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One can only imagine how Trevor felt on seeing the Atlantis, the writer did convey Trev's feeling very well. Thank goodness the two are once again back on board "The Red Kangaroo"🤗. Now let's see what dastardly deeds the evil two have in store for us. A thoroughly good read.
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CJ, that was a very tender opening to a love affair, that both lads wanted and Trev craved and yes! so did Shane.
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Shane has rejection fears and so is protecting himself, surely together they will light a fire. Could maybe! stop dancing in the dark.
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What a relief Trevor back on solid ground and help available. Lets see how long it takes for the smug bitch who has been playing puppet master to have the smile wiped of her face.
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Pure energy in the writting keeps the excitment flowing can't see what the next turn will be
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Congratulations this chapter is why we read. The fear and dread Trevor was going through is so powerfully written and l still feel sick from reading it. All l can say is brilliant writting, thanks for the chance to read.
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This is becoming impossible to believe. Men can be difficult as fathers, and lovers, but to go these lengths to kill an only child? Surely even incompetent police would need more that these lose ends before they would want to go before a grand jury.
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And you made me think Joel was not happy being eye candy. While not forgetting the near drowning episode that was not what l had expected. The two lads are having a great time on the big cat. Avery interesting story. Think that there are more twists to come, can't wait.
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The divorce was probably because Trev's dad, and Jim are lovers. Mother was killed in a drug run gone bad, it's possible! Like the twist and turns this story takes, makes for a good read.
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Can feel for Trev, as Joel may cause him to attempt something he later regrets. Interesting set of characters in a great setting. Maps of the journey are a great addition.
