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I find this is going into the realm of fantasy. With all that has happened to Jake, one would assume the account of what had happened to him at the previous school would be in his file when removed schools. Also apart from that his injuries and hospitalisation would be common knowledge.
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Who needs enemy's with friends like that! I know that is an old saying but what the hell. Another interesting chapter.
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Just in the nick of time Joey saved another nightmare how will Joey feel about the contender for Jakes love? How will David feel? Like the pace of the story and the makeup of characters, well done.
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This could not have been easy to write. Telling your story may have helped you deal with parts of the anguish, I emptied a box of tissues, what a sad thing to have to deal with.
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Interesting story so far, how will the shooting affect the situation at home? Is Joey going to be stopped from sleepovers with Jake. Has this shooting anything to do with Jakes wayward brother?
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Interesting beginning a mystery? makes me want to keep reading.
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A gentle start to a story about life and what it brings.
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How could parents stand by and watch their only son being abused by such a rotten loser. They deserve to have their son reject them. Thank you Markfor a great read.
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Way to go! Get down and into it on the dance floor. Lark is finally out the door let's hope he stays there. I somehow don't think that is the last of him.
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How sad that Marcel was tempted with and taking E what a fool. Was lark behind the mugging? I wouldn't be surprised.
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So much for telling the concierge not to let Lou back in the building, the scumbag will bring him undone once again.
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JP knows this was how it was supposed to be he was the man and he did a manly thing. He knows he will just like hell but he is a realist. Marcel is still so young his behaviour in the Moscow street proved just how young and in need of sex he is. His time will come and when it does he will that much more mature and ready to love for himself.
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Yes JP does have a brilliant mind, he knows the difficulties of being in Moscow at this time. He also knows how difficult it will be for himself and Marcel going forward. He is just making sure he has all his ducks in a row. Thanks again mark for a great read.
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A sad homecoming, with no answer to that situation Marcel is back but the bond has been broken, his stepfather didn't want him there and his mother resents him. I have known that feeling and it's not good for one' psychic.
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Love is what it is and will last as long as it does. Their age difference will be a huge factor in their being apart. Marcel will meet a like-minded young man and the castle will come crashing down. I just hope the landing for both of them will not be too harsh.
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Nice to revisit the condo, only to find that it shall be central to Marcel while at Stanford. Already feels like a favourite jacket one is so used to wearing. Lovely beginning as always, Mark.
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This chapter was a fine ending, to an absorbing look back at that havoc created by Hiv-aids, the book all tied up with ribbon and a lovers knot. Thanks, for an interesting read.
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With the passing of his mother, can JP turn his back on the town that nurtured him, or his family with whom he spent his formative years
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Why do gay lovers get so hung up on a partner for having sex with a woman who gets pregnant. Most males like to think of being a parent. Nothing wrong with that.
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Grandmaman will be better with the children with her until she becomes too frail. This a sad end to a life well-lived. JP has Mouse as his backstop at the same time.
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As I read this also wonder what the long term effects of fisting would have on a person! I do not understand the desire or need of such an extreme sexual act.
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Could Neils death be because his mates turnd on him when they new their cover was blown.
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I thought we were done with that fucker Neil, hope he drowns in the bath. There are more sticky situations here than standing on wet bitumen 😱
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JP is a disappointment to take a young novice16yr old to bed. Knowing just how close he was himself to exposure to HIV! What more needs to be said. Mouse has come back what for? just how sick is he.
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Odd that one could be so drunk and not know it wasn't his lover. Never happened to me! worse luck.
