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There are times when all the world's asleep The questions run too deep For such a simple man Won't you please, please tell me what we've learned? I know it sounds absurd Please tell me who I am He got there within 10 minutes and we went straight to my room to talk. "This is some wild stuff," I said. Zack laughed. "Is it too much for you?" He asked. I shrugged and asked, "did you read that book?" "Raven? Yep," he said. "What did you think?" I asked.
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Thank you so much for reading - I hope you like the rest of it!
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thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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Who can I believe in? I'm kneeling on the floor There has to be a force Who do I phone? The stars are out and shining But all I really wanna know Oh, won't you show me the way I grabbed the gift I had for Zack and walked over. When I got there Trevor was sitting at the table eating cereal, wearing just a t-shirt and sleep shorts. "Hi Andrew," he said. "Zack is upstairs." "OK, thanks, good morning" I said as I walked up the steps. "Good morning, replied Trevo
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@weinerdoog I do hope I get the readers back - I have written ahead this time so should not be any more undue delays.
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@FanLit Thank you so much for reading and your comment! You have captured the nuance in the relationship between Zack and Andrew 😛
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Recap of Chapters 1 to 16 The story of Andrew starts at age 13 with a brief flashback three years earlier when he was stripped by his cousins during a holiday get together. It sets a tone of how other people perceive him. Andrew is the oldest of 3 boys. Mark is 14 months younger and Peter is 8 years younger - Andrew has a close relationship with both. Andrew's neighborhood is middle class but running from upper to lower. Andrew’s parents are both professionals and the family is m
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Posting the second part of this story now
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nice to see the new chapter - looks like the bond between jakey and sammy is solidifying and i hope they will be able to monetize their content to the point where mom can quit!
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Keith is clearly struggling with his sexuality and self-esteem and it looks like Earl smells an easy target - no pun intended with smelling the socks. I am excited about where this will go!
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Thanks for the comment - Zack is spreading the wealth lol Zack may have more up his sleeve 😝
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Another turning point, a fork stuck in the road Time grabs you by the wrist, directs you where to go So make the best of this test, and don't ask why It's not a question, but a lesson learned in time It's something unpredictable But in the end, it's right On my walk back home, I thought about the abruptness of my dismissal and the indignity of being naked in front of Trevor. As much as I liked Zack, there was something about this that bothered me. I wanted to talk to him about
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it's a slow conversion process - lol - thanks for commenting and sticking with the story thank you for the comment - Just imagine how insatiable Shaina had to be to tire out a teenager! lol stacked plates are a teenage rite of passage LOL - seems Andrew doesn't seem to fully get it - yet thank you so much for the comment - introspection is a big part of who Andrew is
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I find the answers aren't so clear Wish I could find a way to disappear All these thoughts they make no sense I find bliss in ignorance Nothing seems to go away Over and over again I didn’t throw away the rag but instead rolled it up and put it in my pocket. I knew I should have discarded it and there was no reasonable basis for keeping it. Although I jokingly tried to justify it - what if I ever needed a sample of Zack’s DNA? Kidding aside, holding on to a freshly cumm
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Haha thanks for the comment - Spiderman was fresh in my mind with the new movie and it's more likely that I borrow form Arch :-)
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It will be very interesting to see how Mr. Holt plays into this. Is he just the creepy principal or is there more to the story? Can Sam and Jake benefit from him in some way?
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Well, I guess I should stick up for myself But I really think it's better this way The more you suffer The more it shows you really care Right? Yeah, yeah, yeah Now I'll relate this little bit That happens more than I'd like to admit Now I know I'm being used That's okay man 'cause I like the abuse Now I know they’re playing with me That's okay 'cause I've got no self-esteem I got up and brought the towel to the bathroom. Before rolling it up and placing it on
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Thank you so much for reading it and commenting - I hope you like the rest!
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Haha - thanks, I'm sure they left some DNA evidence in the middle row of seats. Here's hoping they both get good news from the admissions department! Thank you, Andrew seems to be very slow in analyzing his feelings. Thank you for commenting - there will be more about Zack's methodical research into slavery. We'll see if Zack was satisfied with Andrew's handiwork - lol.
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Every time I thought I'd got it made It seemed the taste was not so sweet So I turned myself to face me But I've never caught a glimpse When I got home that evening I felt very alone. The good feeling from before Christmas vacation had come crashing down. I managed to get myself into another humiliating situation and I hated the fact that I didn’t have it in me to even try putting up a fight. Again, I just took whatever they felt like dishing out and acted grateful when they let
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Thank you both for commenting - there's more to come on Finn and a LOT more on Zack
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nothing can bring you closer to your twin than getting sneezed on lol - nice to see he used his own t-shirt to wipe up
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interesting to see the jock twin is willing to post the full video - it will get a lot of views!
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Nice start - I'm looking forward to other vids from that iPhone that may not meet the YouTube posting guidelines 😜
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As the present now Will later be past The order is rapidly fadin' And the first one now Will later be last For the times they are a-changin' Things had leveled off through Christmas vacation of sophomore year. I had finally developed a set of friends with Zack and Finn. It was a turn of events, since it was me that originally introduced Zack to some of the group, but he now included me when he hung out with them or Patrick. It made me feel part of something. Just be
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