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This was an eye-opening chapter for Matt. He's making some great strides in his therapy and is on the path to becoming his own person. He's proving to his boss that he's a reliable employee, something that is increasingly rare nowadays. He's learned how to manage Gwen as it appears she is food motivated (Chinese food earlier and muffins this time, plus is sounds like Matt does most of the meal planning, shopping and cooking) His biggest conundrum is Andy and what to do about him. I'm not sure Matt is anywhere near ready for a relationship but I will trust the author and the process. It's been reliable so far.
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This chapter was interesting. It shows that Matt is in a transitional period. He's moving forward, slowly, and has to deal with multiple issues-- his mom, a new job and having his past come back to haunt him. A therapist is exactly what he needs. I hope Maria Flores is a good match and can help him sort his head out. He obviously still has Andy and Windy Island on his mind as evidenced by his dream. I can't wait for the final chapters! Also... what happened @kbois? You weren't first commenting today.
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I enjoyed this story. It held my interest and was well written. Now I need a cruise vacation. I'm not Yacht Club material but I will shell out the money for a balcony.
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I sort of picture her as bananas. With a bunch of colored sprinkles thrown on top.
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Well, overall I think the story was okay, but the execution missed the mark. It could have been much better with some dialogue to convey the deep-rooted connection the two friends have. As it is, it's rather dry with mostly telling and little showing. My other issue is probably just me, but the quoted lyrics for Forever Young is the Rod Stewart version. He got Dylan's blessing to record this version (for a percentage of the profits of course) Dylan's version is similar. Stewart, I believe, rewrote the original version for his daughter if I remember correctly. I like his version better.
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This was easier to follow than the previous two sci-fi stories. Not too bad considering the genre, but I feel the author needs to brush up on technique.
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This is another one I found difficult to read. Sci-fi really isn't my best subject.
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I tried to get through this but it's just not my groove. Sorry secret author.
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Very well written but too sad for my taste. I know not everything can have a happily ever after, but we can hope.
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This was a really nice feel-good story. Jason has just begun his journey of figuring things out. He's got a great group of friends as a support system.
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I found this hard to follow and it took me a good chunk of time to get through it. Not my first choice of genre but it was interesting.
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This was a good story but on a really weird way. It took a few tries before I could comprehend what was going on. Overall, a decent read for a lazy Sunday afternoon.
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Whoa. I laughed my way through this one. Unlike some other commenters, I didn't focus on Noah and Liams relationship. I felt it was more of just background information to the plot. The real deal was the friendship that blossomed between Noah and Kiara. Those two are the ultimate friendship goals. I would love to do a road trip like this someday and include Canada too. Amazing job Secret Aurhor!
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Three words: awesome, awesome, awesome! This is a beautiful love story with a straight twist! Excellent writing. I felt Blue's emotions as he discovered himself and his love for Bea. Thank you Secret Author!
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Oh! I did enjoy this. Just enough angst and anxiety over a missing kitten to keep my attention. A dog wouldn't deliberately do that to anyone. They bring people together with their silliness and puppy eyes.
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I have no clue who wrote this but I enjoyed the tale. It was a fun and sweet story. My fingers are crossed for Nilus and Max.
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I agree that Matt has to work on himself before anything else. Admittedly, Gwen isn't the best mother. Not everyone is cut out for it. I have a couple of friends who, quite honestly, I'm surprised even exist. Neither has a maternal figure who could remotely be called mom. At least Gwen recognizes her shortcomings in the motherhood department and is willing to look beyond that in order to support Matt the only way she knows how-- by giving him a roof over his head and a lead on a job. Andy has offered an olive branch. I think he knows there currently is no hope for any kind of attachment from Matt. He's merely planted the seed for something to grow in the future. We'll have to do an @kbois and trust the process and see if it's going to be friendship or something more. Terrific chapter!
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Matt definitely needed this closure. Hopefully he can now do a little sightseeing, maybe with the taxi driver while he decides on his next step. I think he always knew that he and Ahmet were not going to have happily ever after. Now that I'm caught up, it's time to start in on the Secret Author stories. I'm glad I have the weekend off!
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This broke my heart: Does it matter if it’s not okay? Matthew sat down in the chair to the right of the government representative. "Okay. Hello, Ms. Coleson." It's a clear testament to Matt's frame of mind and his vulnerability. Even though he knows he's not okay, he realizes that he is the only one who will now decide his future. I've got my fingers crossed.
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This chapters gave me mixed emotions. I'm angry that Matt has been put into a situation that he doesn't know how to navigate. I'm grateful that Maeve has taken him under her wing. I'm hopeful that Andy will step up and put whatever feelings he has for Matt aside and help him stand on his own two feet so he can figure out his next steps. Great chapter!
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Wow... that's like a chihuahua giving birth to a Great Dane. Props to your mom. My mom didn't wield a broom, but she had lethal aim with her slippers. Lol.
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I can't imagine what poor Matt is feeling. It must be like being thrown into a new school or job without any preparation. He's lost a few years of his life and will never get them back. Now he has to navigate a world that might not look favorably on him. I hope Andrew can help. Maeve will settle him for now.
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I've not much to add to what's been said. I have some catching up to do. Work has been crazy busy and I'm too tired when I get home to do much of anything. I'm absolutely loving this story!
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I think knowingly doing something illegal such as what Andy did is perfectly understandable. I think most people with any sort of conscious would do the same if they had the means. Also I think speeding falls under that saying close only counts in horseshoes and grenades. Speeding only counts if you get caught. I'm glad Andy has enlisted his dad's help. I'm looking forward to Matt's reaction when he realizes he's free.
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This is what I would consider a great transitional chapter. Andy is moving on with his life and trying to figure things out. It shows that growth is possible for him. Matt has made the most of a bad situation and found solace in Ahmet's arms. Is it the brightest idea? Of course not. It's dangerous and they both know it.
