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  1. john fraser
    This story is so good, and even the for the second read................
  2. john fraser
    They may not see it, but they will never get over each other.......
  3. john fraser
    Even with the second read those are so frustating......they need to talk
  4. john fraser
    I can not say too much as this is my second read, and enjoying it so much more. This story is so so good....................
  5. john fraser
    These two are something else.....what a great chapter
  6. john fraser
    Another great chapter.......Nash has got to get his feelings together, and explain his feeelings to Penn as he gets hurt easily............
  7. john fraser
    I love those two so much......they seem to bring out the hidden personalities of each other.....great chapter
  8. john fraser
    I am so glad they outed Paul.....why did he think he could be so nasty......Lee needs to be taken to the cleaners, but know Nash would never do it. Nash, and Penn are going in the right direction........
  9. john fraser
    Another great chapter.......Nash needs to grow a pair, and realize his friendship with Penn is something special...............
  10. john fraser
    Just knew Lee was up to something...but why? They seemed to have a great marriage, and like Nash said if Lee was hating the being alone so much he should have confronted Nash. Paul is no better being married with kids. If he was curious about gay sex he should have gone online to find someone not screw around with co-worker's husband.
  11. john fraser
    I have a feeling the brothers know something about Lee, and Nash is so into his marriage he realizes nothing.....
  12. john fraser
    OH Boy something is going on here......love the way this story is going..............
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    Chapter 1

    john fraser commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I never focus on the grammar..Only on the great story
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    Chapter 1

    john fraser commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I have a bad habit of reading too fast, and the odd skipping so always read stories twice. This read is so good as like your other stories, and I see now where this story is going , and so good. Always wondered why Paul was so snarky with Nash. Second read is good, and will thoroughly enjoy the rest..............
  15. john fraser
    I have read many of these fantasy stories which are my favourite, and yours is amont one of the best I have read......can not wait for the rest of it
  16. john fraser
    This story was the best with lots of twists to keep you wondering what is going to happen. I found it hard to put down,and now I am going to do my second read. Also the two men are so real life
  17. john fraser
    Great story.....Now for the second read as I am a fast reader, and the second time I do not miss anything......One of my fav. stories....looking forward for something new from you in the future
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  19. john fraser
    This chapter was so good .........actually the story is one of the best I have ever read. Waiting for the next installmets......You are such a good writer
  20. john fraser
    So into this chapter as I have read it for the second time....great story, and once I started could not put it down.....Penn and Nash are a great couple...you are a great story teller.........
  21. john fraser
    t I was beginning to dislike Penn in these last chapters, but having them getting on the same page I realize they are meant for each other......great story ,,,,,,looking for more.
  22. john fraser

    Part 2

    john fraser commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Part 2

    Great story, and better the second time as I read it some time ago on Literotica.......
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    Chapter 3

    john fraser commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Gets better with each chapter...........
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