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I sort of feel bad for Andy in this chapter. He did the right thing by going to the authorities, only to find out they're aware of Mr. Black and Dante. This is true in most cases. Law enforcement usually knows who the players are in whatever game is being played, whether it be trafficking, drugs, prostitution, gun trade etc. Because they're bound by the legal system of whatever country they're in, their hands are usually tied until they can get enough evidence to make an arrest. Even then, there is no guarantee the bad guys will be convicted. My heart goes out to Matt. He has a long, hard road ahead of him. Excellent writing!

Wow. This is a really thought provoking chapter. A lot of great comments too. This particular part struck me: "Never thought they'd be sexual deviants? Perverts, monsters?" Mr. Black leaned forward. "What exactly did you think they would be?" Andrew sat in the darkened room with the obscene salesman and wondered the same thing. Reality is a harsh taskmaster. That last sentence is the absolute truth. Most people will never cross paths with the likes of a Mr. Black. For those that do, the reality of what he does can hit as hard as a semi running into a brick wall at 70mph. I think Mr. Black's words did that to Andrew. His eyes are now open to exactly what kind of people are involved in this type of business. You mentioned that your husband had to deal with these types of criminals in his work and it changed him. I have a friend who worked as a detective and he was part of a team who investigated traffickers. He lasted three years and he isn't the same person he was when we first met. I've known him over 20 years and he's better now but he says there are things that will stick with him forever. I'm glad your husband is happier now. When it comes to Mr. Black calling Andrew by his first name, I agree with @kbois, he's a man with a superiority complex. You mentioned that he must be cultured in order to deal with his clients and I agree. If he called people by there last name I would be inclined to say he's ex-military, but that's not the case. Awesome chapter!

I can't write directions down to the corner store, let alone a story of any sort. There are authors who go to extreme lengths for their art. The same is true of actors for their roles. Many of them will do drastic things, like Matthew McConaughey in Dallas Buyers Club . He lost a ridiculous amount of weight to portray his character.. to the point where he was emaciated. Great chapter.

I'm really nervous for Andrew. I hope he's not in too deep.

I'm playing catch up here. Real life has gotten busy lately. But on a positive note I have 4 chapters to read. Yay! Matt is in deep doodoo right about now. I'm scared for him. There seems to be a lot more to this Dante guy too. I wonder if he'll end up helping Matt out in some way?

I've read some of @kbois stories and you're right, she is an excellent writer and so are you. I'm glad to hear you say you're not adverse to killing off a character when it's part of your plan. I can see there is a difference in your style and it works so well for this story. I've never written anything other than papers for school or proposals for work, but I imagine that it's not easy. This is one of the best stories I've come across in a while. Thank you for sharing!

I'm definitely hooked. Not too many authors draw me in with the first chapter. Well done @Mikiesboy!

I've been looking for a story with some intrigue and suspense. This fits the bill perfectly! I'm a bit scared for Matt. As this is the first chapter I don't see it going well for him. Andy has piqued my interest too. I can't wait to get to the next chapter!

OMG! What a beautiful ending to this chapter. they cried, not for the loss of the shadow shifter but with gratitude for everything he gave them from the afterlife. Kage would live on forever. This brought tears to my eyes! I'm so happy for the four of them. Ashton and Austin will make great doctors. Tyler's family is part of the pack and they fit right in. Super ending!

Oops.. I almost forgot. You connections to your other stories is amazing. Kage continues to take care of those who are important to Elijah. Long live the shadow shifter!❤❤❤❤

OMFG! What an incredible swan song of an ending. Caleb an Vann's reconciliation was beautiful. I cried when Silas died. Not many authors can make me do that. It was a perfect chapter to end the Hybrid Journey series. I need to read it again. It was just that good. Thank you for this Christmas gift and safe travels to you and your family.

Holy Mother of Pearl... what an incredulous, fucking fantastic chapter. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! Bravo @kbois, bravo.

Holy dirty kitty litter Batman! My fingernails won't survive this week. Fantastic chapter, filled with lots of little details. I swear, you are one of a handful of authors who make me feel like I'm in the thick of things. Saturday can't come soon enough! Ugh. My break is almost over. I spent the whole thing on this chapter. Oh... I totally agree with you @kbois, FSU got screwed over in a big way.

Oh good gracious! I'm nervous and scared for them. The battle is going to be intense. They don't know exactly how many of these creatures Huntington has. I hope Enya can handle them all. This is the best chapter. Your writing always amazes me with your descriptions. This made me laugh: Asa let out a sigh. “Great, our success depends on Tinkerbell.” Reilly snickered. “Be careful, or she’ll sprinkle glittery pixie dust on you.” Caleb flapped his arms. “I can fly! I can fly!” I hope Tink can help them! Wow... I'm the first reader comment. HA!

I knew just by reading this it was going to be an amazing chapter. I got chills. Darkness can take many forms. It can be the shroud beneath which nightmares lurk. It can be a cloak in which to hide from who or whatever might be looking for you. There is the gloominess of a room with the shades pulled that eases the blinding pain of a migraine. Crepuscule is the approach of night and the arrival of the creatures that thrive in its environment. Dawn is the quiet moment before the witching hour loses its grip on the advent of daylight. I'm concerned about these new monsters. They need to ensure they can keep everyone safe. If I were Sebastian, I wouldn't want them anywhere near my territory. I hope @Mrsgnomie is OK.

This chapter goes to prove what an incredible author you are. The little details make me feel like I'm right there with Caleb. The scent of his mate hit him like fresh-baked cookies when you opened the oven door. The agony of despair doubled him over as he staggered against their bed. A sob tore its way from his throat. He shook with fear at the thought of never seeing his mate again. Burying his face in Asa’s pillow, Caleb poured out his anguish and frustration, bawling into the soft material that held Asa’s unique smell of ozone and wintergreen. Even though this is Caleb's story, the small things mentioned about the other characters reminds us that this is part of a bigger picture. Hunter snickered. “They tried pawning the cats off on us. Our wolves shut that down pretty quickly. Nah, all the animals are in the barn. Vann and his buddies are there nearly every day. The barn manager has trained the dog and horses to help herd the cattle. The cats keep the rodent population in check.” Caleb sighed and slouched in his seat. “I’ve missed out on a lot.” I also notice how you tie the stories together and complete the continuity. I don't remember if it was Spirit Wolves or Shadow Effect but I think it was Rosalie who explained how Reillys Kappa status came with an ingrained need to take care if others. You showed that perfectly in this chapter. Kudos.

OMG... WHERE'S @Mrsgnomie?????

Oh hell no! I'm going to go out on a limb and go against the tide. Caleb is not completely to blame. Asa FREAKING AGREED WITH THE IDEA!!!! I truly believe that if Asa said 'no' Caleb would have dropped the plan like a hot potato. Also, Huntington is crafty. I don't think there's a mole, but I think someone on the fae side of the Veil is playing games. It's more likely Puck or Brioc is behind the families stonewalling. @drsawzall Caleb's heart has always been in the right place.

The interactions between Caleb and Asa just keep getting better and better. It's all your little nuances that make them so loveable. The set scene was super hot! I am now worried about Germany. Too many variables to account for. Not good. I do have to admit though, I could clearly picture this: Instead of being a warm, fuzzy smile, it was a carbon copy of the smile the Grinch got in that kid’s Christmas movie.

I don't know. I've got a funny feeling our author isn't done hitting us with surprises. I think she's been holding back and the rest of the story is going to be one whammy after another. It would be just like her. “What do you two have up your sleeves?” Corbin inquired. He was really directing this to @kbois and @Mrsgnomie.

I found four definitions for the word 'priceless' having a value beyond any costly because of rarity or quality having worth in terms of other than market value delightfully amusing, odd, or absurd I think we can all agree it's the last one that fits our author best.

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I forgot. Our talented author is featured twice this week:

I will be sad when they take them off the menu. I think I was first in line when they dropped those bad boys into the lineup. So freaking good!

I'm not sure how you can keep cranking out such great chapters, but don't stop! I'm impressed that Asa was able to heal as many as he did. Not only did he take care of whatever physical stuff they had going on, he made sure they were okay mentally too. His sense of empathy is wonderful. The dynamic between Caleb and Asa is so fun to see. I love how they're so playful with each other. It's nice to see Caleb joking around. And the way he took care of Asa? 🥰 The humor apple doesn't fall far the tree: Vann looked up from his book and quipped, “You don’t need a party, but you’re gonna get a party.” Little shit. Lol. Speaking of the party. Cheesy Air Supply? They were the cheesiest. But Sandi and Mama pulled off a great shindig. Until the end. You. Are. Not. Nice. Argh... at least Saturday is close!