andrewj

I am liking the way this story is going. The one thing I don't understand is Nicos strength level. Seems to me that he is a fairly weak magus.

I have read many of your stories, especially on your own site, and with only a few exceptions I have enjoyed them all. I am really really liking this one. Please keep up the good writing. Thank you

This is getting very interesting, like Dante I am curious what the lube is for. And who is Frank.

Definitely twisted

You have a very twisted mind man. That was totally engrossing and freaky at the same time.

I agree, crappy cliffhanger

That reminds me of when my mom passed, Thank you

I don't like Charlotte

Yes, It will be interesting to see where this storyline goes.

A promising beginning to a new story. Thank you, keep writing

Looking forward to the epilogue for this book. Can't wait to read more. Keep writing this is totally engrossing. Thank you for your writing

I love your whole series. Keep up the amazing work. It seems me that this series of stories is going to keep you busy for a long time. Love it all. Thank you for your writing.

This is getting really gritty. I am enjoying the storyline so far.

Thank you for the update on the floor plan. Looks like my kind of house. Love the fact that Kai got cranky when he didn't get a regular letter. That tells you something about his feelings for Adam. Keep up the writing I love this story.

I agree with the above comments and second them. A first floor floor plan would also be a nice touch. Looking forward to the next chapter.