Asterios

Oh ffs! Now Justin is really ready for the nuthouse! Out of the continuous stream of idiotic things Justin keeps doing, this one must be number one by far. Letting, the one person that is the most dangerous of all for him and his family, live.... Yeah sure. I'm really starting to doubt whether I should continue reading. It's beautifully written, but the storyline is rapidly going down the drain. There is a fine line between a main character that does stupid things from time to time while being depressed, and a main character that is over the top stupid and way over the top depressed. And with all due respect, but Justin has crossed that line big time. I'm giving it a few more chapters, but if this depressed idiocy continues, that will be the end of the story for me.

My God! How stupid can you be? After the effect the visit to the Icezone gave him concerning gathering extras, he should have known to stay away from busy places. But no...let's go to the pier with it's hundreds of vampires...sounds like a good idea...

Great chapter once again. The keeping lies and secrets, especially from Taryn, are starting to get a little bit ridiculous tbh. They are supposed to be soulmates, but in reality their whole relationship is build on lies. He's trusting almost everyone with his secret, except for the few people he really can trust. Hope this gets settled soon, because it's getting annoying.

Great chapter as usual. I'm really starting to like the story. The only thing that I don't get is the constant crying of both Justin and Taryn. For Justin I get it more or less, he's a traumatised 14 year old boy, who definitely could use some good therapy. But for Taryn, a 24 year old grown man in a child's body, who's having a relationship with a 14 year old kid (that in itself is way beyond creepy), but then acting like a little cry baby all the time? That's just weird. You would expect him to be the adult in the relationship that guides the little kid, but no, he acts even more childish than the real kid. If he would act a little more mature, I think I would like the story even more. Hope they don't die of dehydration from all the crying they do 😂

No! Not the hair! 😭

Great chapter as always. I especially love that you are alluding that George will be the one that builds the house that will be the predecessor of Queen Victoria's Osborne House. That is if I'm reading well between the lines, and looking at the location of it?

Great chapter. I so hope Stefan and Jeff will be allowed to find some peace together, they certainly deserve it after all the manipulations and tantrums they had to endure from that self centered spoiled brad that JP is becoming these last few chapters. I'm actually hoping Sam won't be his next victim. Maybe he will run off with Isidore, and leave JP ending up all by himself as he deserves. This is probably the first time I enjoyed reading a story in which totally dislike the main character, but love the supporting ones. Definitely great writing Mark.