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Great to have chapter 3 and from yet another point of view, Ian's
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Thanks for the comment, Andrew does seem to think that way...
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Thanks for reading and commenting
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Thanks for commenting - there certainly are many sides to Zack
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“You want to see it?” Finn asked. I remained silent but slowly nodded. Sitting on the bed, he slid his shorts and boxers down to expose himself. I just stared. His dick was not circumcised and the foreskin covered the head except for a cheerio sized hole at the very tip. It was small and looked like a pig in a blanket. The skin color was slightly darker than the rest of his body and he had a thick patch of pubes directly above and around the base. “Go ahead, touch it,” he prompted
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Black Fox is a great platform and Season 2 develops the story to a new level. It's full of twists and turns with many surprises. If you like action, relationships and a bit of the unearthly thrown in - this story is for you! I recommend starting with Season 1.
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Great ending to the season and looking forward to Season 3. So many questions - When Ryan referred to Alex as "one of them." I know it means that they are animal first that turn to human - but was Alex born into a specific group? Was Alex's father really trying to kill him? Is Chris somehow involved or Alex's mom? Why is Owen so at risk and why does Alex think breaking up with him will protect him?
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Through the first few months of 9th grade I became friendlier with Finn and mostly due to him taking the initiative. He had been nice to me since the swirly but I still tried to keep away from all six main swirly perpetrators of which he was one. At first, I just interacted cordially but he persisted in being friendly and by the spring semester we were sitting together everyday for lunch. Zack and Patrick had a different lunch period so I was happy to have someone I knew to eat with. Fin
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Chapter 8 - Takes on Violence
and9993 commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Takes on Violence
It will be interesting to see where this goes. Was it Alex's dad? I think Alex will have a tough time unless he gets his petty jealousy in check. After all the cheating he did with Ryan how could he even think of being jealous over a picture Owen deleted! -
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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Chapter 7 - Black on Both Sides
and9993 commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Black on Both Sides
"Oh my god Owen, I don't deserve you." True dat! -
Thank you so much!
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The end of the summer meant the start of a new school year and a new school. Most of the kids from middle school went to the local high school but some went to nearby Catholic high schools, Our Lady of the Immaculate Conception or OLIC as everyone called it, which is where Zack, Patrick and I went was one of the best. It was very difficult to get in. It was also good that of all the swirly perpetrators, only Finn made it into OLIC. Zack didn’t elaborate on the extent of his relationshi
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"Then I felt it. It was a funny feeling. Like if my body was a guitar string and someone plucked it, making a resonating sound that sent shivers down my spine. I let go of Ryan's neck and the world swiveled before my eyes. All sounds melted into a cacophony of disharmonious, high-pitched noises. " What a fantastic description of the changing! It looks like once Alex learns to control the changing the benefits of being a fox/human will outweigh the negatives. It looks like he'll be in for a more powerful sex-life. I'm also happy that Alex resisted Sean's advances. I had my doubts.
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This was a great chapter it will be interesting to see how Alex accepts being someone who can change form. Will he keep it from Owen? I also loved the "dream" sequence that wasn't a dream: "Somehow, I was able to keep up with him. Yes, it was him. Thanks to the dangling thingy between his rear legs, I knew it must be Ryan. We ran and ran." I can imagine Alex being interrogated by a cop - "were there any distinguishing features?" "Yes, the dangling thingy between his rear legs." 😀
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Thanks for leaving the comment - there are multiple sides to Zack 🙂
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Thank you for commenting - for Andrew it seems "all in all it's just another brick in the wall" 😄
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There were a few big events that happened during the remainder of the eighth grade year. At school, no news was good news for me. Being associated with Zack gave me subtle privileges. No one really bothered me for the rest of the year and I even got invited to some graduation parties. At home, I started to jerk off more regularly. What was originally once or twice a week turned into pretty much every night. I did it before bed after changing into my diaper. The diaper slid down past
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That car trip with dad - torture for Alex - ugh!
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Haha - good idea, thank you for commenting
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Yep, I think they needed to get the phone camera from Ian - that's not going to end well...
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One other incident happened a few weeks later when, at that point, any comments about the swirly were rare and one-off. It was a Friday after lunch and I met Zack in the hallway across from the boys bathroom standing around talking to his lunch group friends, Austin, Patrick and Quinn. We were talking, waiting for the bell to ring for the lunch period to end. Michael walked out of the bathroom and waved to me as he kept going down the hall. Ian was coming down the hall in the other dire
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Thanks for commenting - I hope you enjoy the rest of the story
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Good to see Ryan is back. Also good to see Alex is OK with Chris - I think Alex overreacted at first.
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I got out of bed, showered, ate breakfast and waited for him. He arrived, as promised, within the hour. I opened the front door and let him in and, with neither of us saying anything, we walked into my room. He sat on my desk chair. “Are you OK?” He asked, as I closed the door and sat on my bed. “I’ve been better,” I abruptly replied. “Yea, me too,” he added. Raising my voice I exclaimed “You too!?! Really!?!” He replied, "I didn’t mean it like it was just as bad fo
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