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A great chapter. Quiet and giving space for Tyler and Elijah to process the horror of what has happened.
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And we nod them so well. Wisely, even.
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And we nod them so well. Wisely, even.
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What a killer of a cliffhanger. OMG. These 2 are doing well as sleuths. Thankfully I held back for a few chapters and can now just move on. Yaaay.
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I know. It's a nightmare.
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A great chapter as always. Tyler and Elijah handled the situation with a grieving mum really well. It's getting real now. Fingers frosted for our boys.
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Agreed. Some special new ability will emerge I'm sure.
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Thank you for a fantastic chapter. We are starting to see a much more human side to Jonathan's parents. Maddox and Jonathan are stronger now than ever, Jonathan can return to Sunny Hill. 🌞
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Yes. For sure. He has a great group of friends now and should be able to weather the storm.
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That's a good idea.💡
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Agreed. Running is not an option.
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Fast mom cars. Cool. Wondering about the order to search, since Elijah has some second thoughts. Let's see. Safe from target's, being on page 7 of comments. 🤣
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Chapter 32: Struggling Shadows
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 32: Struggling Shadows
Grumpy's boyfriend is a fun guy and I think that he and Vincent are going to become friends. Vincent has certainly come a long way and perhaps is almost at the point that he can give Stephan a real challenge. Bur we need to be sure I'd a victory and that is going to be very difficult. What has happened at the monastery?? Hmmm. Let me pour a Dancin' Bear 🐻 and think it through. -
Lord of the Flies is an eye opener for sure. Yeah, it does make me wonder.
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A great chapter. I'm glad Thler got to have some fun ☺ Let's see how rhe planning goes to get the pups back. Teams of 2 seem small. Perhaps Sebastian knows something we don't.
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Yeah, it does make me wonder.
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Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
A super chapter. Thank you. 😊 Vincent is doing so well. I'm glad Kap's parents seem to have softened somewhat. Like others have said, I hope he comes with Cy. There may be a spot of bother. -
Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
May it whisper loudly soon. -
I'm relieved that Karl has been rescued. I wonder how long he will be with the Amerixan submarine? The kid who treated him seems to genuinely care.
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I found it difficult to keep track of the number of planes in the skirmish. I hope Carl is alive and that he will get back to shore. There is a very strong bond between him and Kristian and I do wonder if it will become something more. 🤔 Let's see how he gets back to land.
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Meeting The Future In-Laws
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Meeting The Future In-Laws
That conversation was an eye opener.- 45 comments
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Meeting The Future In-Laws
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Meeting The Future In-Laws
The guys have had a good start. I'm glad that Francine is supporting Jonathan. Rusty is going to be put through some stringent voice training 😃 Maddox did well !- 45 comments
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Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
What a wonderful chapter. Thank you! Drew is an absolute idiot. I'm sure that Jonathan's parents are going to be behind him and Maddox. Rhere may be a struggle at first, but his mum will be the one to push this. Maddox may not be wealthy, however, he will give Jonathan a lifetime of happiness and the home environment in which Jonathan will flourish. That is priceless. As for leaving Rusty at large with an old Charleston type family - can't wait to read about that. I bet there is a music scholarship in his future funded by Jonathan's family. -
Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
Yeah, there is something happening in the background for sure. I think, though, that Jonathan's mum is going to be on his side and after a brief struggle his father will see the light and give the Kincaid's their marching orders.
