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    Thirty Four

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Thirty Four

    Your kind. Oh no he didn’t!
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    What a treat to visit with Vin and Mace! Guess I have some reading to do. Excellent marketing plan, Mr. Stone.
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    Chapter 37: House

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 37: House

    Read it twice. So proud of Alec. Finn is gonna make me melt. Can’t find balance without sharing the caring. *wags tail and walks away*
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    Thirty Two

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Thirty Two

    The scene is set
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    Thirty One

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Thirty One

    I don’t want this to end. But…it will…
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    Thirty One

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Thirty One

    The momma trauma took me down for the night. You know - that chapter with the three little words … ❤️
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    Thirty One

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Thirty One

    ❤️
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    Thirty

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Thirty

    Was this the least drama in a single chapter? Felt that way. *clocks out to go rest and recover*
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    Twenty Nine

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Twenty Nine

    I was doing fine, my eyes were perfectly dry until one line turned on the waterworks. Not the three words. These five: ”C-can I do therapy too?” Wrecked me. Well played @Demiurge
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    Twenty Seven

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Twenty Seven

    And this amazing chapter has a soundtrack. How cool is that?
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    Twenty Five

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Twenty Five

    OMFG he asked for help. Hallelujah
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    Twenty Two

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Twenty Two

    The details are always fantastic but the visual of this line: “…and visibly shook off her negative emotions as if it were a coat she was dropping to the floor. ” Wow.
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    Twenty One

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Twenty One

    I’m a bit worried about what can happen in four days.
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    Twenty

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Twenty

    Cue the meth head! Money mystery solved? Hmm…
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    Nineteen

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Nineteen

    You most certainly did not get carried away. You did go pretty deep and you did it very well. Green!
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    Sixteen

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Sixteen

    Noah taking the bull by the horns! We’ve known he was ballsy since Chapter One but this is level up. “…when I let the same man hit it from the back.” That nearly ended me! OMGOMGOMG…dying over here… Thanks for the furniture lesson too. Had to Google the office chairs. Just one of many exquisite details offered.
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    Fifteen

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Fifteen

    Hell yeah to some counseling! Broad shoulders have been well documented but they can’t carry the weight of the world…
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    Fourteen

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Fourteen

    Brock clearly needs his ass handed to him. Hard. Hoping the grandpa mention is some positive foreshadowing.
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    Thirteen

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Thirteen

    “…you can’t pour from an empty cup man.” Truth.
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    Twelve

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Twelve

    Whole lot happening in this chapter. Feeling a lot of four-lettered words. ‘Rash’ to break the coffee pot. That happened because Seth was feeling like ‘less’. That spurred on by Noah being ‘nosy’ but only because his level of ‘care’ is rapidly rising. So many emotions seemingly driven by ‘fear’. And, of course, ‘hope’ is a four- letter word.
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    Eleven

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Eleven

    ‘Something isn’t adding up’ on more than one front here. Hope Seth leans in a bit more but hope is not a strategy.
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    Ten

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Ten

    Something tells me the ‘rich boy’ part is going to become an issue. For Seth that is…
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    Six

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Six

    Yeah, not a nap. I am now completely certain Seth is amazing. The tenderness in all of that was sexy AF. Every virgin gayboy needs a Seth. But will he still be checking homework later or..?
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    Five

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Five

    What’s that song lyric? Something about tequila making clothes fall off. Maybe the guys just need a nap. The whole club scene was great!
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    Three

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Three

    Not too heavy at all. I’d call that opening vivid. The ending was a different kind of heavy and in a good way. Loving Lia!
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