Danilo Syrtis
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when you thought things have ended, you bring something new and interesting. definitly awesome writing and a good story 👍
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i think i found a few typo « “But you do.” Ian sot back. » shot ? « Turning to Kathy he gave he » her ? Great chapter 👍
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sadly children abuse and torture are too often in the world but glad Lex made it through. end of chapter was really hot !! 😄
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indeed that was cruel to let this chapter end this way lol so happy i don’t have to wait for the next chapter !😁
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ouch the wax scene was just hot ! 🙈 no wonder that everyone was holding breath 😁 hopefully, you can now remove easily furs with creams , so no more screams 😜 (i tried and it works fine within 5 mins) but no more hot scene as well 🙊
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i think i found some typo : and « Or even some one other than you three. An enemy to all of Makarovia? » . « someone »? « There were no bandages covering their noses had b and stopped when it coagulated to stop bleeding. » « Being raised raised where you don't worry about things like monthly bills sounds great. » raised x2 ? Great charter and awesome writing 👍. Yuri & Boris deserve to have their own story 😍 can’t wait to see the Consortium destroyed !
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very good start made we want to go on with the story 👍
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one sequel for camp refugee, one for silverwolf, one for bluegrass symphony, and probably for your other stories. you need to increase your writing and delivery pace 😜
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for myself, i honestly never heard of demisexual ! only of « asexual » and imo it should be used for someone without genital organs (etymologically the prefix « a » stand for « without ») but since it is hard to always say « no sexual attraction »😁 i admit that it is a good way. i wonder if Orson might be demisexual as well 😄 Jeremy is indeed a lucky young man 😍 and, i don’t mind about writers that make me learn stuffs 😜 we are never smart enough that we can’t learn. there is no useless knowledge 😝
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i need to correct something about « Believe me, Monsieurs » : the correct form is « Believe me, Messieurs » (plural in french for Monsieur is Messieurs) btw i have the Y chromosome but i have never been in love with cars 😂 another great chapter 👍
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i’m already missing Jeremy, Mason, Greg and Clay 🙈 they are so cute missing each other 😍 i hope we will know more about Jeremy , what happened to him. i know i will cry but i can’t help wanting to know all about him 🙈
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NO !!!! Don’t make me cry like you did with « Fleeting Eternity » 😭 i’m already feeling tears coming !!! ( 💩, i need to buy tissus 🙈) ok Jeremy got HIV, and so what ? you can love somebody without having sex ! and they still can have safe sex !
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ho ho ! Clay is « really » a fast guy when it is about his « aim » 😂 mhmm Jeremy too old for Mason ? some background to be cleared in some future chapter 😍 there is a trans character ? could it be the ranger ? 🙊
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so sad about Greg’s story 😩 hope that the ranger is not going make problems to Greg’s campground ! 🙊 and Mason is definitely some little 😈 and Jeremy is going in his trap completely unaware of it 🙈... or he is aware and he run into it on purpose ? 😄
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guess soon Mason will not be alone in his cabin 😂
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LOL Mason got lot of things to handle within 24h 😂 another great chapter 😍 mhmm bookmarked that « ember and ash » for a later reading 👍
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whaou ! Clay is some « fast » guy when he talks with his « gun » 😂
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Wayne, you have always good ideas for your characters 😄 and their backgrounds 👍 i’m already loving them and the story 😍
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NO !!! you can’t leave us this way !!🙈 there are still lot of things (Shawn, Joan,..) to explore !!! 🙊 Anyone got the « voice » to command Wayne to write more chapters ? 😂 « sit next your computer and add more chapters ! » 🤣
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The End of Another Year
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in The End of Another Year
so sad about Julie but we all knew this was going to happen 😩 Can’t wait for the next book !! 👍 btw : “We’re really glad you came”, « Danny » told them next. i thought it was Danny who was narrating 🤔 “And we’re hoping you can bring the kids to visit us in Texas this summer and we promise « to » show you a great time,” ? 🤔 -
i loved the Pern’s serie too, but i didn’t read the others with Piemur because i lost interest about the other series so sad about Julie btw shouldn’t dogs wag their tails instead of their « tales » ? 🤔
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himura is yakuza ? 😆 ok we have russian maffia, chinese triad. next yakuza and what else ? 😂
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i suspected that the twins’ parents were in triad since they never came to see the twins, but i wouldn’t suspect that both twins are so deep in too ! 🙊
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wow wow wow ! nobody seems to be what they are supposed to be !
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wow wow wow ! things going to be very interesting !!
