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An evocative tale of 2 men who find each other in the midst of tragedy. You will smile, laugh, cry and feel a sense of hope. This was a jolly good read and would make a wonderful start to a full length story. Headstall is a skilled author and this is evident in "On Track".
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Chapter 1 Sentimental Journey
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Sentimental Journey
Thank you for this lovely story of 2 men who find each other in the midst of trauma. Your writing is so powerful and evokes the full gambit of emotions. I laughed, cried, smiled and felt a sense if peace at the end. I hope that I will meet my own Paul. Thank you for committing rue time and energy to your stories. I love them. -
Chapter 1 Sentimental Journey
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Sentimental Journey
It is the strangest thing when you connect with someone you have never met. -
This was a wonderful story with realistic characters who capture our hearts. There were moments if delight, of sadness, of laughter and of being turned on. A super story. Thank you.
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Another wonderful chapter. Story has advanced and a major raid is about to take place. Our guys are increasingly comfortable with each other and their love has grown. So well written. Thank you.
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"You Were Already in Here"
Doha commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "You Were Already in Here"
It is. -
But will he remain with he service? Or is this an opportunity to move on?
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A super chapter. Bulldog gets a bit "come on" and has no difficulty saying No. A cliffhanger, which I'm sure will have Bubba well in a short while.
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It's a disaster. What to do...
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Yeah, Bubba will pull through, but in the meantime we sweat.
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Another super chapter. Thank you Rex, author come realtor guy.
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Yes. I bet Sid comes to stay. And that he is a little bit gay. Lol
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Yeah, that spidey tingling thing is going to play a role in a bit, and not just with Sid.
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Yeah, i don't know how he is able to keep his head above water, knowing he won't see the boys again. I'm sure that will change somehow.
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"I've Really Fucked This Up, Haven't I?"
Doha commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "I've Really Fucked This Up, Haven't I?"
Yeah, rhey needed to find an equilibrium and this bust up did it, or at least has got them closer to being equals. -
"I've Really Fucked This Up, Haven't I?"
Doha commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "I've Really Fucked This Up, Haven't I?"
Chuck will get his ass whipped. Not in a good way. -
"I've Really Fucked This Up, Haven't I?"
Doha commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "I've Really Fucked This Up, Haven't I?"
Yeah, this bust up was kinda necessary, to get clarity. -
They certainly are getting to know each other very well.
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A super chapter, very descriptive. I love the sound of the last house on the river. I wonder why they can't have Olympus.
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Well, that is disappointing.
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Another great chapter with all kinds of practical things taken care of. I'm glad they are seeing each other as life time partners.
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It is definitely a conundrum.
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Lots of Secrets in This Bar
Doha commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Lots of Secrets in This Bar
Another super chapter. I think our guys are going to love "Norlans". Nice to meet Rex and his spidy sense. Let's see what he comes up with. -
Lots of Secrets in This Bar
Doha commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Lots of Secrets in This Bar
Yeah, it does seem odd that married guys go to a gay bar. -
Wonderful chapter, great sex, plot unfolding. Enjoying every line.
