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    Part 5 - End

    Fry commented on Krista's story chapter in Part 5 - End

    This story is fantastic! Please don't let it end here. There has to be more to this love story!🥺😭😍
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    Part 3

    Fry commented on Krista's story chapter in Part 3

    I love this story. The characters have come alive to me; especially Elias. I feel their emotions so strongly. It's a tribute to your skill as a writer that you can achieve that sometimes with only a few words of dialogue or a descriptive sentence. Please keep writing. I can't wait to read more chapters! I feel like Elias and Asher will end up saving each other.
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    Part 2

    Fry commented on Krista's story chapter in Part 2

    I'm loving this story. I can feel the despair and loneliness that the ghost boy is expressing in his talks with Asher, and it's made me cry. Please continue writing. I've become attached to this character and need to know that he finds peace.
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    I discovered this story only a few days ago and I have so enjoyed reading it! My one complaint is that I feel that the ending wrapped up the story much too quickly and that there was still much left unexplained and unfinished between the characters. Do you have plans for a followup/sequel story?
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    Good luck on your grad studies! I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story and all its twists and turns. I admit that I will be chomping at the bit eagerly awaiting each successive chapter. The characters have come alive for me and I hope for the best for Nic and Jake.
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    I'm suffering from a lack of good stories to read!! I hoper you have more for us to read soon.🥺
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    First Time

    Fry commented on Frank K's story chapter in First Time

    🥺 🥺🥺🥺 Will there be more? I hope so. It's a great storyline and it would be a shame to abandon it.
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    Glad to see the continuing positive evolution of their relationship. They are both lowering their defences and becoming more attuned to, and considerate of, the feelings of each other and somewhat more open to acknowledging their own feelings.
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    All I can say is...Awesome. Nic is slowly realizing that Jake has feelings for him, and vice versa, and is letting his barriers down a bit at a time with Jake. He felt concern about what Jakes feelings and what Jake thought about him. I am a bit surprised that Jake wasn't one of the first called into the office given that his breakup with her was recent, her attacks on him, and the breakup was public knowledge around school. Can't wait for the next chapter! Luke can't possibly be that dense about Jake and Nic ?!? Samwell is still a bit of a mystery at this point.
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    You Complete Me

    Fry commented on Salander's story in Fiction

    Loving this story Salander. Eagerly awaiting more chapters! 😍
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    First Time

    Fry commented on Frank K's story chapter in First Time

    Any chance there will be a new chapter soon? 🥺
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    Chapter 20 - Plan B

    Fry commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Plan B

    great chapter. but another cliffhanger??!! AHHHHHH. 😁
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    Chapter 19 - Crystal

    Fry commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Crystal

    What do we know about Samwell so far? The possible re-introduction of Amos into the story could be really helpful in getting Nic and brother away from the toxic mother permanently.
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    Part 5 - End

    Fry commented on Krista's story chapter in Part 5 - End

    This story is too beautiful to end like this !!🥺😭. Please, please continue this wonderful love story.
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    Chapter 19 - Crystal

    Fry commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Crystal

    I can't wait for the next chapter! No really, I can't wait Salander! Hurry, please! 😁
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    First Time

    Fry commented on Frank K's story chapter in First Time

    I can't wait to read the next chapter!!🥰
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    Chapter 19 - Crystal

    Fry commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Crystal

    Cliffhanger! Jake admitting to his sister he has feelings for a guy and telling her his name, bodes well for his developing relationship with Nick, and a return to family trust with his sister. I like it!🥰
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    On My Way

    Fry commented on Frank K's story chapter in On My Way

    This is an excellent story! I love stories that are about people and relationships and discovering each other, rather than just about wanking material.
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    Chapter 18 - Plan A

    Fry commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Plan A

    Very good chapter and another cliffhanger!! You're torturing me!😘🥺. I need more...soon!
  20. Fry
    For a first posting, this is a great storyline. You have a gift for character and plot development! Keep up the good work! I'm hoping for many more chapters to follow.
  21. Fry
    I can't wait for more of this story. It's great!
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