way through the doctor’s examination. He s

They're gonna be awesome. And they both have an adorable child like spirit, and sense of wonder. I love them. I'm excited to see the Hardy parents fully being Jordan into their family.

The Hardy Estate Over the next few minutes, Ken explained his second proposal to his younger visitor. Everyone in the room smiled, as they watched Jordan’s eyes light up, and his excitement rise. The young man was as giddy, and childlike as he was when he first learned he’d be an elf in the parade. “So, let me make sure I’ve got this right.” Jordan was so happy, his eyes twinkled, and his boyish giggling couldn’t be contained. “You want me to dress up as an elf, and let your kid try an

The Family The family waiting room was empty when they got there. As soon as he entered, Levie started to lose it. He began sobbing, and leaned against the wall breathing heavily. Not knowing anything about how badly Greg was hurt, and not being with him when it happened, or when he was brought in, finally caught up with him. Even though Brandon’s meeting Jayde was an event to celebrate, Levie’s heart was heavy, with concern for his soul mate. “I should’ve been there with him. Maybe, h

The Family The family were still waiting to hear something, anything on their fourth youngest boy. The sound of the door opening, made everyone’s head turn, but it was only a nurse, heading home for the day. No one knew exactly what they could do to ease the tension, and fear of the unknown. “Any word on our Angel boy?” The second he finished speaking, Dakota was greeted with Lance’s backhanded slap. The half Cherokee knew exactly what Lance was feeling, and he also knew what he’d have

All you guys reading this, and never mentioned I forgot to say where on his Dad's warm body, Kennie buried his head LOL I just noticed it.

I thought you'd like it. I loved the meeting with Ken. LOL And, there's a fun cliff hanger.

In the Locker Room Panic, and fear dominated the young man’s collective senses. He’d been in a few fights, and a couple dangerous situations. However, he’d never been the subject for a kidnapping. Jordan didn’t even know what this guy, or guys for all he knew would want with him. Hell, he didn’t have anything worth taking him for. Despite his fear, the twenty-five year old continued to struggle against his captor. Suddenly, he noticed a familiar scent. “Do you agree to be a good little