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Guessing I'm getting a different experience to most of the readers above, who probably didn't squee at the mention of Dylan! Going to be interesting to see how Jason reacts to a calico neko...
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Adorel. Another wonderful story, falling deeper and deeper in love with this universe. You really are an artist @Yeoldebard , I'll happily echo the comments above that you should be proud of this! To the next!
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Oof, they don't go for half measures, do they? The Silver Hand clearly want to make anyone scared to have anything to do with Werewolves. An unfortunately potentially effective tactic, even if the bomb didn't go off.
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With the possible exception of Vauxhall, not even Brits drive British cars. German makes or Ford are the most popular by far - and it's mainly down to the reasons described above! Seriously, can't beat the Germans for reliability... wait, how did we get here?! Loving the story. Have to say, my suspicions for the identity of the ne'erdowells are definitely falling in the direction of Dylan's mother's family...
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Thanks very much! I know this won't be everyone's cup of tea, and is a bit far along the kink spectrum for what is usually on this site - glad I've got some interested readers!
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The rest of the afternoon and evening passed relatively uneventfully. Char contacted Sara for her opinion on giving Ghost solid food, but they decided to stick with pâté for now until the final year vet student could come by and check him over the next day. There was more to the conversation, but neither his sister nor Jinx (whose sharp ears picked up both sides) would elaborate on why they kept glancing at Finn with so much mirth in their eyes. Whatever they were up to he couldn't do much about
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It had been just over an hour when the key turning in the lock woke them. A sharp spike of fear from Finn's scent had Ghost alert in moments, and left Jinx pretty sure that the human boy had been naughty in one way or another. Why else be scared of Char? Finn was actually far more concerned his dad was about to burst in. At first he was relieved when just Charlotte and Sara entered, until he took in the scene. Char was wearing one of Sara's loose summer skirts, clutching the tight jeans she
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Blanche is an absolute legend. Definitely think magic was involved in the door not opening. Possibly the fire as well; the timing of the bed going up in flames seemed almost specifically planned to terrify. Personal theory; Damian was the target, not Jordan...
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I scrolled down here to make that precise point!
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A Day in the Life of a Wolf
AlreadyForgiven commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in A Day in the Life of a Wolf
I can just hear Giorgio Tsoukalos doing his Ancient Alien spiel in this one! Lovely touch. -
Voices From the Stars
AlreadyForgiven commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Voices From the Stars
Wonderful final touch to a fantastic story. The characterisation is simply superb; you have a way of making the reader visualise and connect with each of them on an emotional level. Something to be very proud of having created, this universe. Thank you again. -
Ouch. That... hurt. Damn, haven't cried reading a story for years, it's happened twice now since I found this site. Still loving the story but... ouch.
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It's been said already but given the dates of the posts might still be relevant - write what works for you. No need to agonise over how long it is.
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The whole 'permanent bonding' thing seems to be something Faro assume everyone instinctively knows, doesn't it? Hopefully won't be too much of an issue with Elias, but still... Not stale at all, loving this!
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Saving Captain Artemis
AlreadyForgiven commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Saving Captain Artemis
And you are not alone! -
Hawke's behaviour is a touch more understandable now, she probably knew she was in trouble for losing the ship. Did she engineer the capture of Elias just to bust the illegal slavers and get ahead of it...?
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Poor Elias - the way he took charge has to reflect how he himself has been treated. And even after that he doesn't find any enjoyment in the role of master; a strong sign of character, lacking any desire to inflict what he has suffered on others.
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...he's probably not going to end up a fan favourite, I'll admit!
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The catboy woke up slowly, initial confusion at his surroundings quickly melting away. It was still dark, and he was under something soft and warm, curled in a ball with the even warmer presence of Jinx spooning him, her gentle snores sending hot breath down his back. Utter satisfaction spread through his little mind, and for the first time in as long as he could remember, a smile spead across his face. He stayed in that half awake, dreamlike bliss for as long as he could, before a familiar roil
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Yeah, I'm beginning to think I'll be reading Yeoldebard's 5th grade English homework before I'm done with his writing at this point!
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The little guy has been through a lot, I'll admit. Thanks for reading!
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Thank you for the kind comments - means a lot to a relatively new author!
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This has been a hell of an emotional rollercoaster! I love this story, love the characters, the weave of the plot - fingers crossed with everyone else now waiting for the next chapter!
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Reinard- A Tiger's Hug
AlreadyForgiven commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Reinard- A Tiger's Hug
Ditto for me, been up all night falling in love with Reinard - thank you for this story! -
Reinard- A Tiger's Hug
AlreadyForgiven commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Reinard- A Tiger's Hug
I don’t want to do this anymore, any of it. Why can’t I be a normal kit? He's making progress, painful as it is. It's been "I'm not a kit" all the way up 'til now - I think this was a pretty important step towards accepting himself.
