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I'm sorry that it ended so soon - your relationship and the story too. (I hope he didn't find this story somehow and get freaked out :S... Sorry, not likely I guess.) Anyway, it was fascinating to read your explanations about Chinese culture, society, worldview, etc.! It would be great to read more about that if you feel like writing another story : ). I'm glad when there are 'real' stories to read, as I usually find them to be the most interesting and impactful. Thank you for sharing those insights and part of your life with us. You're still young, so I wouldn't give up on love yet : ). All the best!

Hey Krista, Thanks a lot for the new chapters! I'm glad I stopped by GA and saw them. I feel bad for Corey, but especially for his mother. I really hope his Dad can find a way to deal with his anger and bitterness, though I guess it does add drama to the story : ). At least Corey has Jenny and Clinton, and hopefully Trouble, who sounds so adorable. Your comment below has me intriged about the interesting things you have planned for this story - now I'm looking forward to new updates even more!

Great first chapter! It sucked me into their world right away, and I'm really eager to read more about these characters. I love stories with jockish jerk types that (hopefully) end up redeeming themselves or being humbled some with the help of a guy like Asher - so, I'm really glad that I came across this story : ). Thanks for sharing it, & looking forward to the rest!

I had pink eye once a long time ago... My eye swelled up quite a bit, oh and the 'pinkness' might be a symptom too? Well, I hope you don't have it, or at least that it's a mild version that doesn't made you look 'freakish' ... I think there's eye drops that will cure it... Heheh, guess that didn't help too much! Sorry :S