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Hey! Chris is one of the people you know. 😂 or he thinks he is not that he’s a prince or anything 😂😂
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Question of the century! Hehehe
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Wow wow! This is very insightful! 🥰 tons of things to think about. Thanks @Rosicky
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Chris’ POV “Purple?” I asked, what does Victor mean? I swiftly blinked my eyes to give my boyfriend a closer look. “Never mind, your eyes are blue again,” he replied, as he helped me get back to my feet. The look of concern on Victor’s face remained, but for now he kept silent about it. Standing, I felt sore, but was healing fast. In a few hours, I reckon I’ll be back to tip top shape. We were approached by August, who was accompanied by my uncle and three more agents. “Chris,
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The First General 3 -reupload
gabz2000 commented on gabz2000's story chapter in The First General 3 -reupload
Aww wow... what an insightful comment. You’ve left me with a lot of stuff to ponder on. And yes, to the next 100 indeed! -
Hey! 😉 Glad to know there are still people that just started reading this story. The story and my writing is a work in progress. I do hope you enjoy it despite the occasional lapses. This story is my first one and as a non native English speaker, I do slip every now and then 😉
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The First General 3 -reupload
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@Timejun this is the updated version of ch100. I dunno how you were able to leave a comment on the unpublished version but this is the new one hehe.😉 -
The First General 3 -reupload
gabz2000 commented on gabz2000's story chapter in The First General 3 -reupload
Sorry for the repeated edits/unpublishing and republishing this chapter. I encountered some formatting difficulties. Anyway... I hope you guys enjoy! Shoutout to @Dyaus to being the first one to react on the first version of this chapter, also to @MJC and @Freemantleman for being able to react as well to the previous iteration of this chapter before I messed up the formatting 😂- 20 comments
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Three hooded figures were slowly approaching us, faces partly hidden behind dark cloth over their heads. Their approach was slow, cautious, measured, yet had an air of confidence at the same time. My skin was tingling and I suddenly found it hard to breathe, my head was also starting to throb in pain. I immediately raised mental shields around my team and the newly rescued Anami. “Sarah ... Chase, watch over these three, they’re not fit for combat, let me, August, and Victor handle the r
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Scorch the Earth? Like Astra Spell level of scorching? 😂😂😂
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It’s been one hour since we lost contact with the Cleveland teams, I was now in my office with Victor, Yal, and Kalron. The four of us, were in a video conference call with August, Reza, Konrad, and Luigi. “So, three confirmed demon bases, and we’ve lost our Cleveland team?” August asked. His demeanor clearly showed a slight hint of edge, and I can understand his frustration with our situation. “I understand the mission in Indianapolis succeeded,” Reza calmly said, his eyes showing a lar
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I don’t know why/how it would reflect as a new chapter on your end. All I did was make a few edits. Hehe 😅 But hopefully a new chapter will be out soon! Please wait for it. 😅
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In the early evening, Victor and I went out to dinner with Reza, Konrad, Luca, August, Stefano, and Hashim. We found ourselves in an upscale Italian restaurant. I wasn’t surprised to learn the restaurant is vampire-owned. “Did you see the look an Olaf’s face, when King Ethnar and Chris released their auras?” Konrad chuckled. “His mistake, for doubting my boyfriend’s power,” Victor proudly retorted from my side. “Olaf, will not make that mistake again,” August added with a small la
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Huhu sorry! Work has been hectic 😭
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Chapter 64 - "Exchanged Wisdom"
gabz2000 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 64 - "Exchanged Wisdom"
"Hehehe, oh yeah. I remember." I said, remembering the very brief time that Tyler and I were...well...not 'together', but...entertaining one another when he first moved here. —- I wonder how Ariel would have reacted if he pieced it together? Hehe 😂 must be such a hot image for him to think of Tyler and Randy going at it 😂🔥🔥🔥 -
Remember the good ol’ days of chapters being 1.5-2k words long? Heheh 😂
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We landed at Teterboro Airport around half past 10, and to be honest I wasn’t quite myself during the trip from the airport in Richmond to New York. I spent the hour long flight lost in thought about the chaos that engulfed Detroit. I kept asking myself whether or not we could have done something about it, whether or not we could have anticipated such an attack. I asked myself those questions again, and again, and the answer was always the same, we were grossly underprepared for the demon th
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Next chapter will be posted at 7pm London time.
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I can’t get the image off my head 😂😂😂
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Thanks for the feedback guys!
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“Just dropped dead?” I had chills down my spine as I asked that question. “Yes your highness.” Kalron confirmed. “Chris. It could be some sort of magic” “Most likely Yal... there’s no other explanation” I then put my attention on the other elf. “Kalron, any indication as to what happened to the vampire and human syndicates that previously occupied the Chicago hideout?” “No update yet on that your highness” “Look into it. Somehow it bothers me and I think there’s more to this
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Chapter 33 - Boy Meets Boy Meets Boy
gabz2000 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Boy Meets Boy Meets Boy
Scotty is just so adorable! I hope Scotty and Artie get it on soon! So Jesse and Tristan can go back to openly flirting again hehe -
The first book I opened contained ancient knowledge on magic and spells. The book was written by three elves, T’avar, Ratha, and Asenwe. References to various Egyptian Pharaohs allowed me to narrow down when it was written to the time of the Third Dynasty of Ancient Egypt, some time between 2686 and 2613 BC. This coincided with the time when the House of Tarud became the monarchs of the elves after Queen Hasera of the House of Maktar died without an heir then her husband, Prince Tarud ca
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Chapter 94 - Titles Morning came all too soon for my liking. However the warmth of Victor’s body beside certainly gave me comfort. I left Victor asleep in our bedroom as I made my way to the kitchen to grab some juice, the mansion was still quiet. I guess everyone decided to sleep in. Aside from some of Luca’s security detail making their rounds and household staff tending the garden, I didn’t see anybody else. “Good Morning Chris” Luca greeted me as he walked i
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We left the three High Circle Members in the temple and the waves of energy continued to emanate from them as we closed the doors behind us. “Can you feel the change in the air?” Patri asked me. “Yes Patri. I can feel the energy flowing from the temple and into the surrounding area.” I paused to look around and saw nothing’s really changed in how the way things appeared to be. “It’s as if magic is being fed into the realm itself...” Patri saw me looking around and commented “
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