SilentandBroken
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Yes! I bet he has ask permission to use the bathroom from his father and the response is “be quick”. I already hate him
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Same. I am hooked. I love how he describes that feeling of nervous shyness and attraction. It’s subtle yet so on point. Just ..sigh.
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Well there was this one boy…that was so into fitness and sports at like 12-14 he had a flawless chest and six pack. Lighter skin that had softness look to it. I just wanted to constantly stroke it. He had braces a while, then one day just a retainer. His lips looked so soft and he had a small very faint smattering of freckles under his sky blue eyes that I noticed went nearly navy blue at times. His hair was almost a chestnut brown and looked so soft too. He kept it in a side part and had a natural set . God he was beautiful.- 1 reply
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Chapter 1: Nick - 17 years old.
SilentandBroken commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 1: Nick - 17 years old.
But did he? If it truly was him body checking Nick, maybe he’s not. There’s history here we’re about to learn I think and I don’t think it’s good history. -
Chapter 2: First Sunday
SilentandBroken commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 2: First Sunday
Well shit. SOMEBODY is jealous 😂. My how the plot has already twisted. -
Chapter 1: The Punishment
SilentandBroken commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Punishment
Ok hooked. Great start. I love how he came out to his parents & they supported him -
Brave of Mitch. The way he looked at Peter has me thinking crush. Yay Peter! Boneheaded behavior from Carl. Wise behavior from Tom. Glad to see Coach has a level head. Pity Peter didn’t dislodge Carl’s tooth. For his sake, he’s lucky his head didn’t catch the lock catch. That would’ve been more damaging naturally. Head wounds bleed a lot but it sounds like a laceration and minor concussion. I was right that Peter should’ve watching his back. Things are really going to get interesting now. Carl really isn’t going to quit.
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Sigh Neanderthals and followers are in every high school. Proud of the confidence change. I worry the uncle might be right. The boy can hold his own 1:1, but his odds can change with more numbers against him. He might want to be looking over his shoulder
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In my hunt for something new to read, i discovered your story. Man the mother was a piece of work. By the commentary, your mother was horrendous too. I’m sorry you experienced this and for the loss of your father. She doesn’t deserve the family she birthed. I’m glad you found freedom. I have a highly critical mother too but nothing like this. At times I have to force myself to not respond to when she’s on her high horse again. If it isn’t being critical, she’s guilt tripping me. I see through it now however.
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Well if you want to keep readers on edge don’t change that beautiful mind and run with in once in a while. Why not? 😂
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This was a good story. You certainly could have take. Jason down a dark path after Adam’s lies and gone further but you didn’t need to. It was an enjoyable read
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well sometimes you just got to roll up those sleeves 😉
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I’m ok with this wrap up. I would’ve liked to see the end when Jason screws his parents over but it’s fine without.
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Well that went about as soft as I expected. I half wondered if there was more to Adam’s story than he was letting on. I don’t blame Jason for being pissed. He handled it correctly. I think I might’ve been a little harder to win back than he was however. But the again, I have severe trust issues so there’s that.
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As expected. I hope Jason is truly pissed enough to do what needs doing.
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I’m still waiting for Elias to become a posted story 🤪
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Ok confession time. Yes I still stare bc honestly why are the guys who work as transportation assistants in the hospitals always like super cute and hot?! Oh that’s be that age again sigh
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As it is, I’m 10 chapters in to a 12 chapter story plus an epilogue.
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That was their loss imo. Each story I’ve read has a life of its own. I don’t think it did any of them justice to compare them to each other. I’ve said before your character building is excellent. My only frustration is that, with all your stories, they end to wrap up just as I’m really getting vested in the characters and want to see the story continue but I get why you don’t. Just to write this much is a lot of work.
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But yes I did have those experiences early on and it was not safe to act on them in public. Not back then. Not with that school.
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I doubt he’s even gay tbh
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Hell I still catch myself with a guy at work. I’m too chicken to act on it though. He may have caught once or twice and maybe suspects but we’re all waay too busy to catch each other privately to interact. Oh well.
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That is so sweet.
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Exactly. Like they’re beneath having someone, one of their children to have a handicap and view it as a defect. Disgusting.
