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Omg so hot and Ariel is so cute, Tyler such a gentleman…but I wanna see Ariel fuck Tyler. I want Ariel on top…yum😋

If only I had a Gramms back at Ariel’s age. Sigh…I feel like the shock of the discovery for Gramms a few chapters back was a disappointment but that disappointment was not stronger than her desire to see her grandson happy…truly happy.

It’s all cool man. I just ..idk I thought maybe I’d seen some of these faces before but I don’t watch a lot of tv so idk ..most I haven’t.

Shit I’M as stiff as rebar right now with anticipation. How the hell do you write so well? It’s as if I AM Ariel. The nerves and second guessing and overthinking thinking and ..just all of it. I was literally this nervous little lonely kid as a freshman who couldn’t take his eyes off the soccer stud a yr above me. Adonis he was for sure.

Oh I get it cut and paste kinda deals not made specifically for your stories. Bugger

I’ll have to check it out

Oooooooommmmgggggggg soooo hot!!! Ariel is just too friggin CUTE

For me it’s a close toss up between Zach in My Only Escape and Randy here. If I met someone like this back in high school…sigh….it only..life would’ve been so different

How do I find these little films???

Omg they are sooo cute together . Well written.

I haven’t read that book yet so I don’t know Brandon. I’m proud of you for standing up for yourself and refusing to be a victim. Peace to you. I hope you find your Ryan one day. I hope it’s soon.

Ok just caught up on New Kid omg so good. Now on to chapter 2 of Ariel’s story

Ok I’ve figured out how to follow. Now on to Kiss.

Omg Ariel!!! Stoooooooopppp!! Ugh!! How do I follow this story?! I’m at the end!! Cosmie!!! Finish it please!!

My first thought as Randy when Sean spoke “Ugh you again? Troll..”

Oooooooommmmmmmmmgggggggg you had ME DAMN near hyperventilating with nerves!! Now I MUST see all these movies off these stories bc these little trailers aren’t cutting it. Such a damn tease to my heart. How do I find them?

Being brothers in affliction only magnifies my appreciation of your heart and mind my man. Stay true.

Ok first of all, a few chapters back Comi, in the comments you said you wondered if ppl didn’t care bc they didn’t comment at the end of a chapter. That is absolutely not true, at least for me anyway. Sometimes I simply don’t have anything to say. Sometimes your writing is so relatable to my personal story that I can’t say anything and other times I can’t NOT. This is one of those times. You have captured the beautiful struggle and internal emotional battle of someone who’s been tormented by their emotions so well it’s like I’m reliving it vicariously through your words. You’ve written Randy so well. Omg he is soooo cute and so precious I can’t help but want to love on him. Idk maybe it’s bc my high school dynamics had similar scenes. Whatever the reason, to me, you’ve done it. God damn he is so sweet. I taste every kiss he gets I swear and it makes me JEALOUS bc I want more! I’ve always wanted someone like a Ryan. A little brash and daring sexy and just..ugh… sigh….my life is drastically different and that’s ok. I’ll live my dream through your words. Just. Don’t. Stop. Please.

Sweet chapter. I totally get and would act the same way Randy does with both Ryan’s continued friendship with Sean and as well as Randy’s mom. I think Sean still has his grip on Ryan’s mind . Although this is the first time we’ve heard about cell phones and txt’s etc, granted this story has been written over quite some time while the chronology of the timeline is only about 8-9 months.I definitely do not think Sean will go away easily. That’s just simply not how narcissists act. That said, I think Ryan has good intentions with Randy. Dinner was productive and a good move on Ryan’s part to help Randy build his courage and come out. More of that is needed me thinks.

Dammit Cosmie!!!! You did it AGAIN!!! You and friggin’ cliff hangers!! I was gonna put this down for a bit for a break after reading like 4 chapters straight but noooooo you won’t let me! 😂

Part of me get irritated with Randy just fly out saying to Ryan that it isn’t that he doesn’t trust Ryan, rather he doesn’t trust Sean. It also irritates me that Ryan cuts off any explanation Randy tries to give. Almost as if Ryan doesn’t care to hear it armed with either an excuse for Sean or a deflection of what Randy does get to say. How can Randy be honest with Ryan if Ryan never truly gives him a chance nor listens to what Randy says?

"You want to know what it's like to date Sean? It SUCKS! He's not smart, or funny, or sympathetic. He's about as selfish as he can be. A class A narcissist. called it. Sean can go fuck a goat

Actually I’d think Randy is. His heart is in the right place. Ryan ..is learning however so that’s a plus

Damn onions…that conversation on the sidewalk had me tearing up. And then Hailey.. oh shit