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Wiyot

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  1. Wiyot

    Prologue

    h your tell it's due to your kind assistance ❤️
  2. A myriad of emotions; then, starting at chapter 10 I was suddenly so very anxious to see what would happen. t Of course, I also knew the disappointment that would come with the story ending. Loved the ending and yes, disappointed the ride's over. On a separate note, laughter came easily with each, "Shut up, Zach!" What a great character to add who through so few words said so much.
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    the Barlow Boy

    Excellent, thank you.
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    Chapter 15

    The letter in the bin - love it!!!
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    IOI Chapter 3

    Ok so where do I call to reserve the treehouse? LOL
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    Epilogue

    Whew! I had to stop reading the night before, it was so triggering, and allow my mind to breathe and heal a bit before returning to finish. What an incredible job you did making an artful picture with words. Have read that there would be an Enigma III but was unable to find it. Was that ever published?
  7. True art, be it painting, pottery, writing, or otherwise invokes emotions and sometimes even prompts memories. Reading all that "he never" triggered memories and yes, deep sadness. Well done, Nephylim!
  8. So much said in so few words. Well worth the read.
  9. Wiyot

    Chapter 1

    So much said in so few words!
  10. A warm tribute to a loved one lost.
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    Chapter 7 - Ian

    So not fair to bring laughter and tears so quickly together. Seriously though, great story! The one frustrating thing is how some feel compelled to offer spoilers in their comments. Grrrr I don't skip to the end because I, for one, want to enjoy the story. SMH
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    Chapter 2 Rose

    My personal fave function available on cellphones - blocking! 🤣
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    Piper

    Laughing hysterically while reading, the one persistent thought was 'Oy very, I know this pain!'
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    Chapter 1

    A great beginning, I absolutely love your humor. Wish I hadn't read the comments though as there was a huge spoiler. Grrrr
  15. Absolutely delightful! Would love to be able to read a follow-up to see how the relationship develops.
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    Ride The Lightning

    Hot damn now that was a story!
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    Chapter 2

    You've done a masterful job, not to mention respectful to those who've endured such tragedy.
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    Chapter 7

    The one drawback of a great story is that it comes to an end. Might you, at some point, write a follow-up?
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    Perseverance

    Bravo!!! While there are many great stories here, this one has served a real purpose. One often never knows how they touch other's lives. With the telling of this, you might very well have taught someone something they will or may need to know in the future. Thank you
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    Chapter 28

    Thanks for the great story. Please tell me the second was written and why it can be read!
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    Chapter 3

    Of all the rotten places to stop a story! LOL Seriously, it was getting soooo good. I do hope you will finish it eventually. Oh and would love a pm when you do if you'd be so kind.
  22. Wiyot

    His Tale

    Rightfully so! Please keep writing
  23. The court scene was thoughtful, concise, and full of appropriate emotion. Having acted as an expert witness in familial rape cases... yes, it is tense for all involved even experts. You've done a beautiful job all the way around. Thank you for honoring those who've lived such tragedies.
  24. Absolutely brilliant including the songs and other!
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