In The Barb is an amazing story with fantastic characters. While now up to Chapter 17, the assortment of characters has grown, their continued development, painting of scenes, and so much more make this well worth the read. Compliments too on editing.
How anyone can leave a hateful comment followed by the word "friend" is beyond comprehension. I, for one, am disappointed to see a fine new author on GayAuthors.org receive such disrespect.
Keep writing; @Vcs, your efforts are respected and appreciated.