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What a way to get hooked on a story, was an interesting beginning.👍
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Seems the cops are the same all over! I was taken in for questioning under a similar situation, cop sat opposite me questioning why I was near a notorious beat rubbing a pencil between his spread-eagled legs daring me to look and watch him do it. All the time asking why I was there. It all came to nothing. Over a long period of year's I have had more than one cops dick down my throat, still that day stocks in my mind. My dad had to come pick me up and after leaving the cop shop Allie said was can't you pick up a girl. I mean really! Not my cup of tea. I was only fifteen and finding my self at the time.
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How fortunate I am to have just opened this story. Was just looking for a quick read before starting the day. I loved this whimsical tale of Halloween. Thank you for sharing your work.🙄
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Altimexis, thank you for outstanding read. I like the way you constructed this story and while I did not comprehend much of the statistical informatoin, I was able to enjoy it as a work. Thank you it has been a privilege, and you are to be commended for your effort.👍
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Shaun! ❤Now there is a blast from the past. Good to know that he no longer blames JJ for his father's death. What will come once they meet face to face is another thing altogether. Great chapter as always.👍
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Sad as it may be, the hit would come at some time or other JJ now must consider his position and what he will do as he parts ways with the company he has attempted to bring into the future with a moral obligation, to the nation.😥
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What's interesting chapter this is, l like the nude 🤭aspect only because l never saw that as being considered. This story keeps giving the reader one surprise after another. Great work, thanks.👍
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Was wondering when that crazy bitch would show her anger. Not the way a chapter should end. I need to go to sleep but another chapter is what l will be reading before I turn out the light.😱 A darn good read, thanks👍
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How will JJ react to the general gossip and innuendo about his real age becoming known after all he has been living with this hanging over him for a number of years now. Will it all blow up or is there a way to shut it down?
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What an adventure they are having, with all JJ's photos they will have a wall of highlights to keep this trip in their minds forever. Another great chapter, thanks.❤
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Good to note the neighbours are a gay couple. That will just make it easier for the young lads to find their feet.
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The home theatre will be a great addition to the apartment. Wonder how the other tenants will feel about the noise pollution. Both the young lads are about to get down and real about coexisting on a long-term relationship. Another interesting chapter.
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While JJ has loved Henry for years, he backed away from those feelings because of the way his so-called father treated him. Now Henry has opened JJ's eyes to the laws about content maybe they can make a life together and be happy.❤
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I could never understand the interest in car racing, it's just not my favourite thing. Still it is interesting to read how JJ got drawn into the development, of the next generation of the supercars. Another interesting twist to the story 👍
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While I could never say that I understand all the technical aspects of the story, you do write in an informative way that is interesting, and makes for good reading👍
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There is no way I could get off sucking someone's feet. Quite a turn off l think. The rest of the day in NY was great stuff. Is it just a thought? or is there more to not knowing anything in depth about the boyfriend? Must read on.
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A Final Drive Around the Block
Lwj commented on Altimexis's story chapter in A Final Drive Around the Block
It would appear that all government public services have people with the same mind set. Here in Aus' the people seem come from India. However that little problem is now out of the way JJ. Can get on with his driving.👍 -
At some time or other JJ needs to come clean as to his real identity. The three men at lunch are not fools, JJhasto either trust them or get on the next train out of town. As I have said before this work is above my pay grade, but a great read just the same.👍
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All this computer jargon is above my pay grade, however, it was interesting to observe the mind of a true geek at work. Very wise decision to lock his work away from prying eyes. This really is a great read👍
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JJ sure does speak his mind when he needs to. He needs help with those nightmares he keeps having. Love the work you put into your work. Great stuff.👍
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Another Genius in the House
Lwj commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Another Genius in the House
So J.J. has opened up about his real age to the young Henry. What a can of worms, this information could be, especially not having been living with the family for very long. The next chapter will be interesting to read if the outcome of Henry's thoughts is aired.😱 -
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It is wonderful to see such generosity of this amazing family. In every age and country, the unsung heroes are to the fore in this case. To take in a stranger who is by admition is underage and care for him is without a doubt is the courage we would like to see in one's self. This is such an interesting read. Thank you for putting it to paper.👍👍
