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Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
NewEnglander commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
Love your beautifully positive stories! This one is great! 😀 -
Hello from Cape Cod! Land of Provincetown, the gayest city in America, according to the United States Census! LOL Really enjoying alternating between watching the seals and reading your wonderful writing!
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Another intriguing chapter!
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Another great chapter. Really like your conversational dialogue and character development. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Hoping a new recruit is being prepared!
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Loving this story so far! 😄
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I always enjoy your stories, Bill. Thanks for sharing your talent. This first chapter flows beautifully.
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Another enthralling story, Bill. Thanks!
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Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
NewEnglander commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
Another awesome story, Bill. Thanks again for sharing your talents with us! -
More of your amazing inspiring writing, Bill! The bus driver in the story decided to turn his thoughts into action. What a better place our world would be if we would each take the time to help someone in need when we can. Thanks for inspiring us again, Bill!
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Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
NewEnglander commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
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Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
NewEnglander commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
A heartwarming story written just for the times in which we find ourselves. Even now. You made me cry again! 😀 Thanks Bill for more of your great writing! -
Chapter 40 - A Nearly Perfect Ending
NewEnglander commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 40 - A Nearly Perfect Ending
I've always enjoyed your writing, Bill, and this is another example of your fine writing that I enjoy so much. Your optimism and hope always pervades your work. Thanks for this gift to us. -
Chapter 20 - Presidential Estates
NewEnglander commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Presidential Estates
These are exactly the kinds of vacations my sister and I took with my parents growing up; a little pure fun mixed with learning about our nation's history and natural environment. Your writing draws me in. You so effectively paint a picture that makes me feel like I'm right there with your story characters. Thanks for sharing your talents, Bill. -
Yes, I totally got your message here. There is so much that God, or whatever Force you believe in, can teach us through the unlikeliest of sources. We just have to open ourselves up in order to receive those gifts. I love this deep message imbedded in your story.... Joe learned something truly transforming from someone very different from him, but he had to open himself up to receive that gift.... Great writing, Wayne!
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That's the key, isn't it? These parents should inspire parents everywhere.
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Are you even capable of writing a story that doesn't at some point make me cry, Wayne?! 😀 Another wonderful story. I hope to hear more about Joe. It would seem that Joe has both a lot to learn and a lot to say! And perhaps Jake does too.... "... even if you're not sure, you just gotta dive in."
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Your writing grabs for my soul every time, Wayne! I'm grateful that you so freely share your amazing talent for spinning a yarn that simply draws me in, taking me for a delightful roller coaster ride of emotions. You have a gift for painting a picture with your words while conveying emotions and feelings. I absolutely love this short story. Thank you.
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Wow, this one is a tear-jerker! But such good writing. Thanks for sharing your gifts with us, Bill!
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Great writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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"Arguing about deities with Mexican peasants wasn't going to get me very far." Wow, that sounds arrogant and xenophobic and classist and... well, you get the picture. I like Stefan, but had hoped for a more enlightened and tolerant attitude. I get that the author is not a fan of God, but....
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It's obvious you don't like President Johnson and I don't necessarily disagree. But you make little to no mention of the Voting Rights Act and Civil Rights Act that he worked so hard to get passed.... That's a pretty big omission, don't you think, Mark?
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Your gift for writing really shows in this final chapter. Again, thanks for sharing your gifts with the rest of us. You inspire me to get back into writing fiction.
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Granger's encounters with the Countess were inspiring. Assessing her personality and guiding her behavior toward his goal utilizing that assessment is a real gift. I cannot imagine that his loyal servant Winkler will leave the country without him. Once again, Mark's writing has me anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
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So grateful to you as an author for sharing your storytelling skills with all of us! I have loved sharing with my husband and daughter about this story over the past few months. I look forward to reading more of your captivating writing!
