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Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
Omg boing!!!!! -
No wonder I was so confused.. clearly this Ali’s a sequel to another series so before I get further into this really cute story, where should I start first???
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Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
Is it sad that I feel I’ve grown so attached to the characters in this story that I want more? What happens next??? -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
Ok maybe every couple weeks 😂 -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
To me, it isn’t about the sex. I don’t think it is for you either because you didn’t add to much of it in the story. Honestly, I think you added just enough because that’s what real life is. Ppl get this stereotype that teen gay sex is all the time. Oh whatever. That is NOT how it happens. That’s now how any of it happens. Anybody who isn’t a whore is lucky to get a bj once a month 😂 -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
Even “sanitized “ it’s worth doing even without the sex because the portrayal of Zack’s mentality is so spot on of what it is like..dude..let the imaginations take care of the sex. It can be inferred all the way. Nobody has done the struggle better than what you’ve written. -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
Comsie, I discovered the YouTube trailer for this story and I must say it’d be perfectly casted. Have you ever seriously looked at adapting it to a screenplay and trying to get it made made into a film? -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
This needs to be made into a film. I said what I said. Change NOTHING. -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
God. Damn. Onions. That’s all I got left. -
MORE!!!! Ugh
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Dammit stop making me cry! 😭
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No words. None. I can’t even breathe right now
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Wait!! Something isn’t right! That was an awfully odd comment from his father about him missing his hw. He knows something. Watch out Zack!!!
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Omg yes turn that paper in! I hope the teacher acts on it. Yes also I agree that the friends shouldve called the cops then. Oh and Sam is a cutie and sweetheart
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I absolutely loved the way Brody brought both him and Zack out of the closet to Adam. It’s a pity Sam wasn’t there to see it although I’m sure it’s coming . Now is the time to involve the cops and Zack’s mom
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He needs to and let Zack forgive him later.
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Me too
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Jesus you had ME almost hyperventilating as Zack struggled to escape his apartment. Adam better come through.
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Com, im late at discovering this series and this site but whatever. I’m really truly heartbroken over what happened bt Zack and Brody. I hope they mend. I hope Brody realizes Zach doesn’t realize what he’s doing and I hope Brody finds a way to not break his promise to Zack and get him help bc at this point he needs serious therapy..the kind I had for 6 yrs straight every week kinda therapy. Zack is borderline suicidal right now and does t even know it but I do. I’ve been there. This is all too familiar. Zack’s pos father has brainwashed him with his negativity so much it wouldn’t take much
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You too? Dammit. Hugs and love. Sigh 😔
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I was waiting for something to trigger him. That’s exactly what it’s like
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OMG YES THIS above is SPOT ON. Abused kids are experts and building fortresses around themselves and the author has portrayed it perfectly.
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I’ve had teachers like Mr. Raffe in high school and what I discovered is that they saw potential. Some push me to better like Raffe is Zack, more so than other students. Other teachers didn’t. Maybe that’s what’s going on here and Zack is blind to it bc of the abuse from his father and he feels threatened by his teacher sort of the same way at least verbally. I’m not sure Mr Raffe handled Zack’s announcement of his intentions correctly. Idk. It’s something to ponder I suppose. The important thing here is Zack stood up for himself. Love that
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Half way through that alley conversation I wanted to scream at Brody for Zack “DON’T YOU GET IT?! I DON’T KNOW HOW TO LET YOU HELP ME!! I don’t know how…” all I ever wanted was someone like Brodie to just bury my face into their shoulders and let them lead me away from the hell I was living at their age. 13-16 was hell for me. But then, Brody held his hand the whole way through the front doors…oh my heart..
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Abuse does so much more damage emotionally under surface and the way the author shows it in Zack’s frame of mind is perfect. The doubt, the extremely high anxiety and adrenaline, the self hate, the persistence of self denial of positive things in his life like the clear love and worry the other boys have for him each in their own way..and his mother too..Zack clearly doesn’t see it and at this point things can go either way. They can heal him or the relationships can deteriorate completely. You are so damn good at this man.
