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  1. James Matthews

    Chapter 1

    A lovely soft natural opening. Almost feels lazy. Very easy to get settled into and I'm liking the reality of the characters you are starting to introduce. Lovey stuff Thank you!
  2. Roman and Jack pushed aside their pizza boxes almost simultaneously, having both wolfed down what must have been two thousand calories. I, on the other hand, was still munching away, staring into the ocean that was Jack's eyes. Roman leaned back on his chair and rubbed his stomach, demonstrating he was obviously full. Jack let out a belch making us all laugh, and Roman threw a napkin at his face. I missed this. It was like everything was normal. Like It had always been normal. I realised I
  3. James Matthews

    Chapter 4

    "Optimus, please dim the lights, we are almost ready," Relshek announced, taking two paces back from Adam's incubator. Adam sat on the edge of his bed, watching intently as every few seconds the large door at the end of the room opened and more and more people came through, shuffling down either side of the huge space. "Christian?" "Yes Adam?" "Why are all these people here?" "To see you, Adam, are you afraid?" "Not especially, maybe a little nervous… I kinda feel l
  4. Olly ran his index fingers up and down my inner thigh slowly - inch after inch getting closer to my aching wet cock. He sat watching me, a devious, playful look on his face as I whimpered and twitched like a pathetic dog on heat. His ocean blue eyes were full of animal lust and sexual desire as he switched between teasing me and pleasuring himself. I was almost begging by now, begging for him to give me some release, but he wouldn't. He began massaging my ballsack in his hands, rolling my overfl
  5. "Chocolates? Okay, what do you want?" Jack asked as I slowly revealed a box from behind my back. "Well, someone is in a perky mood," I replied as his eyes lit up. Jack smiled and sat up a little straighter in bed. "Hmm, I do feel good today… hey, the Docs, they've taken me off the sedative, so that might explain it. "Yeah, maybe," I said, plonking myself in the seat next to his bed. "Who's that from," I asked, eyeing a card on his table in the corner of the room. "Oh, that… i
  6. Hmm! haha I love the guessing game you make Weinerdog. I would imagine some of these will get answered as the story progresses. James
  7. Your review of this chapter was beautifully articulated Quixo, Thank you for the comments. James
  8. James Matthews

    Chapter 3

    Adam's eyes flickered, becoming aware he was waking up. He felt gentle warmth surrounding his body, and as he let his eyes fully open, it became apparent to him this was not his usual surroundings. Slowly moving his pupils around the large ceiling above, he saw huge shiny grey beams that traversed the width of the unfamiliar room. But there was something else between his view and the ceiling and whatever it was; it appeared that he was enclosed within it. Twisting his neck, he turned h
  9. Thank you so much for the review Philippe
  10. Suicide of 15-29 year olds is the 2nd leading cause of death for that age group in the world sadly. There are no figures for the LGBT community, but you can bet it's high.
  11. Fluffy tales are not normally my thing. I like to try and put sunlight onto the gritty reality of real life and all so often it is never nice. Thanks for reading. Glad you're enjoying the story
  12. Roman dropped me off at the hospital again, and I got up to Jack's ward as fast as possible. I was excited, not only because I was seeing him again, but because no matter what shit was coming my way from Shaun and his family, I knew the truth. It was because I knew the truth; I could make sense of it in my head finally and tell Jack what was really going on… make him see what a crazy piece of shit my former friend was. One thing that did worry me was what Shaun had planned for Jack and me.
  13. You counted? Hmm, I never did. Good shout Chris lol
  14. They say our parents define us. I bloody hope not hahaha
  15. Hope is all we have sometimes Dirk. Life has a way of working itself out though, don't you think?
  16. You make some excellent points Xfighter. Thanks very much for your thoughts
  17. People go to another level sometimes, it's scary. Thanks for the comments Okie
  18. I'm glad you got out of that horrible existence. Yes it sucks!
  19. "So, you finally decided to show your face," Shaun asked, wearing a disgusted expression. At first, I didn't respond to him. I was too busy checking out the damage I had done to his good looks. Shaun was lying on his bed, his face badly bruised. I noticed his eyes the most; they were tainted in a shade of purple and black, probably the side effect of a broken nose, I assumed. His lip, although still fat, had crusted over now and had started to heal. I viewed him with pity but still with a t
  20. James Matthews

    Chapter 1

    Hi Paqman, Hmm, I'm not sure, I'll take a look at the offending sentence and change it. Thanks for the spot
  21. James Matthews

    Chapter 2

    Adam awoke feeling worse than ever. His chest was on fire, and as he got to his feet, a hacking cough took over him producing spots of blood that shot from his mouth and onto the floor. He stood looking at the red phlegm in horror, wondering what the hell was happening to him. Was he dying? Was he going to survive another night? He wandered over to the back of the laundrette, which was located the only working tap. He turned it on and crouched down, allowing some of the water into his mouth
  22. I stood in front of the bathroom mirror, dressed in my school uniform. My eyes looked tired, but my brain was racing. Taking long and deliberate breaths, I tried to calm myself. I looked down at my hand perched on the sink; it was trembling. "Joey, are you done in there? I need to wash my hair." "Almost done, Mum," I replied, splashing some cold water on my face. All I wanted to do was lock myself away in my room. The prospect of walking into school right now was inducing a nauseating
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