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Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
I had a feeling you weren't going to be a fan of uncle Ciprian 😂 -
Chapter 31: Whispers from the Grave
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 31: Whispers from the Grave
Very true. It's time for him to awaken to his own potential! -
Chapter 31: Whispers from the Grave
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 31: Whispers from the Grave
They could be indeed... 🤔 -
Chapter 31: Whispers from the Grave
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 31: Whispers from the Grave
Sounds about right! Right? I'm sure Maratoni will bring him extra pillows and blankets 🤣 🤣 That's if he even gets there with Ciprian behind the wheel. -
31. WHISPERS FROM THE GRAVE After Ciprian’s departure I slowly made my way up from the bed. There was still a slight burning sensation in my abdomen, shoulder, and chest, but it was starting to dissipate. I knew that it was time for me to figure out what I was going to do. I had to have a plan in place—something solid. I couldn’t just jump from one idea to the next and hope that it would all work out. I needed to make a decision that would not only affect my future—but
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Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
Very, very true. Until Dani starts recognizing things for what they truly are while using his own methods of deduction and relying on his instincts, everything being fed to him truly is propaganda. My head grew three sizes bigger from reading that. Thank you for feeding my ego in such a lovely manner 😁 -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
Thank you, Happy New Year! You're right, I think the revelation of who killed Vinicius will have an impact on Dani's decision. -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
Thank you, you're right good health is ideal. Can't take it for granted! Additional chapters? Hmm, if there will still be interest in the story after the ending I have planned then I would consider it. It's been very enjoyable to write. I only wish I had more time! -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
Glad you enjoyed delving into Ciprian's character this chapter. You're right, he is a complex being and Dani will have a lot to figure out when it comes to him. -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
hahah yes some vampire immunity would be good! Thank you for the well wishes. -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
I'll take that into consideration my friend! The story is already written, but each chapter needs quite a bit of editing. I also started a new job and then got sick shortly after, so I've been a bit preoccupied. But I understand your frustration. -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
Happy New Year my friend. I have very much enjoyed reading your comment. You have a beautiful way of putting things! Ciprian is a big question mark at the moment. We have to find out more about him, that's for certain. LMAO Deadnus and Cirprian definitely have history. She's in for one big surprise... Naturally! Let's hope Dani knows how to deal with a lying, murdering, deviant 😬 -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
I believe he considers Graham to be the next best thing to Vinicius at the moment. A stable male role model for him to look up to. -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
It is still unclear, you're correct. We know he likes Dani, but we will have to wait to see what he truly prioritizes. Dani, power, or revenge? -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
Ahh a great summery of his choices as they stand right now. Is there another way? We shall see... -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
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Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
Great observations! Yes, good old uncle Ciprian seems to have his own plans 😬 Seems like a very probable possibility. I agree, his lack of confidence is difficult to witness given the potential he has within him. It's time he learns how to make his own decisions and stick to them. Yes indeed! Can't say more 😁 -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
I agree, time for some action! -
30. THE ASSASSIN'S BULLETS I felt myself floating in the darkness. A strange—yet weirdly satisfying—sensation. A completely weightless body moving at the pace of a cloud. If this was death, I liked it. It was peaceful. Quiet. Nothing like real life with all its ceaseless noise and strife. And then suddenly Vinicius was floating beside me, looking as calm and serene as I remembered him in real life. “This is nice, isn’t it?” The sound of his voice nearly filled my eyes
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Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
That is one beautiful statement 👏🏼. I am ready to hear everyone's thoughts on the next chapter - which I will hurry up and post soon 😁 -
Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
Our friend @Nightlit would certainly agree on the narcissistic part 😁 That would be one awesomely evil trick. Vinicius was tired of his old body so he transported into a beautiful young angelic vampire with unlimited potential! -
Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
Solid point! But could Vinicius be capable of something that might surprise us? We still have quite a bit to learn about him. -
Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
Well damn, that would be one hell of a twist! -
Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
Thank you for stroking my ego 😂 It's much appreciated! -
Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
C. Henderson commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Vampire Killer
Very true!
