Daddytim

Oh man! So good but I’m thinking this book is coming to a close. I’m so glad you have plans for a continuation. This one is so good. I agree Philippe that Walter knows a ton more than he is letting on. If I were Gregg I would be pinning him down on what James said about black status. I also wish chapters could come quicker but I understand you also have a life.

First and foremost, I hate you ( not really but you started this tale posting every week and now you’re only posting every few weeks. It’s killing me having to wait. This story is sooo good.) on to my comments…. Grandma needs to be in an asylum. My theory is she came from dirt poor crime family and has tried to forget her family but wants to control all her children. Is she possibly involved with this in some way like through ties to a past she’s been hiding? I’m also convinced that Josh is the key to unlocking the database but he either never knew or the memory loss has blocked him so far. Great story, well written, and intense action making it difficult not to be anxious for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your talent.

It’s been a great story so far and a great extension of “Trials and Tribulations “. I thought I read that you have other stories that tie together with this one. If so I’d love to know the title so I can read them all.

Man I’m so glad you’re getting back to this story, it’s so good and keeps me very interested. You did NOT make a mistake posting this chapter. I’m dying to read more and find out how you bring the characters out. Thanks again and I’ll be looking forward to more.

Perhaps I misstated my earlier post. By “lack of real education “ I didn’t mean stupid or dense. I live in rural areas and believe me I actually know among many a real rocket scientist. Rural people have for the most part as good an education as anywhere else. What I meant was the local customs don’t normally lead people to question what they are taught by religious leaders or other community leaders that have hidden agendas. Because of that they lack the knowledge that is actually at their fingertips (especially in the Bible). My example you ask? Jesus told the scribe “Love yourself and your neighbor as yourself “. Nowhere in that said “except if your neighbor is gay, or black , or white, or Indian, or anything else. No just love your neighbor as yourself. These are the things I meant by saying “lack of real education. No one taught them or encouraged them to seek knowledge where they could find it. Hope that clears up my opinion. Thanks for reading

I agree that Hosh is the dna key otherwise why would he have it in his pocket. I’m still not convinced that Cassandra can be trusted (at least fully). I’m still trying to put a finger on who tore up the house and likely caused the car accident. Foreign government or inside treason. There’s still a lot to be discovered. My question just now is will we ever find out what happened before the accident and will Josh regain his memory?

I agree with Israfil, typical hillbilly lack of any real education and certainly a total lack of compassion. Mother apparently runs the household and father is a “spineless “ grunt. I’d love to see some real payback for the conniving older brother. He deserves a real payback. Mother and father will eventually find out what a loser he is and the damage they have done to little brother. I’ve known people like this and it breaks my heart when I’ve seen it in action. Good story. I can’t wait for more chapters.

As Seraph28 said this has Jason Bourne style written all over it. The story takes a very Robert Ludlum vibe. He being one of the greatest suspense/mystery/spy novel authors ever. I’m enjoying this story so much.

An almost magical ending. A truly magical ending would be to find the other (34?) boys safe and rescued. Otherwise as I stated once before, I really hate to see this story come to a close. I hope you write many more stories with this much passion and mystery and excitement. Thank you for sharing.

Wow I kinda hope this story never ends. It’s so good, suspenseful, and entirely enthralling. But ultimately I want to see the good guys win and all the children rescued. Keep up the great writing and I will look for more stories by you.