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  1. Great to have a second season of this story. I really like the way you changed the perspective. I was glad to hear more about Owen's sister and I hope there is more about Ryan!
  2. it seems that Zack is not a good friend but there is more to come
  3. About a week after the exercise was completed, I had a dry night. It was the first dry night in years and I was very excited about it. I called Zack and let him know. “Wow, that’s great! He exclaimed. “Remember though, it will take a while to get totally cured so don’t be disappointed if you wake up wet tomorrow.” I know,” I replied, '' but I’m pumped about it!” “Are you going to the pool to play baseball?” He asked. “Yea, you?” “Yep, I’ll be at your house in about
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    The Sleepover

    Thank you for commenting - that's a great question and is Zack himself even aware that he's grooming Andrew
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    Doctor Zack

    Thank you for commenting - the road may be a little rough
  6. I didn’t hear from Zack for the rest of that day so I figured he probably had plans with Patrick, but the next day I woke up to a text from him: Hey Andrew, I’ve been doing research on bedwetting. When can I come over to talk to you? I replied: Just woke up so I need to shower but come over anytime after that. OK see ya later OK see ya I chuckled to myself thinking this is so Zack. He would hear some obscure comm
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    The Sleepover

    Thank you for your comment. There could be elements of setting the stage in there but Zack is also very comfortable in his skin (literally and figuratively).
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    The Sleepover

    Thank you for commenting - Yes, less than 2% of children at Andrew's age still wet the bed (boys are much more likely than girls). I planned to expand on bed wetting and the existence or lack of other issues the next chapter - so this is very helpful.
  9. One positive development from my secret being revealed to Zack is that now I can have a sleepover - something I’d been previously avoiding. The first opportunity for that came a few weeks after the start of summer vacation. Zack called and suggested going in my pool. You might think that Zack was very forward about inviting himself over to my house or pool, and you’d probably be right, but his house wasn’t a good place to hang out. It was much smaller than mine and had almost no backyard. A
  10. LOL - thanks for reading - as Charles Manson once said "I was so smart when I was a kid that I learnt I was dumb fast."
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    The Beginning

    Thank you very much for reading and commenting on my story. I am working on Chapter 3 now and hope to post it soon.
  12. On a Friday night a few weeks before the end of the school year, Zack was over my house and we were hanging out in the basement. Also down there with us was my youngest brother Peter and three of Mark’s friends Brent, Chris and Dylan. Mark had planned a sleepover but his friends had arrived early while he was still at baseball practice. We were talking and milling about while they were preparing for the sleepover by taking stuff out of their overnight bags and making room on the floor.
  13. Most of my experiences include my friend Zack. He was present at many of my life shaping events. Each one became an important building block that helped mold my persona, but I’ll start by describing an incident that happened before I met him that may have had some impact. It happened during Thanksgiving at my cousin's house when I was 10 years old. Me and a few of my cousins were hanging out in the basement - where all us kids usually congregated. It was after dinner and dessert. Everyone
  14. This is a coming of age style story with a BDSM spin. It's a reflection of events in my life and an attempt to discover the impact they may have had on my current state of mind and sexuality. It contains descriptions of actual incidents but, for a better narrative, I’ve fictionalized some parts and added characters. The main characters are Andrew and his friend Zack and the journey goes from middle school through and after college.
  15. This was a great story and I loved reading about Kevin and Dex continuing to express their love. I agree with Weinerdog that Kevin's mom was out of line by outing Dex to his parents. I would have expected more resistance from Dex, Kevin and his father.
  16. I'm glad you decided to continue the story and I really enjoyed knowing that Kevin and Dexter continued their relationship. I am curious to see what Torry has done now - I was beginning to think he deserved another chance especially since Kevin and Sarah were not totally innocent in the deals they made with him.
  17. I was hoping that Dexter and Kevin would get together. Dexter has the most integrity of any character and it's great he found love without any deceit.
  18. Well done. I love the way you did a flashback to explain the Torry and James deal. Dexter comes out as the most honorable!
  19. I wasn't expecting Kevin to give in so easy. I'm liking Dexter even more after his refusal. It will be interesting to see how the questions are answered!
  20. I think the twists are great. I still don't believe there's a super natural power involved but maybe i'm wrong.
  21. I'm surprised Kevin would even consider taking Torry's second offer - but excited to see what he decides.
  22. I'm thinking the same thing and in cahoots may include James being gay. I am very much loving the story.
  23. Personally I can never see myself talking to my dad while naked about anything, or about masturbation even if fully clothed, but I am very much hooked on Kevin and excited to see where this goes. It's also good to see Kevin decide to try and work things out with Torry.
  24. I highly recommend this story. There's strong character development with each building to a role that is brought together at the end.
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