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Danilo Syrtis

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  1. i’m glad that you changed the narrator it refreshed completely the story 👍 too bad, Elliot is going to be a lawyer : i was dreaming that he would become an olympic diver 😜
  2. i think i found another typo when Dion wanted to invit Shelly : « wondered if could invite Shelly » . « he » must be missing 🤔
  3. i love those grandchildren !! 😂
  4. i agree with the comment above : this chapter is just awesome and one of my favorite too 👍 too bad there are too many like this bad guy (i don’t use a worse word because he is beyond any bad word ! 😜) in the world
  5. i noticed : in the middle « ... Andrew had been inured » instead of injured, i think and i think there was also « cane » instead of « came » but i can’t find it again😫
  6. i love this little devil 😂
  7. me too 😂
  8. well i have no pity for the Hubbard boy. he deserved all he got from what he did
  9. so sad for Richard ! 🥺
  10. Ted is named this way because he is covered with fur ? 😆 hmmm i have a bad feeling with Ted’s obsession to go in the Currie family🤔 hope this won’t end to bring more problems with the legal things
  11. i too want to know the one who has enough guts to do that to Ricky 🤣😂 to give an award to him
  12. don’t worry 😉 i do make LOTS of mistakes myself when i write in english since it is not my native language
  13. just to let you know that i think that Apprehension got 2 p 🤔
  14. humm i was thinking that Josh forgot to keep Steve informed about Cody’s good news ? 😆
  15. i guess that the girl from the family whose house burnt will probably marry with Ricky in some future chapter if it is not Kylie 😜
  16. well i made probably confusion with the testing for transplant. my bad 😳
  17. yes, my first reaction was same, so i read again before i understood it wasn’t btw i’m a little confused : last chapter said that Cody didn’t need to do bone marrow, and he was doing it in this chapter 🤔
  18. me too 😂 i’m just surprised that Jack and Nigel didn’t try something to scare the boys as well 🤣
  19. hmm i thought that Vinnie’s parents were in one of the other planes not those that hit the twin towers 🤔 even if it is the same day
  20. i LOVE Ricky’s letters. the rhythm of the words is different, more fast like a teen jumping, when all the stories rhythms are slower , like older people talking. it suits perfectly to the caracters’s personalities. 👍
  21. well actually Kevin and Vinnie aren’t really brothers, not in the genetic way like Sammy and Andrew or Cole and Graham 🤔 so there won’t be incest. they are only adopt brothers.
  22. too bad we can’t double thumb-up as well 😂
  23. oh ! ricky ! ricky ! 😂
  24. well i fully understand Cole , but i really feel sorry for his mother 🥺 EDIT : i’m no more sorry for her after the following chapters 😡
  25. remember Cole was the one who suffer the most because he gave his little food to Graham 🥺 so i can understand he is the one who hates the most what his mother did 🥺
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