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One thing Erick has in his favour is Jerry's hatred of him, is total yes it could work against Erick but I think not.
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Two lovers trying to hard and failing badly. 10 out of 10 for trying. It really is almost a Barbara Cartland paper back novel🤗🤗🤗
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More twists and turns than a NEW YORK bagel🥨. Great work👍
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Almost out but still more to be done🤯
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So the General is fallible at a crucial part of his escape plan, another cliffhanger finish 😣
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Not really sure Eric will actually get down and get it on with Janson all appears a bit contrived. Description of flight one while on mission was riveting. Great stuff and a good read👍 LWJ
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A stunning account of what nuclear war would do the the world, gut wrenching just to read on this site. Great writing of pure evil. So glad to have read it.👍
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Another interesting development Lump, clean and looking for work good for him. Jerry/Scar is losing the plot as for Erick, his drinking will be his downfall as it has been for many band members. Great story just the same.
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One can feel for Clump, chasing his dragon, that is leading him to destruction. Is the last concert in Brisbane to be the last test of this bomb madness. Eric's love of drinking tequila, see his last sunrise.
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A other great chapter! The ex KGB has got me intrigued. Interesting twist, a chase for the the antagonist thug and stand over merchant to end the chapter. LWJ.
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Sebastian really is the pits, l am sure many of ussuffered at the hands of indifferent men, who only wanted a quick flick behind their lovers back. So sad but so real.
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A very nice story full of interesting characters it just gets better every chapter. Thanks.
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Like the steady pace you have set. Looking for the next chapter right now.
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Good start we all know how hard it is to get out some mornings. Untidy hair late and the chill of Autumn in the air. All sounds good.
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Chapter 37 The Conclusion But Not the End
Lwj commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 37 The Conclusion But Not the End
Thanks for a really entertaining and interesting look back in to a different world of being gay. Today after many struggles and hurt Gay people are able to married in many countries and as of January 2018 Australia became one of them. I look forward to the next book in the series. Was kind of you to share it with us, so once again thank you from the two young lads on the bus when you began the story until we met Vlad at it's conclusion. -
As with all life it draws to it's close, l can feel for them all as the receive the news of JB' s cancer. As with our own ancestors so we must follow.
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Chapter 27 Ralph’s Story, Part I - Life’s Lesson at Fort Knox
Lwj commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 27 Ralph’s Story, Part I - Life’s Lesson at Fort Knox
That was not what l expected traffic and very hot, you continue to surprise -
Chapter 26 We’re In The Army Now
Lwj commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 26 We’re In The Army Now
Very eròtic chapter thanks. -
Chapter 24 Senior Year 1959 – 1960 – Shacking Up
Lwj commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 24 Senior Year 1959 – 1960 – Shacking Up
Ahrŕrrrrr, the wedding day how well l remember that! All good mayhem and madness. Still going strong after 5o odd years. Not sorry but what could have been? Another interesting chapter. -
Was an interesting chapter. I am sure Peter is working on Ronnie to take his cherry, even just a quick blow job. Will just see what happens next. Over all it has been a great read.
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Chapter 21 Life’s Lessons Through A Keyhole
Lwj commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 21 Life’s Lessons Through A Keyhole
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Chapter 18 Spring Summer 1958
Lwj commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 18 Spring Summer 1958
Living here in Australia, l have never experienced prejudice or segregation. I have over my life time worked with Australian Aborigines there was no issue. Today however there is a rising tide of resentment against Muslims and people from Africa who have come to settle here I am interested in the history of African American and have read many articles about their plight. Reading thissends a chill down my spine! One of fear for my countries future if we do not accept all people and or religion l like the way you have given these two young people a way to get to know each other as individuals with no hidden agenda. A terrific chapter, thanks.
