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I am quick to b*tch about your cliffhanger habit so I believe I will only say this once: I’m really glad you stopped this chapter where you did. That “you” at the end gave me goosebumps and my eyes welled up. *clocks out for a break*
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“I know everything that goes on in this pack” hits the creep-o meter right next to “he sees you when your sleeping.” All this talk about eating Cyn strikes me as some form of cannibalism. And why not date a wolf? I read somewhere that wolves date pandas…
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“…and will treasure the opportunity to eat Cyn.” Oh my.
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Arthur City Human settlement in Texas, United States of America Copied it for you!
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The anxiety oozes of the page, bless his heart. I love the geography lessons in your stories. When I looked up Arthur City the top result was “human settlement in the state of Texas, USA. Like it was written to differentiate it from a shifter settlement!
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Two chapters, two cliffhangers. How could I expect anything else from you, Mr. Stone …
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It has to be the blood oath. Why else would Konstantin bleed from his arm? I know: wait and see. Maybe someone pulled her fangs out. I'm inclined to agree with others that the Kavan / Prissy Pants thing is suspect. Radulf. So pleased to learn his name. A cameo or a cross over? Yeah, yeah: wait and see. I am left here experiencing the pain following the pleasure of binge reading this over the weekend. I am left here to wait and see. CTI: 4
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I would like to see Elvira reduced to a pile of ash, swept up and tossed in the bin. Why? For many reasons but above all else to release Konstantin from the oath. I would not like to see the brothers separated and I’m genuinely concerned that could happen. Now or later. Their father. Hmm. Shacked up with a shifter yet he wasn’t called out as one. Interesting. Doc wasn’t sure what she was so I’m hoping for a dragon. 😉 Super specific detail: “On the back of my neck, the metal tip of a pen, dripping drops of ink.” <<< This you, author? Your tat? CTI count: 3 (consult the interwebs)
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“The Professions Series series should best be read in order, but each book follows a different brother.” Predestined, yes? Action packed is an understatement. Magnificent chapter. I will say I prefer you make me laugh rather than cry but Ry brought me to tears. Powerful prose.
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“Some of my many questions had finally been answered.” Same here, Kavan, same here. Should have been Elvira not India.
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More L&L and a Gift Given
Dan South commented on Aditus's story chapter in More L&L and a Gift Given
I did not know that! Makes perfect sense to me that you, sir, are an educator. You challenge (and entertain) your readers and I find great pleasure in that. -
More L&L and a Gift Given
Dan South commented on Aditus's story chapter in More L&L and a Gift Given
It seldom fails that I, reading your stories, turn to the interwebs to make it through some sentences with comprehension. Better learning through paranormal fiction. Who knew? Apparently @Aditus did. The Tavern was a delightful read and I was right there with @drsawzall and the Star Wars vibe. It was there that Bloodsong was mentioned yet again … -
M-squared was already established so why not K-squared? Makes sense! Why did Konstantin join this Clan? What happened to his old one? What else has he taught Elvira? I appreciate the humor surfacing in this chapter. Or perhaps it’s been there and I’ve been to creeped out to notice…
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I definitely understand more but the ‘big picture’ is still quite blurry. I’m full of questions that I trust will be answered if I’m patient (I’m so not). And every word of CincyKris’ comment above I 100% agree with. Especially Simone the suck up. (Did I make a vampire pun?) Konstantin was starved and Kavan was in the wrong place at the right time. The punishment seems excessive but what do I know? A fantastic read.
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Perhaps his sire is punished for the embrace? An unauthorized turning? Is Kavan just too pretty to resist? I’m late to the party but I’m absolutely here til the end…
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Another near death experience? I’ll look forward to the next since it seems inevitable that there will be one. 🤨
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You’re going to give me a heart attack, Aditus! That free fall? G-zus.
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I’m pleased this continues because the ending here struck me as rather cryptic. Literally gave me goosebumps.
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Maybe everything is always as it should be. Maybe first love should be lost. Maybe it should be found again. Stop reading this review and open Chapter One. If you need more encouragement, liner notes, etc., read on. Two boys fall in love. They’ll both make you question nature versus nurture but not about the gay part. If you’re reading this because you can’t sleep please pay attention to the Author’s notes and consume it carefully if you share Alec’s anxiety. But you gotta meet Alec…
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Absolutely correct!
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The blueberry and the retriever HEA. Beautiful ❤️
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Sexy, sophisticated and down right sentimental. So, so good. Family, Framily, at its finest. @Demiurge you can totally handle a wedding. Carson’s head will explode and that alone will be worth it. I am completely in love with each and every single (not Brock) character you’ve created (not Carson). This made my day. Thank you ❤️
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I’m gonna backspace a lot but I’m leaving one word unchanged: Beautiful. Is Slingshot Effect a literary device? Ramen. Touring with her band. Shea. They. I have not lost sight of the glow up. Seth is … I’m silly happy to be reminded where we came from. Blue haired girl and aspiring author writing erotica?? Oh? OMG he writes best selling smut? Delightful @Demiurge you write, imagine, beautiful Queerness. And … sophisticated sexy stuff. (This is fan mail, yeah?) Tell us another story? *tabs back for more*
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So freaking proud of Seth. I was wondering, at the end of the previous chapter, ‘Where TF is Seth?’ The flashback sequence that answered my question was fantastic.
