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This scene is one of my favourite, pieces of gay writing, although this part is even more dramatic from Randy's perspective. The deer caught in the headlights; pinned down, terrified, desperately attempting to avoid Ryan's soul exposing gaze, then the sudden meeting of the eyes, Randy's obvious arousal and Ryan's final affirmation: "mmmm....there we go". A calming hand to the lips and then the kiss. Beautiful, poignant and undeniable. Thank you Comsie, for having brought this enduring scene to life. Extract from: New Kid In School - Chapter 1 I figured that I had better do something to break the mood. So I dropped the video game controller and shouted, "Are you calling me a liar punk?" like Clint Eastwood. And I tackled him onto the bed. I was expecting to get a few hands on one of those awesome ass cheeks of his and maybe a grab at his crotch so I could get an idea of what he was 'packing'. But he overpowered me and soon he was on top of me on the floor. I tried to get up, but he had me pinned. I looked up into his eyes, and there he was...giving me the look. Oh no! Don't get hard, don't get hard, don't get hard...! I tried to look away, but he kept following my eyes and staring deep into them. He wouldn't even say anything, he just kept looking at me. I felt a stirring in my loins and couldn't stop it now. I struggled to get up before he noticed, but he held me down by pressing his crotch into mine. A smile broke out on his face and I knew he'd felt it. What happened next just blew me away! He looked down at me and whispered, "mmmm....there we go." And he began grinding into me slowly. I could NOT believe this was happening! Here I was, with the most gorgeous 13 year old in the world on top of me...and he was loving it! I suddenly let my paranoia get the best of me and figured that I should speak up. Just in case he was 'testing me' to see if I was gay. But as soon as I opened my mouth to speak, he put his hand up to my lips and whispered "Shhhhh..." Then he kissed me.

I love how all these short stories have something personal and unique about them. There's always that twist. In this case, Oren mistaking the school babe's love letter for Jon's and then shooting the messenger, with a weapon of Cupid's own making. A lesson learned about courage, or the lack of it. But there's never any doubt about the passion of the characters. They ride these things wilder than any mare.

How is that possible: to get so much life, twists, turns and emotional highs, lows and highs into a single chapter? Stop the ride; I want to get on again!

And to think, Ryan and Randy don't have a clue what they're missing across the street. 😴🤧

The Smokin' Ed's Carolina Reaper of erotic romances. You have been warned 🤬🤪

One of my favourite short stories. As told through the eyes of an innocent youth, trying to make sense of the world by putting a positive spin on all of the harsh lessons, that life has to teach him. There's a real anxiety and tension created from our being in the position of a helpless observer and being incapable of reaching out, to share our worldly wisdom.

One of my favourite short stories. As told through the eyes of an innocent youth, trying to make sense of the world by putting a positive spin on all of the harsh lessons, that life has to teach him. There's a real anxiety and tension created from our being in the position of a helpless observer and being incapable of reaching out, to share our worldly wisdom. Sadly, there's a world of pain awaiting Keegan from the Hunters that prowl around and a realisation, that regrettably, many lessons in life, have to be learnt the hard way.

Well, that was one intensively passionate and sex-crazed, happy, forever endings there. Tyler and Ariel are clearly in for one heck of a ride and will no doubt shock eachother plenty, from this point forward. Great story. Even mind blowing at times. I do hope it gets revisited at some point.

Brilliantly written; I'm almost lost for words. Ariel and Tyler are the epitome of the erotic as much as Randy and Ryan were an exposé of loyalty and commitment. I'm intrigued as to which aspect, the New Kid in School series, will focus on next (if indeed, that's how it turns out). If I were able to be purely objective about it then, of course, a lot of what AlexG says above, makes sense.

Ariel is so cute and one of a kind that I bet Tyler can't believe his luck right now. Sure he wishes that there was a manual on Ariel lurking somewhere. But thankfully, the routine of 'hi, look down, bed, strip and mate hard, all day', doesn't look like it will break his new toy, anytime soon. 😘 Such great characters and erotic writing that we are witnessing here.

I don't get why Tyler can't just tell Ariel about his past with Matt and Sam. Ariel knows Tyler is sexually experienced and it's actually an attraction for him. Maybe Tyler, Sam and Matt were into something really kinky that I've not heard about. Even then, as timid as Ariel is, he doesn't seem the type to freak out from hearing of Tyler having done something more sexually adventurous. After any initial shock, he'd probably be intrigued. Or It maybe that Tyler is just being sweet and wanting to protect the mind of his innocent little boy.

Ryan is being seen as a worse boyfriend to Randy in this side of the story. I always imagined him looking all over the park, for Randy, after he got off the ride with Sean. He's pretty uncaring here. He's also insensitive to all his other friends around him who clearly don't like Sean. Pretty selfish really except for when it benefits him. Fortunately, he's found Randy who is the glue in their relationship. Few others would trust him as a life-long partner. Sometimes it takes a Sean type character to turn up on the scene, for some people to show their true colours.

... and pushing on...

Phew, that was sizzling!! I doubt they will ever forget the day that Ariel gave up his little 'Blue Teddy' for Tyler.

Maybe now we'll get to hear what Sean said to Ariel and Tyler that got them upset. Usual Sean flirt stuff no doubt but was it with Ariel, Tyler or both?

Well I don't see too many other comments here yet, so I'll just come out and say it. I know it doesn't do it justice but that was some incredibly written, hot sex scene we got there from the grand master. If only I was more like Ariel and just keep my mouth shut and blushed. 😊

Well I'm not sure that he thinks it still works now, after tasting Tylers "virgin" kiss. 😀 I'm beginning to have my doubts too.

Yeah! we are witnessing true love in the making. So cute. Gramms is a woman of the world: she knows how a smile like Ariel's, gets onto somebody's face. Especially, a boy that panics about not having brushed his teeth as Tyler arrives. OK so the boy/boy thing may have stumped her for a while. But I doubt Gramms is grinning about his exams when she says: "Knock 'em dead kid". As Hook pointed out above, she could be instrumental in giving Ariel his confidence.

Well, that was completely mind-blowing stuff. There was absolutely nothing left out and you couldn't have hoped to have witnessed more, if you'd actually been there, in the bedroom with them 😉. Like Ariel says, it was the perfect day. Tyler was so utterly committed to making this a day to remember for Ariel. Ariel could have just lay back and enjoyed one bj after another for the entire day, as far as Tyler was concerned. But that was never going to happen given that Ariel was seeking Tyler's happiness, every bit as much. I love the way that, an erotically charged Ariel, forgets his shyness, and gently pushes Tyler back on the bed, to get his way. All bodes well for Ariel' s development. And as good as Randy and Ryan's beginnings were, I suspect that Ariel and Tyler's account is about about to blow that romantic interlude, out of the water. 😍😘 Peek-a-boo.

Amazingly hot stuff. And more to come 😋

Well its even better than I thought it would be. At first, I thought this spin-off would simply fill in the missing details about Ariel and Tyler's coming together, as good as that would be. But it's turned out a lot cleverer than that. Comsie is running through many of the same events in the main story, in perfect detail from an entirely different perspective. As a reader, you can't help but try to recall those exact same events from memory, to compare and contrast the two timelines. The wonder is: what details may have been added to, ommited from or altered our understanding of the events that took place. It's going to get real crazy, if the other spin-offs have done this too. Time to find out! 🙂

It was frustrating not knowing what was happening between Ariel and Tyler, when reading the main New Kid in School serial. I was waiting patiently for Ariel or Tyler to spill the beans to Randy but they never did. And here it was, all along, in full Technicolor detail. Cool. 😎 These spin-off stories are an awesome feature that I've just come across.

Really, was that it? I was expecting fireworks. The story of my life. 😕 😉

Left to themselves, Randy and Ryan make an ideal couple and this was certainly a great time for them. What I did come to learn from this chapter was the way Sean makes you view them as a couple. In the previous chapter Sean came on strong and Ryan was ambivalent to the hurt that it caused Randy. I felt strongly that Randy deserved better and needed to move on. In this chapter, Sean was far less prominent and everything appeared well with the world. Clearly, you don't want to throw out the baby with the bath water, and there's too much invested in this relationship to risk throwing it all away. So it appears that Randy will just have to endure Sean's hell, in order to keep his man; and maybe, that is worth it. Without a doubt, Ryan is a complete and utter ass for making Randy do that though. Another part of me thinks that Randy should offer for Ryan to have his fling with Sean, and let him get it out of his system. Randy would be making it clear how much he would be willing to sacrifice, to get Sean out of their lives, so that they can enjoy a Sean free future together. It might just be the wake up call that Ryan needs. Of course, the hope would be that Ryan would do the honourable thing and not romp off with Sean.🤔 -------------------------------------------------------------------- The luxury of reading sixty chapters on the bounce, comes to an end. Time to join the queue. Thank you Comsie for all your efforts in putting this together.

Ryan knows how hurt he was when Tyler was making a play for Randy, so he has to know how he is hurting Randy, by making him jealous of Sean. I'm amazed that Ryan has showed almost no remorse for making Randy feel, it was necessary to get out of his sick bed, to keep a watchful eye on Sean. OK, so he feeds him chicken soup while he jumps into bed with him. Big deal! Nothing has changed. Ryan then dismisses these texts with Sean as innocent fun, even though he must see they are hurting Randy. It's not true love, if you don't care about all of a person's feelings. Ryan appears to be going through the motions of acting out, being in love but his actions are close to someone selfishly enjoying a friend on tap. Randy is a far better friend than Ryan deserves. The relationship works because Randy has a lot less self esteem and believes he is the luckier of the two. He views Ryan, and his imperfections, as still an incredible catch and more than he has a right to expect. It also means that Ryan can get away with the things that he does. Randy, you need to stand up for yourself and stop being a doormat. Pull the rug from under Ryan's feet while you're at it! Then wrap Sean's body up in both and bury him. 😉