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Chapter 5: "Tempted By The Blond One"
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 5: "Tempted By The Blond One"
Even then it was good. For me I think what appeals to me most is how you build a character’s vulnerability. I can relate to that so much. -
Chapter 5: "Tempted By The Blond One"
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 5: "Tempted By The Blond One"
I’d have said yes you are -
Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
You tease me. I’ll bite. Vampire 🧛♂️ -
Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
You tease me. I’ll bite. Vampire 🧛♂️ -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
Reading New Kid right now and I will move to Kiss after. On the Outside I might’ve read on nifty. I’ll probably read it again. I get the other characters but Zack was perfect. I’d love to see perhaps a new story with him as a sequel or off shoot from another line from one of the boys. I guess I just related to him so well idk. I’ll hunt for Save. Thx -
Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
Gotta agree with Dhalia on the romantic stories. The paranormal and horror themes don’t draw my interest in the slightest…but these boy love stories…I love them and struggle with them due to my own trauma from what I experienced at their age that they’re experiencing. It’s hard to explain. But do not stop. Please. -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
MORE of Zack is demanded! Sorry, this cutie is a heart breaker and I just ..sigh… I’m hooked I can’t help it. -
Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
Omg boing!!!!! -
No wonder I was so confused.. clearly this Ali’s a sequel to another series so before I get further into this really cute story, where should I start first???
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Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
Is it sad that I feel I’ve grown so attached to the characters in this story that I want more? What happens next??? -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
Ok maybe every couple weeks 😂 -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
To me, it isn’t about the sex. I don’t think it is for you either because you didn’t add to much of it in the story. Honestly, I think you added just enough because that’s what real life is. Ppl get this stereotype that teen gay sex is all the time. Oh whatever. That is NOT how it happens. That’s now how any of it happens. Anybody who isn’t a whore is lucky to get a bj once a month 😂 -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
Even “sanitized “ it’s worth doing even without the sex because the portrayal of Zack’s mentality is so spot on of what it is like..dude..let the imaginations take care of the sex. It can be inferred all the way. Nobody has done the struggle better than what you’ve written. -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
Comsie, I discovered the YouTube trailer for this story and I must say it’d be perfectly casted. Have you ever seriously looked at adapting it to a screenplay and trying to get it made made into a film? -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
This needs to be made into a film. I said what I said. Change NOTHING. -
Chapter 40 (Part Two)
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40 (Part Two)
God. Damn. Onions. That’s all I got left. -
MORE!!!! Ugh
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Dammit stop making me cry! 😭
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No words. None. I can’t even breathe right now
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Wait!! Something isn’t right! That was an awfully odd comment from his father about him missing his hw. He knows something. Watch out Zack!!!
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Omg yes turn that paper in! I hope the teacher acts on it. Yes also I agree that the friends shouldve called the cops then. Oh and Sam is a cutie and sweetheart
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I absolutely loved the way Brody brought both him and Zack out of the closet to Adam. It’s a pity Sam wasn’t there to see it although I’m sure it’s coming . Now is the time to involve the cops and Zack’s mom
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He needs to and let Zack forgive him later.
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Me too
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Jesus you had ME almost hyperventilating as Zack struggled to escape his apartment. Adam better come through.
