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Doha

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  1. A powerful chapter. To see yourself but not recognize yourself must be very disconcerting. Yes, Frank is dead, Barry emerges. I'm still worrying about the boys.
  2. Well, the big event is upon us. Vinnie is ready. Now he needs to put it all into action. The Seven are with him.
  3. Yes, he is ready. But he will need to concentrate like never before.
  4. A collection of 5 poems, Fireworks and Rain will leave you breathless and emotions churning. Touching on the full gambit of human emotion, these poems speak to the heart and soul. I am so glad I read them.
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  5. Doha

    I May Pass Out

    Thank you for another amazing chapter. Barry is certainly steaming ahead. I wonder how the boys are.
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    I May Pass Out

    Agreed on every point.
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    I May Pass Out

    Yeah, love is lovely.
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    I May Pass Out

    It was pretty awesome. 😍
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    Dave is DIC

    Barry and Dave are doing well. They are a good fit.
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    Dates

    As we grow older those memories become more dear, and I do wonder about the fork in the road years ago. Thank you for writing these evocative poems.
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    Somewhere

    We live in hope that the right one will emerge, and in the meantime enjoy time with dear friends.
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    Somewhere

    So true, yet so frustrating.
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    Legacy

    A sad tale of not recognizing the signs of decline, sit behind this poem I think. 😪
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    Rant

    The pain ypu describe is made tangible. Your words are so simple yet so eloquent. That feeling of loss with nothing that can be done but move on, is extremely difficult to bear.
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    Rant

    Yes. That is a totally different level of pain.
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    Jubilee

    That is lovely. Filled with hope and happiness.
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    My story

    Thank you for sharing part of your own journey. I think parts of it resonate with many of us who only came to an understanding of who we are, later in life. I have enjoyed everything you have written and hope you continue to write.
  18. Loving it Rex. 😍 Dave is so good for Barry. This is a dream team. Chapter 15 awaits
  19. Agreed. The sooner the better. It's already been weeks since rhe shooting of his wife.
  20. It was good to be in Dave's head this time. They are a great couple and I think they have the potential to be life partners. I hope so. If only there was a way to bring the boys in.
  21. Oh I agree totally 😃
  22. Everything you have said here resonates with me. He has been a good dad, and when push came to shove Barry did the right thing.
  23. Yes. It seems so unfair.
  24. Those poor boys indeed. I'm still hopefully though, that this is a set up and that the boys will be reunited with their dad. And Dave.
  25. I'm guessing this was a set up so he can go into protection.
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