Danilo Syrtis
-
Posts
2,680 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Danilo Syrtis
-
Chapter 40 - A Nearly Perfect Ending
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 40 - A Nearly Perfect Ending
read this book a second time, because beginning of story is always the best part imo and i always loved Rick and Danny above all the others because they were the first ones and « Danny » was my favorite name 😜 -
great final chapter. btw, Ian’s mother didn’t plan a family dinner for Keon’s adoption ? 😁
-
sorry to hear you had an accident 😣 take cate of yourself .
-
sadly, we have to wait until sunday because there isn’t any cliffhanger that will make Wayne post earlier 🙈
- 44 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
hon hon is it the calm before the storm ? adoption process has issues ? 🙈 lol that’s mean to leave us with that cliffhanger 😜 one last before the end 😂
-
i’m sure he will with Greg’s help 🤗
- 44 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
Clay is just an idiot 🙈 he couldn’t see he is going to lose Mason if he keeps his way 🙈 as soon as Mason reaches 18, he will do what he wants to do, so rather than doing things against Mason, Clay should work with Mason how the youngsters can stay safe. hmm couldn’t we have more explicit descriptions about Clay’s wet dreams ? 😂🤣
- 44 comments
-
- 14
-
-
-
-
lol well obviously i missed this one because i was too into the story 😜 besides i’m just a human : i’m absolutely not THE perfect reader 😂 good that you have someone else to keep you on your toes 😜
-
i really understand you 😄 i did camp only once in my life : my backpack got unfortunately an ants invasion 🙈 due to some chocolate inside ! i didn’t regret the camping but i won’t do that one more time ! 😝 but i think that cabins are cleaner and safer than tents 😜
- 41 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
glad that Orsonis moving to Camp Refuge. 🥰 This is his best option 👍 lol good coincidence that Jeremy is a case manager. 😄 this will be good point for him in Clay’s opinion 😁
- 41 comments
-
- 13
-
-
-
nice chapter wonder what tattoo Jarren was planning 😄 hmm somewhere hairless probably 😁 buttocks ?
-
happy wedding anniversary 😄
-
squeeze balls nice and tight😂🤣 ... then you get an nice chapter for readers 🤣😂
-
another typo : « For your information, MY daughter was was the best thing that happened to me » (was x2) what ? Cassie couldn’t finish her meal ? that’s a first 😂 yes Kyle deserved definitely what he got 👍
-
comments reached page #3 🙊😂 first time i see so many comments 🤣 guess Wayne got another load of notifications 🤣😂 we were 😈🙈😂
- 61 comments
-
- 10
-
-
-
great chapter 👍 so is Keon going to become a tattoo artist like Ian ? 🤔😁
-
everyone out of the car ! Liam just farted !! 😂 great chapter 🤣
-
don’t believe droughtquake 😂 you did a great awesome valuable big work ! he is just jalous for how good it is 😂
-
@Wayne Gray you better not sleep tonight : you will get back crazy lot of ❤️ because you sowed nice deeds today 😜😂🤣
- 61 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
-
caught typo 🙈 « I was just telling they guys here that I think we might need to consider getting another vehicle.. » (the ?) « Nash though that if someone could actually strut in a wheelchair.. » (thought ?) loved the Liam/Cassie encounter 😂
-
just one thing : « Greg gave his statements of the events to the detectives in the debrief. » (shouldn’t it be Clay ?)
- 61 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
-
-
thanks to Thorn Wilde for the fast editing 😘 Poor Orson 😟 at least, he is alive. May be he will be moving in the Camp Refugee as well ? another way of helping people. thanks Wayne for your wonderful kindness 😘 after your cruel evilness 😜
- 61 comments
-
- 16
-
-
-
-
I SO LOVE YOU WAYNE !!!! 😍😘😍😘😍😘 guess you had pity of us 😂
- 61 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
may be some typo : « Overkill, maybe, but what they hell, it wasn’t everyday.. » (the ?) « They were greeted warmly by the receptionist and then another staff member came out to give them a tour before meeting with Kyle. The lobby was warm.. » (shouln’t it be Karl ?)
-
lol you wouldn’t have that crazy amount of comments if you didn’t set that crazy cliffhanger 😜😂🤣 you get back what you have thrown to us 🤣😂
- 55 comments
-
- 11
-
-
