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  1. john fraser
    Damn this story is so good I could read more, and more about these two, but know it will have to end sometime. Surely Matt is realizing he is totally in love with Seamus. The baby would do so much better if the two were together all the time as he loves both so much, and fells neglected when they all there together. Looking for the next chapter.
  2. john fraser
    I am a reader that usually reads the chapter too fast so later I always read the second time, and believe me this story is so good, and getting better. I know Seamus is in love, and Matt is too, but just doesn't want to commit yet as he is afraid what happened in his past. He is growing up finally.
  3. john fraser
    OMG this chapter was so good, and now the rest should be even better.....so glad the two of them got on the same page as you can tell they really love each other so much. The other comments people have given are mine as well. Am waiting patiently for the next chapter.
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    Summer

    john fraser commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Summer

    This chapter so good.....I can see where Matt is going as he is only 21, and has had so many disappointments in his love life....He wants to have Seamus in his life, but afraid it will fail like the others in his life. So glad he is going to talk to his Dad. Great story
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    You did it again.....this chapter was so good, ans so glad Matt is finally starting to realize what he has.....do not think he will last the summer with his Dad, and he is a Dad, and not just a brother. Love these guys so much...Great Great story
  6. john fraser
    As usual a great chapter......I so love both Matt, and Seamus hoping they finally get on the same page.....
  7. john fraser
    This story is just getting better....no sense repeating what the other comments are as I agree with them all.....Seamus is ready, but Matt is still a little dense on the situation....but looks like he is starting to smarten up on their situation.....
  8. john fraser
    So glad you mentioned this site when I mentioned I was so impatient to read more.....What a story, and I love this, and your writing so much. I thought Tied up in Knotts was my favorite story, but this is so good I do not want to choose. So glad Matt finally realized that Seamus was into him, and I love that they are so great to the baby. What more can I say other that I love this story so much. Waiting for the rest will not be easy. You are such a good story teller.
  9. john fraser
    This is my second read as I like to read the story again when it is completed. Believe me I enjoyed it even more the second time. You are such a great story teller, and the people you write about are so real. Loved it all.
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    Epilogue

    john fraser commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Epilogue

    The second was better....loved both stories, and would like to see a third
  11. john fraser
    Great chapter....I agree with the other comments....looking forward to the next chapter
  12. john fraser
    I have no idea how anyone could figure Billy in this.......Keep on with the story anything with this plot could happen
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    Weird Day

    john fraser commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Weird Day

    Great start.....you have me on board, I know it will be as good as the rest of your stories. I am surprised about the ghost.....love it
  14. john fraser
    This Chapter was so good, and just waiting for the next one
  15. john fraser
    WOW this is getting so intense......can't wait for the next chapter
  16. john fraser
    What more can I add.....this story is so damn good.....
  17. john fraser
    I read this on Literotica, but I asways read stories twice....I was excellent the first read so it will be much better the second read..............
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    No sense in writing too much as everyone has already said it all......This story is so good, and can't wait for the next chapter to see what is going to happen..Love this story so much what a great story teller you are
  19. john fraser
    All the comments are so what I would say....this story is so good, and well written. Can not wait for the next chapter.................
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    Epilogue

    john fraser commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Epilogue

    Finally got to read this story, and as all your stories it was great.
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    Chapter 12

    john fraser commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Chapter 12

    This story is great, and cannot put it down, Have read all your stories on Literotica, and so glad I found this one 😎
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    Chapter 8

    john fraser commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Good for you Buzz......keep heading East. I also think the enforcer has something going for Buzz. They are all dicks
  23. john fraser
    The mystery goes on....love it
  24. john fraser
    One of the best stories I have read in a long time....
  25. john fraser
    So good......can't wait for the next chapter
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