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Chapter 34: The Danish Gambit – Part I
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 34: The Danish Gambit – Part I
LMAO, 'an air of desperation'...damn! 🤣 But you're right, he seems quite...persistent. Ohhhhh...now, that would be...interesting, wouldn't it? 🤔 -
34. THE DANISH GAMBIT Part I “Why doesn’t he like me?” I asked Vinicius as a tiny black puppy—that had somehow found its way into the Valentini Academy and into my Mentor’s green garden—backed away from us both in fear. The little four-legged rascal had floppy ears and the small boy in me wanted to do nothing more than to pick him up and play with him. I’d never had a pet before, but the book Vinicius gave me on dog breeds made my heart yearn for an animal companion. V
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Moving On Moving on is supposed to be good for the soul—healthy. But for David, it seemed unthinkable. He wondered how it was possible for everything surrounding him to continue appearing so normal. Something tragic had happened, yet he was expected to go on. Get over it, like it was just a bad cold. Of course nobody had told him that to his face, but he could feel it—the expectation in his family and friends for their conversations to return to how they used to be—easygoing and fun. T
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A Wail of Grief When blunt trauma occurs during a pregnancy, medical professionals follow a simple protocol to asses the situation. First, they stabilize the mother. Then they check on the baby. There are a myriad of ways to proceed if fetal heartbeat is detected. There are none, when the heartbeat is gone. There are no attempts at resuscitation. “Fetal heart tone absent.” That’s the sentence that broke Elisabeth Andrew’s heart. She remembered it now, clear as day. It was never forgott
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Chapter 3: A Wail of Grief
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 3: A Wail of Grief
That's so very beautifully put, wow! It could definitely have been his son's spirit protecting his parents before departing, you're right. Some might argue it could have just been David's wishful thinking or head trauma. It probably boils down to whether you believe in things that might not have an earthly explanation. Thank you for the kind comment 🙏🏼 -
Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
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The Gray Honda Kat Bryce had always been a curious girl, a trait her intelligent father adored and her beautiful mother loathed. When she was ten and her parents were away at dinner, she took apart three of her father’s Rolex watches, just to see what they looked like inside. Her father pretended to be upset in front of his wife Louise, but after she fell asleep he and Kat had a bowl of ice-cream, and they looked at the intricate watch parts together. They marveled at the complexities of wh
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Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
True, but stranger things have happened! -
Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
Thank you for reading. Maybe you can help the detectives solve the case 😁 More info coming in the next chapter, hopefully it will help to answer some of those questions! -
Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
Indeed she is haha -
Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Perfect Couple
Ahh, interesting assessment. Yes, you do almost feel sorry for her. -
Prologue: The Accident
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Prologue: The Accident
Thank you, appreciate you migrating to this other story of mine and giving it your time. And what can I say, Shakespeare still be hittin' 😁 -
Prologue: The Accident
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Prologue: The Accident
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Prologue: The Accident
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Prologue: The Accident
There seems to be something more at play than a typical hit-and-run, you're right. -
Prologue: The Accident
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Prologue: The Accident
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The Perfect Couple A Few Hours Before the Accident David and Elisabeth Andrews were the perfect couple, or so Celia Braier thought to herself on Sunday night as she and her husband Frank hosted a small dinner party for their two favorite friends. It was Celia’s idea: a cozy last double date, before the baby and its diapers would start to take up all of their time. Celia delighted in every second that the glamorous couple was over at their house. It was her favorite way to spend ti
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If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge? — William Shakespeare The Accident It happened in exactly two seconds. The first second, a black vintage Mercedes convertible glided down a secluded windy road—a few miles over the speed limit—on a warm summer night with its top leisurely rolled down. Technically, it carried two passengers, but had you asked the driver,
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When a brutal hit-and-run accident ends the life of his son, David Andrews is left picking up the shattered pieces of what remains. As his marriage, career, and friendships unravel, he becomes fixated on finding the other driver and taking revenge. Kat Bryce is a rookie detective partnered up with Jack Miller, a veteran officer with his own unique vision of justice. Despite their moral differences they quickly reach the same conclusion—something about the Andrews case is sinister. As they scramble to solve the mystery, David begins his own investigation. This father's love knows no bounds, but how far will he go to uncover the truth?
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It's coming up real soon 😬
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Poetic words, my friend. I appreciate the time it took you to write this 🙏🏼 Famous last words had me cackling. 🤣 💀 Hmm, I can think of a couple reasons. Villains aren't always dislikable, like you said. Unlike Maratoni or Deadnus, Ciprian has the natural Carandini charisma and a dark sense of humor that make him a lot more tolerable to be around. I have a feeling this will be a disputed point... lol. Deadnus was ready to kill a dog out of spite. C'mon. That's what it seems like, you're right. Wouldn't be much of a fun ending if the entire society was destroyed 😬 You're right, they certainly don't seem to care. I guess we'll have to see how far Vincent is willing to go for revenge.
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Thank you, I appreciate the feedback. And actually, never heard of it until now. I looked it up just now and will have to read up as it sounds fascinating!
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Chapter 32: The Immortal’s War
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 32: The Immortal’s War
Let's keep in mind Vinicius was very insistent on keeping Dani rather isolated. Not that what you're saying is impossible...but it would have been difficult for just anyone to follow his progress under Vinicius' care. Good point! -
True, and that they can work quite well together in the face of danger.
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Yep, I have a feeling you may be right. Thank you!
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Unlike Arani Deadnus, Ciprian does have a few likable qualities 😁 And you're right, it doesn't seem like he'd enjoy all the responsibility of being a king, but he does like pulling the strings from behind-the-scenes.
