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Chapter 1 Darts of Destiny
Alexmugs commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 1 Darts of Destiny
I'm loving this whole game show theme! There's so many to choose from. I can't wait to see what you two come up with. -
I'm all in. Where can I get a pair of those pajama pants. And is it just me or does anyone else pronounce Wythuf's name like Why The #u€k?
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Merry Christmas everyone!
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Wow! @kbois has written a fantastic story that will grip you right from the start. It delves deeper into the issues first brought to our attention in Spirit Wolves. (A must-read before starting this). Tears is the operative word for this story. Tears of joy, tears of sadness, tears of frustration, loss, anger, anticipation and damn near every other emotion will have you turning page after page. Well written, excellent pacing and characters you immediately connect with make this as good as any best-seller on the NY Times list. Hop to it! Go read!
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Wow! Just absolute wow! I recently found this site and you are the first author I started reading. I've read a few other stories in between chapters but nothing has come close to Spirit Wolves and Shadow Effect. I can't wait for the next book!! Did I mention the word wow yet? You had me hooked from the first chapter of Spirit Wolves. I haven't cried so much reading a book since I was a kid and Lassie came crawling into the schoolyard to meet her boy. Yes, I'm on team doggo. Fantastic job! I wish I could recommend more than once. I'll go review now if I can figure out how. Thank you so much for sharing your characters with us.
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If you enjoy a funny, well written tale starring the Devil, this is for you. Lucifer might have met his match in Gabriel’s six year old nephew!
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Another great chapter! So much going on. I'm convinced Huntington is going to try something when Sebastian least expects it. I'm with @kbois, cats can't be trusted. Ashton and Austin are typical brothers. They've probably acted like that all their lives. I want front row seats to the cook-off between Mama and Sandi. My money is on Mama. Italian and Mexican? That's like winning the culinary genetics lottery!
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I love the little moments at the beginning of the chapter, like when Tyler smoothed back Austin's hair. A simple touch like that wasn't possible when they first met. Even the simple domestic things like enjoying a cup of coffee together. It's these little details that make you a great writer. The whole chapter was one big step forward. Until you steered us toward the cliff and pushed us off. Saturday can't get here soon enough!
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Wow! What a great chapter. I love how we get to see what Ashton is feeling. The reunion with his mom and dad had me in tears. I feel bad for Caleb. He seems so sad. I can't imagine what the twins must have gone thru. They automatically tried to strip down in the doctor's office. It's scary to think what they had to do to survive. The lollipop thing was so cute! Such a typical mom reaction. The part that got me the most was the end when Ashton said he was where he belonged ❤ Thanks for an awesome chapter!
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Hi! I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story. I read the first one and couldn't wait to start on this one. I wish I could do more reactions, but I guess when you're new it's limited? My boyfriend and I read the comments together and you guys have us rolling! Paranormal stories are my kryptonite. Especially shifters. You've put such a unique spin on it, it's phenomenal. Please don't stop! ❤ Mugs
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