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I am savouring the journey. Thank you!
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Thank you for this Wild West story. The two main characters are imaginative, appealing and fully formed. Also I'm enjoying the perceptive Madame in her setting of faded grandeur and chandeliers. Looking forward to how the story and relationships will develop.
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Stormy and hot🔥 Love it!
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I'm really savouring this slow burn Western romance, and always I enjoy Wayne Gray's descriptive and subtle style. I love the Oklahoma cowboy context 🤠 Although I live in Scotland, I must have watched too many cowboy films in my youth and seen too much rugged masculinity depicted with overtones of homoeroticism 😂
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Love this story and the quiet tenderness that is developing between Kent and Marvin. Beautifully written and I enjoy the way that Kent's mother and Pete observe the growing relationship, but they watch shrewdly and say nothing. Thank you for sharing this story 🙏🏻
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This is addictive! Slow-paced descriptive narrative; interesting locational details; engaging characters; plus slow burn relationship. So much to relish here. Thank you for sharing.
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Loving this tale of an inexperienced knight and his blind squire. Clearly the knight feels protective/ attracted to his squire.... and now we have a crazy, good hearted female knight and a faithful dog. It's all shaping up nicely - but I'm dreading the sea voyage and the Crusade itself 😒 Great writing and characters. Thank you!
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Such a beautiful bridge between the past and the present. Very sensitively written and moving.
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I have no experience of being famous and terrorised by the media, but this tender story took me there. Beautiful and sensitive writing, with main characters who were well rounded and attractive. I really enjoyed following this story which had passion and pace. Thank you!
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Honestly, I'm hooked like a fish! Beautiful writing - austere, violent and passionate, but also wonderfully poetic. Fascinating description of the town and its inhabitants. Engaging narrative that draws in your readers. Well done! And thank you for sharing.
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Chapter 14 - All's Well That End's Well
riccardo commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 14 - All's Well That End's Well
Phew! Thank goodness they got there! It would have been such a waste if they hadn't - and I for one became very invested in them getting together after that hiatus. Well done! -
Chapter 13 - Jeopardy
riccardo commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Jeopardy
Hopefully Liam's self reflexions and conversations with his friends will convince him he should crawl over broken glass to have a relationship with Adrian! Clearly Adrian is sexy, humourous, perceptive, sensitive, experienced - and capable of gently giving Liam an ultimatum. I'm hooked! 😁 -
Really enjoying the push and pull between these two - and hope that in the end they can get their act together! The story is sharp and amusing.
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Thank you for this spiritual story, set in a location I have no experience of, but evidently you do! It was wonderful to be immersed in this country and culture, and also to learn a lesson about a love which can only be in spirit from now on. The learning is about peaceful and thankful acceptance, however difficult this may be.
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Thank you for this beautifully written story - intelligent and poetic. Also pleasing to see the development of Finn after his previous relationship, and to learn more of the interlinked lives in the town.
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Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
riccardo commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
Errrr definitely not just bromance 😁 -
Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
riccardo commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
Thank you - another well crafted chapter in this slow burn, can we call it 'romance' ? 😉 Sensitively written, astute, and actually quite amusing too! -
Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
riccardo commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
Mmmm friendship? 🤔 -
Chapter 11 - Definitely Not A Date
riccardo commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Definitely Not A Date
Great chapter! It's all warming up nicely like the ginger in the tea 😁 -
This is very heavy stuff, but well written and sensitive. It helps to understand more about Liam, what he has endured, and that he has survived.
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On the face of it, this is a fairytale fantasy. However it is so much more! Smouldering, great love story with deep themes amongst the humour and romance. The depictions of the seasons and the progress of the central relationship is exceptionally well written.
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There is hope for all of us 😁
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I really enjoyed this tale of the wild west, but updated with gay characters who were like action heroes. The narrative had a wonderful filmic quality, which meant I could really imagine the various scenes. The main scenes were skillfully and theatrically set up - especially the court scene and the final showdown in the centre of the town. Thank you for sharing this story. I waited for each episode with great anticipation!
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Chapter 6 - Who Am I?
riccardo commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Who Am I?
Still loving this story, but for me, I really hope it doesn't go full on 'spooky'. I think that would sensationalise and cheapen the narrative. In my experience, co-incidences and chance meetings are often stranger than fiction! -
This was a spectacular courtroom drama! Beautifully written and staged. A striking move that the sodomy accusation was dealt with first - so dramatic! Then the parade of defence witnesses was thrilling. Each witness was both colourful and compelling - I was smiling and cheering them onward. Well done to the writer! Simply masterful.
